-----/// Mohabbat nibhaane aayaa hoon ///----- Hriday

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ret  pe  naam   likh  ke  mitaataa  thaa
aaj  kuch   alag  kaam  kar aayaa hoon
jis  ret   pe  naam  likhaa   thaa  uskaa
us  ret  ko  main  ghar  le  aayaa hoon

shaayad  is  dil  ko  aaraam   miley  ab
main  sirf  yahi  soch  ke  aayaa  hoon
mere  toote   dil  ke  tukdon ko, main
haathon mein uthaa  ke  laayaa hoon

mujhe  aashiq  kaho  yaa kaho paagal
main  to  dil   ko  lutaane aayaa hoon
tasveer  ko  uske  seene  se  lagaa  ke
aaj  ek waadaa nibhaane aayaa hoon

ise junoon kaho yaa  kaho mohabbat
main  fir  se  kuch  gaane aayaa hoon
har  ghazal  apni  usi  ke  naam  karke
mehfil mein  gungunaane aayaa hoon

jo   aaj  tak  kisi   se  naa  keh paayaa
woh main sabko bataane aayaa hoon
elaan - e- chaahat  mehfil  mein karke
main mohabbat nibhaane aayaa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2013, 01:19:03 AM »
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bahut khoob kapil dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2013, 02:33:03 AM »
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superlike... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2013, 02:36:36 AM »
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................................ my reply is pending kp..... jald hi continue karungi
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2013, 02:52:44 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2013, 05:03:49 AM »
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shandaar bhai bahot khooob Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2013, 09:19:02 AM »
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wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2013, 01:04:09 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaah hridayji. bahut hi pyaare ehsaas rahe is rachna mein. ek dam dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh rachna. hazaron dili daad...
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2013, 02:34:02 PM »
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वाह....क्या बात है ह्रदय जी, बहुत खूब... वैसे तो पूरा कलाम ही ग़ज़ब हा है पर

ret  pe  naam   likh  ke  mitaataa  thaa
aaj  kuch   alag  kaam  kar aayaa hoon
jis  ret   pe  naam  likhaa   thaa  uskaa
us  ret  ko  main  ghar  le  aayaa hoon

इस सोच के लिए खास तौर पर ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2013, 04:18:37 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ret  pe  naam   likh  ke  mitaataa  thaa
aaj  kuch   alag  kaam  kar aayaa hoon
jis  ret   pe  naam  likhaa   thaa  uskaa
us  ret  ko  main  ghar  le  aayaa hoon

waah waah waah... bahut bahut bahut khoob hriday ji.. Usual Smile
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2013, 05:05:15 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2013, 01:29:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 01:30:52 PM »
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thank u sooo much Nishi ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 01:31:26 PM »
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main wait kar rahaa hoon Kasak ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 01:32:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rajan ji....!!!

wha wha bhut khub
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