rang tasveer ke.................saru.................

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ख़ामोश    रहकर   बोलते  हैं  रंग  तस्वीर के
राज़ कितने  ही  खोलते  हैं   ढंग  तस्वीर  के

एक  उम्र  लगा  के आया है  परिंदा  मंज़िल पे
तंग आसमाँ   भी   रास्ते  हैं  तंग  तस्वीर के

आँखों  में  उतरा जाए है  हाय नशा  इस  क़दर
बहकी   अदाओं  से  चूर   हैं  अंग  तस्वीर के

बुलाओ बिजलियों को जला भी दे  आशियाँ  को
आलम-ए-बरसात में  अंग  हुए  भंग तस्वीर के

ये  हालात- ओ - ख़्यालात  भी  बदल  जाएँगे
उतार  पाएगा  क्या  कोई  जंग   तस्वीर  के

खो  न  जाए ये  रंग-ओ-बू  सदाओं  की तरह
दर – ओ - दीवार पे  सजालो  रंग  तस्वीर के

दिखाए हैं  नक्श-ए-पा आने  वाली  दुनियाँ  के
यूँ चराग़-ए-रहगुज़र रही 'सॅरू' संग तस्वीर  के




Khaamosh  rehkar  bolte  hain   rang  tasveer  ke
Raaz  kitne  hi  kholte   hain   dhang  tasveer  ke

Ik umra laga ke aaya hai parinda parinda manjil pe
Tang   aasmaaN  bhi  raaste  hain  tang  tasveer  ke

Aankhon meiN utraa jaye hai haye nasha  is kadar
Behki   adaaoN  se  choor  hain  ang  tasveer ke

Bulaao  bijliyon ko jalaa  bhi   de aashiyaN  ko
Aalam-e-barsaat  meiN  ang  hue bhang tasveer ke

Ye  haalaat- o -khyaalat  bhi   badal  jaayenge
Utaar  paayega   kyaa   koi    jang   tasveer  ke

Kho  na  jaye  ye  rang-o-boo sadaaoN ki tarha
Dar-o-deewar   pe  sajaa  lo   rang   tasveer  ke

Dikhaaye  hain naksh-e-paa aane  wali dunian ke
Yun charaagerehgujar rahi ‘saru’sang tasveer ke


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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2014, 05:22:36 AM »
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Khaamosh  rehkar  bolte  hain   rang  tasveer  ke
Raaz  kitne  hi  kholte   hain   dhang  tasveer  ke
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Ik umra laga ke aaya hai parinda parinda manjil pe
Tang   aasmaaN  bhi  raaste  hain  tang  tasveer  ke
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Aankhon meiN utraa jaye hai haye nasha  is kadar
Behki   adaaoN  se  choor  hain  ang  tasveer ke
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Bulaao  bijliyon ko jalaa  bhi   de aashiyaN  ko
Aalam-e-barsaat  meiN  ang  hue bhang tasveer ke
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Ye  haalaat- o -khyaalat  bhi   badal  jaayenge
Utaar  paayega   kyaa   koi    jang   tasveer  ke
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Kho  na  jaye  ye  rang-o-boo sadaaoN ki tarha
Dar-o-deewar   pe  sajaa  lo   rang   tasveer  ke
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Dikhaaye  hain naksh-e-paa aane  wali dunian ke
Yun charaagerehgujar rahi ‘saru’sang tasveer ke
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wah wah wah wah bohut bohut umda dear sir ji kamal kar diya mubarak ho apko,or or or jeetu ki taraf se ek rau catch karo
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2014, 05:24:36 AM »
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thankeewwwwwwwwww soooooooooooooooooo mauch jeetu ji
bahut achhe hote hai aapke comments.
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Khaamosh  rehkar  bolte  hain   rang  tasveer  ke
Raaz  kitne  hi  kholte   hain   dhang  tasveer  ke
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Ik umra laga ke aaya hai parinda parinda manjil pe
Tang   aasmaaN  bhi  raaste  hain  tang  tasveer  ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Aankhon meiN utraa jaye hai haye nasha  is kadar
Behki   adaaoN  se  choor  hain  ang  tasveer ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bulaao  bijliyon ko jalaa  bhi   de aashiyaN  ko
Aalam-e-barsaat  meiN  ang  hue bhang tasveer ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ye  haalaat- o -khyaalat  bhi   badal  jaayenge
Utaar  paayega   kyaa   koi    jang   tasveer  ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kho  na  jaye  ye  rang-o-boo sadaaoN ki tarha
Dar-o-deewar   pe  sajaa  lo   rang   tasveer  ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dikhaaye  hain naksh-e-paa aane  wali dunian ke
Yun charaagerehgujar rahi ‘saru’sang tasveer ke
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah wah bohut bohut umda dear sir ji kamal kar diya mubarak ho apko,or or or jeetu ki taraf se ek rau catch karo
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2014, 06:05:45 AM »
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Bahut aala !!
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2014, 10:23:59 AM »
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Wah Wah Kyaa Baat Hai, Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2014, 02:21:10 PM »
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dheron daad ek rau ke sang
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thankeww sooooooooooooo much surindarn ji
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Wah Wah Kyaa Baat Hai, Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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thankeww Zaif ji !!
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Bahut aala !!
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thanks a lot saini ji ! Usual Smile
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just  speechless subah ki shuruayaat saru ji ki lajawaaab nazm ke sath wah wah wah  pls accept RAU mam
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waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
behad umdaah aur khoooooooob surat peshkash saru ji.. Usual Smile
dhero daaaaaad ..... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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ख़ामोश    रहकर   बोलते  हैं  रंग  तस्वीर के
राज़ कितने  ही  खोलते  हैं   ढंग  तस्वीर  के

