rahmat..........A.B

by adil bechain on October 29, 2013, 06:03:00 PM
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                           taa'sub   na   rakh   tu  kisi  shakhsiyat se...,
                           ho  na  jaaye  mahroom  khuda  ki  rahmat  se...,

                           ye  duniya  hai  iske  nezaam  ko  samjh le...,
                           aur  rakh  dil-o-dimaag ko mazeed zahmat se...,

                           tankeed-e-husn ki mokhtalif shakal liye hue...,
                           bhare  hain  ashaar ghazlo.n mein tohmat se...,

                           deewaangi jab tak  chale chalaate ja unhee.n...,
                           per dekh  rahe faasla   magar   ghaflat   se...,

                           pad gaya mahnga bechain rahna yahaan to...,
                           pahchaane hai zamaana mujhe unki shohrat se...,

                          

                          
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 06:06:58 PM »
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Veryy niceee...
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 06:07:56 PM »
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superb
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 06:23:14 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 07:15:30 PM »
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bohat khoob our acha matlaa our maqtaa bohat pasand aaya
aadil jee,........
 deewaangi jab tak  chale chalaate ja unhee.n...,
                           per dekh  rahe faasla   magar   ghaflat   se...,

                           pad gaya mahnga mujhe bechain rahna yahaan...,
                           pahchaane hai zamaana mujhe unki shohrat se...,
  .bohat c daad,...
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 07:31:16 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab...!

Waah janab bahut khoob... bade achche aur khoob khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai...

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab... par maqta behad khaas raha is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 07:32:30 PM »
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beautiful  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 07:47:46 PM »
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JUST BEAUTIFUL CREATION ab SIR
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 09:05:30 PM »
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Waaaaaah Adil ji... behad khooooooooob.. matla aur maqta dono bahut pasand aaya.. hazaron hazaron daaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 09:13:43 PM »
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 Applause
 bahut khooob , AB ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 09:31:09 PM »
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bahot khoooob, daaaad hi daaa...
pad gaya mahnga bechain rahna yahaan to...,
pahchaane hai zamaana mujhe unki shohrat se...,
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2013, 11:53:42 PM »
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Bade asardaar aashaar kahe AB ji ... dheron daad !!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 12:23:19 AM »
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waaaaaaahhhhh Adil jee..bahut khoob..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2013, 01:56:59 AM »
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taa'sub na rakh tu kisi shakhsiyat
se...,
ho na jaaye mahroom khuda ki
rahmat se...,

ye duniya hai iske nezaam ko
samjh le...,
aur rakh dil-o-dimaag ko mazeed
zahmat se...,

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2013, 02:29:49 AM »
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 tankeed-e-husn ki mokhtalif shakal liye hue...,
 bhare  hain  ashaar ghazlo.n mein tohmat se...,

Bahut khoob Adil bhai
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