**Seh rahi hai**

by dead heart on June 17, 2009, 07:36:45 PM
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Pata nahin kya likha hai par jo mann main aya wohi likha hai...

Yeh imaraton se sajhi duniya deh rahi hai,
Uske jism ko chuti hawa meri kabr tak beh rahi hai,
Najane yeh kaisa alam bangaya hai zindagi ka Rahim,
Ke yeh meri tadapti rooh ro kar bhi sab seh rahi hai...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 07:45:31 PM »
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Bohot achhe Rahim ji yun hi man ki baat likhte rahiye.
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 07:56:48 PM »
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Shukriya Sayyid Saheb!!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2009, 03:09:25 AM »
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Rahim ji aapne toh kamaal ka likha hai,very nice creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2009, 04:33:11 AM »
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Areeeeee Rahim Bhai aap Nahi Jaante Aapne Kya Likha Hai.. aapne Behad Khubsoorat aur Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe Hain dost.. Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2009, 06:41:58 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim, ye jajbaat dil ke hai aur anmol bhi.. Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2009, 08:06:35 PM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh jee, Mann bhai aur Shally jee...Mujhe umeed nahin thi ke maine itna acha likha hai...
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«Reply #7 on: June 19, 2009, 04:55:15 PM »
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Waah Waah Rahim bro Kya baat kahi hai.. Itna Dard kyu? But bahoot acha likha hai.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: June 19, 2009, 06:28:17 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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dead heart
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2009, 09:04:56 PM »
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Shukriya Divya di...Bas ek dinn chalte phirte dil ne yeh 4 lines kahi thi...pata hi nahin chala kab shaer bangaya...

Shukriya Rajesh jee...
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