~Qabron main~ by Rahim

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Pata nahin kyun yeh do lines likh baitha...Bas dil kuch dabe lavson main sab kehgaya shayad...

Iss zalim duniya main sukun kahan Rahim,
Khamoshi toh qabron main hua karti hai...


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2010, 06:41:18 AM »
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        Very nice Sher Rahim ji. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2010, 09:45:58 AM »
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Shukriya Tamanna jee...
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2010, 10:18:52 AM »
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thank you
magar qabar mai sukon milta hai
agar ham dunya mai ache kam kare tu   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2010, 10:52:45 AM »
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Pata nahin kyun yeh do lines likh baitha...Bas dil kuch dabe lavson main sab kehgaya shayad...

Iss zalim duniya main sukun kahan Rahim,
Khamoshi toh qabron main hua karti hai...


~Rahim~

RAHIM SAHAB MAIN AAPKE ISS SHER SE BILKUL BHI ITTEFAQ NAHIN RAKHTA......QABAR MEIN KYAH HOGA YEH ALLAH KO MALOOM HAI AUR APNE AAMAAL PAR TIKA HAI...WAISE HUM SUB JAANTE HAIN HUM KAISE HAIN.....AUR YE EK BAHUT HI SERIOUS ISSUE HAI AAKHRAT KE POINT OF VIEW SE.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2010, 05:57:24 PM »
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sahi hai rahim ji but ye bhi to suno


kahmoshiyan to hamen kabron me nahi mili
harwaqt koi na koi aakar aansu chhod jata hai



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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2010, 08:09:28 PM »
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Shukriya Arabicgirl, Rahi jee...

hmm nice point of view Arabic girl aur Adil jee...sahi kaha Adil jee..main toh genuine point of view se dekh raha tha...ke ek insaan jisse sukun chahiye ya kahein khamoshi chahiye, toh qabron se zada khamosh kahin nahin...qabrastan ek aisi jagah hai jahan hume ehsaas hota hai ke hum bhi aise hi koi qabr ke tale main honge...
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2010, 09:53:47 PM »
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RAHIMJI!AAP KE IS SHER KO PADHTE HIEK SHAIR MERE ZAHAN ME KOUNDH GAYA.........MULAHIZA FARMAYEN....

DIL AJAB GUMBAD HAI JISME KOI KABOOTAR BHI NAHI
ITANA VEERAN TO MURDARON KA MUQADDAR BHI NAHI
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2010, 11:26:49 PM »
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bahaut achi sharing hai dost apne...
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2011, 07:47:32 AM »
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bahot khub--
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2011, 10:54:57 PM »
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bahot khub--
Shukriya Dil se dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2011, 05:33:33 PM »
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rahim ji aapne bahut gehrai wali baat likhi hai,
kamaal ka likha hai.
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Pata nahin kyun yeh do lines likh baitha...Bas dil kuch dabe lavson main sab kehgaya shayad...

Iss zalim duniya main sukun kahan Rahim,
Khamoshi toh qabron main hua karti hai...


~Rahim~
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2011, 08:12:43 PM »
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rahim ji aapne bahut gehrai wali baat likhi hai,
kamaal ka likha hai.
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Bas Suresh jee, yeh toh apni apni opinion hoti hai
kay kya acha hai aur kya nahin..Apne dil se pasand
farmaya, iske liye apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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