-----/// Paas mere aayaa naa karo /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 03, 2012, 01:26:28 PM
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humein aadat hai andheron ki, humein roshni se jalaayaa naa karo,
hum khush hai apni tanhaayion me, tum ghadi ghadi aayaa naa karo,

humein aadat hai thokron ki, tum humein seene se lagaayaa naa karo,
kaanton pe sone ki aadat hai, sej meri phoolon se sajaayaa naa karo....

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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 01:57:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob hriday jee.

Itne kam shabdo me bahut kuch kah diya aapne. kya baat hai..
kahne ka andaaj to aapka niraala hai hee.
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 01:31:52 AM »
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Bohut Khoooob Hriday jee , bohut umda ,
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 03:37:22 AM »
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hriday ji kamaal kar diyaa chaar panktiyon men badaahi ho
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 10:00:52 AM »
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bahut khoob, kya alfaaz hain aur kya andaaz hai, bahut khoob Hriday Ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 09:12:36 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 11:36:47 PM »
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bahut badhiya hirdayji
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2012, 09:59:03 AM »
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very nice Hriday ji.
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2012, 10:00:39 AM »
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humein aadat hai andheron ki, humein roshni se jalaayaa naa karo,
hum khush hai apni tanhaayion me, tum ghadi ghadi aayaa naa karo,

humein aadat hai thokron ki, tum humein seene se lagaayaa naa karo,
kaanton pe sone ki aadat hai, sej meri phoolon se sajaayaa naa karo....

*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2012, 12:26:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... !!!

Bahut khoob hriday jee.

Itne kam shabdo me bahut kuch kah diya aapne. kya baat hai..
kahne ka andaaj to aapka niraala hai hee.
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2012, 12:12:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Aarish ji....!!!

Bohut Khoooob Hriday jee , bohut umda ,
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2012, 10:12:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.... waise kahaan busy hain kuch din se... dikhaai nahi diye....!!!

hriday ji kamaal kar diyaa chaar panktiyon men badaahi ho
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2012, 02:41:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Amit ji....!!!

bahut khoob, kya alfaaz hain aur kya andaaz hai, bahut khoob Hriday Ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2012, 02:42:55 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Hriday Ji !!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2012, 01:15:59 PM »
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thanks a lot Sps ji....!!!

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