““ pehchaan nahi ”” nir

by nirala on April 02, 2011, 10:28:42 AM
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uska koi naam nahi
uski koi pehchaan nahi

woh hai ek farista
jise hota koi gumaan nahi

na hota kabhi udaas woh
apno me bhi, hota jab shumaar nahi

zism aor ruuh to hain, maati me khile phool sa
hai woh azaad, jise hota iska khumaar nahi

woh tou parey hai, duniya ke iss chakra-vyuh se nir
jiski hoti koi pukaar nahi

““
thanx aal
””
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2011, 03:33:52 PM »
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Nirala jee Aadaab !

Janab aapke ahsaas o khayaal ki gehrai behad khoob hai..
Aapke ahsaas O khayaal par dil se daad kabool kijiye.. Usual Smile

Hume aapka yeH khayaal khoob laga janab daad Usual Smile         





na hota kabhi udaas woh
apno me bhi, hota jab shumaar nahi


““
thanx aal
””

Likhate rahiye... thoda rhyming words par dhayan dijiye rhyming words ko samjhiye.. aapke yeH ahsaas O khayaal behad nikhar kar aayeNge.. Usual Smile

Koshish jari rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2011, 03:53:17 AM »
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uska koi naam nahi
uski koi pehchaan nahi

woh hai ek farista
jise hota koi gumaan nahi

na hota kabhi udaas woh
apno me bhi, hota jab shumaar nahi

zism aor ruuh to hain, maati me khile phool sa
hai woh azaad, jise hota iska khumaar nahi

woh tou parey hai, duniya ke iss chakra-vyuh se nir
jiski hoti koi pukaar nahi

““
thanx aal
””

Good One ..... Nirala Ji !!

dil se daad ...... !!!!!
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