एक  उम्र  लगा  के आया है  परिंदा  मंज़िल पे
तंग आसमाँ   भी   रास्ते  हैं  तंग  तस्वीर के

आँखों  में  उतरा जाए है  हाय नशा  इस  क़दर
बहकी   अदाओं  से  चूर   हैं  अंग  तस्वीर के

बुलाओ बिजलियों को जला भी दे  आशियाँ  को
आलम-ए-बरसात में  अंग  हुए  भंग तस्वीर के

ये  हालात- ओ - ख़्यालात  भी  बदल  जाएँगे
उतार  पाएगा  क्या  कोई  जंग   तस्वीर  के

खो  न  जाए ये  रंग-ओ-बू  सदाओं  की तरह
दर – ओ - दीवार पे  सजालो  रंग  तस्वीर के

दिखाए हैं  नक्श-ए-पा आने  वाली  दुनियाँ  के
यूँ चराग़-ए-रहगुज़र रही 'सॅरू' संग तस्वीर  के




Khaamosh  rehkar  bolte  hain   rang  tasveer  ke
Raaz  kitne  hi  kholte   hain   dhang  tasveer  ke

Ik umra laga ke aaya hai parinda parinda manjil pe
Tang   aasmaaN  bhi  raaste  hain  tang  tasveer  ke

Aankhon meiN utraa jaye hai haye nasha  is kadar
Behki   adaaoN  se  choor  hain  ang  tasveer ke

Bulaao  bijliyon ko jalaa  bhi   de aashiyaN  ko
Aalam-e-barsaat  meiN  ang  hue bhang tasveer ke

Ye  haalaat- o -khyaalat  bhi   badal  jaayenge
Utaar  paayega   kyaa   koi    jang   tasveer  ke

Kho  na  jaye  ye  rang-o-boo sadaaoN ki tarha
Dar-o-deewar   pe  sajaa  lo   rang   tasveer  ke

Dikhaaye  hain naksh-e-paa aane  wali dunian ke
Yun charaagerehgujar rahi ‘saru’sang tasveer ke



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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2014, 07:00:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah kya kehne saru ji...bas kamaal hi kamaal aur waaaaaaaah hi waaaaaaaah nikal rahi hai... hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare... yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

Ye  haalaat- o -khyaalat  bhi   badal  jaayenge
Utaar  paayega   kyaa   koi    jang   tasveer  ke

Kho  na  jaye  ye  rang-o-boo sadaaoN ki tarha
Dar-o-deewar   pe  sajaa  lo   rang   tasveer  ke

Dikhaaye  hain naksh-e-paa aane  wali dunian ke
Yun charaagerehgujar rahi ‘saru’sang tasveer ke
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2014, 07:11:31 PM »
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thanks a lot premdeep ji
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just  speechless subah ki shuruayaat saru ji ki lajawaaab nazm ke sath wah wah wah  pls accept RAU mam
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