~Tere baghair~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

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Maine ek cheez notice ki hai kayi logon main...Ignorance...Hum sachayi ko man ne se darte hai...Chahe woh phir kisi kay liye mohobat ho, ya yeh kay kisi ko hum kho chuke hai ya yeh kay humari galti hai..
Meri yeh nazm, maine yeh accept karne kay baad likhi hai kay ab woh shaks jo mere behad kareeb tha, ab mujse bahaut dhoor hai...

Aur ek cheez kehna chahta hoon sabhi se...Ager apse koi mohobat karta hai, ager apko koi chahta hai toh usse granted na le...kyun ki woh shaks jo mohobat karta hai, woh toot jata hai...Ager apko koi chahta hai, toh usse dil kholke apnale...Jisse ap chahte ho woh saath chorr sakta hai mager jo tumhe chahta hai, woh saath nahin chorrte...
Ager koi aisa hai jisse tum chahte ho, toh us'se kaho kay I love you...der hogayi, toh phir dard seh nahin paoge...

Ab zindagi bitani hogi mujhe tere baghair,
Ab khushian khudko dilani hogi mujhe tere baghair…

Kanton se sajhi hai raah-e-zindagi meri,
Zakhmon par khud hi malham lagani hogi mujhe tere baghair…

Roshni ki teri mohobat ne aur judai andhera kargayi,
Ab khud hi umeedon ki shama jhalani hogi mujhe tere baghair…

Hazaron ki bheed main bhi khudko akela pata hoon,
Yeh tanhai mujhe apnani hogi tere baghair…

Lakhon ashk chupaye ek muskurahat liye phirta hoon,
Ab yeh aadat bhi dalni hogi mujhe tere baghair…

Ab bhi haath badaye khada hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager tu jaise dekh ke an-dheka kar deta hai,
Kabhi tu haal-e-dil mujhe bataya karta tha,
Aj toh tu khamoshi ka daman thame hue hai,
Shikayat karne ka shayad haq bhi na raha mujhe,
Tu toh mujhe bhool sa gaya hai ab,
Bas iss baat ka hi afsos hai mujhe Zalim,
Kay ab zindagi guzarni hogi mujhe tere baghair…

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2010, 03:55:35 AM »

Rahim ji..dil me dard kar gai aapki ye nazm aur aapki batein....

bht hi simple way me aapne iss dard ko kalam me utara hai..jo badhega isi me kho jayega..

bht hi dil se likha hai ye ...wo tada[p saf dikahi de rahi hai yahan


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2010, 08:10:16 AM »

Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

Dil ke Jazbaaton ko Aapne bahut Hi khoobsurat tareeke se lafzon mein utaara hai

Bahut AChe..


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2010, 01:33:00 PM »

Kasak di, apke dil main dard karna mera maqsad nahin tha mager apko dard mehsoos hua, yeh kafi hai yeh batane kay liye kay apne dil se parra..bahaut bahaut shukriya...

Khwaish Dost, bahaut shukriya mere bhai...Apne dil se samjha aur waqt diya...teh dil se shukriya..!


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2010, 03:37:03 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 21, 2010, 09:20:01 PM

~Rahim~

Very Impressive Creation.....Rahim Ji ! Excellent !


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2010, 07:21:53 PM »

Shukriya Naresh jee!


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2010, 01:04:23 PM »

Bahot khoob Adbdul Rahim Bhai. Achii poem likhi hai aapne dard aur hausle se bhari. Daad pesh karta hun.


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2010, 07:51:05 PM »

Shukriya Riyaz jee


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2010, 10:20:16 PM »

Wah wah Rahim bhai,bahut khoob,great ad touchig creation.excellent icon_salut


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2010, 08:32:41 AM »

Rahim Mere Bhaiiiiiii.. Kya baat hai.. Humehsha Ki Tarah Ek Naye Ehasaas Ko Lafzon Me Piroya hai Aapne.. Tadap Ko, Dard Ko Bakhoobi Yahan Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai..

Daad Kubool karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2010, 09:57:44 PM »

Shukriya Madhu di aur Vikas bhaijan..Teh dil se shukar guzar hoon kay apne waqt diya!


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2010, 05:41:00 PM »

Waah...kya baat keh gaye rahim ji...bahut gehru baatein kahi hai aapne....
kaafi khuch sikha gayi aapki lines,jo aapne shuruaat mein likhi.....shukriya aapka....jo aapne ye baat humse share ki... Usual Smile

bakhubi pesh kiya aapne dard ko apni nazm mein.....bahut acche..


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2010, 05:47:19 PM »

very very nice rahim ji ... bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh


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Re: ~Tere baghair~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2010, 07:38:47 PM »

Shukriya Nikhaar di aur Jasbir jee..
Nikhaar di, humne toh bas wohi likha, jo zindagi ne seekhaya hai...ager mere inn sabakon se, koi seekh jata hai, toh bahaut badi baat hai mere liye..Teh dil se shukriya!


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