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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
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Azeem Azaad
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 05:22:54 PM » |
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BOhat Achche Bhai, Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
May Allah Bless You, Isi Tarah Likhaa Karein,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2009, 08:29:19 PM » |
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Allah aap ko sdaa slaamat rakhe jo pyari duaain daite hain.asghr
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2009, 08:30:51 PM » |
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
Bohot achcha likha hai aapne Asghr Ji |
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2009, 09:09:47 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2009, 07:35:17 AM » |
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
Bahoth bahoth qoob ashgar sahab meri nazar me tum achi shayari ka zaqira ho janab !! bahoth uper jao ge tum eak din janab app!! allah tumhe khush rakhe !! aur tumhare kalamo ko miyari izzath bakshe !! Ameen Qadeer Toopchi |
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 12:52:49 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2009, 12:55:39 PM » |
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Bahoth bahoth qoob ashgar sahab meri nazar me tum achi shayari ka zaqira ho janab !! bahoth uper jao ge tum eak din janab app!! allah tumhe khush rakhe !! aur tumhare kalamo ko miyari izzath bakshe !! Ameen
Qadeer Toopchi
Qadeer bhai Khuda aap ko khush rakhe bhai jaan yeh aap ka pyar hai verna main kuch nahin.asghr  |
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2009, 01:09:16 PM » |
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AAP SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATE HAIN.... HUM TAALI BAJAAYE JAATE HAIN....  Asghrji bahut achha likha hai.... "AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON"... Aapki rashi tou Azgar se milti hai Saanp se kya darr... HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2009, 01:34:54 PM » |
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai. na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe. karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe. uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe. HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2009, 02:08:37 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2009, 02:13:28 PM » |
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Bohot achcha likha hai aapne Asghr Ji
thanks!sdaa khush rehain.asghr |
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2009, 02:15:32 PM » |
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai.
na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe
jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe.
karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe.
uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe.
thanks God bless u.asghr |
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2009, 02:17:12 PM » |
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai.
na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe
jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe.
karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe.
uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe.
thanks,sdaa khush rehain.asghr |
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2009, 02:18:46 PM » |
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thanks! sdaa khush rehain.asghr
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