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Aate jaate hee ik nazar lenaa
ho sake to kabhee khabar lenaa
teree deewaangee bhalee see lage
kal bhee hai zindagee sudhar lenaa
kyoN pareshaaN ho bikharee zulfoN se
aainaa hooN mai tum saNwar lenaa
aaj udane do maNziloN kee taraf
kal jo chaaho to par katar lenaa
jaan jaoge pyaar kaa matlab
dil kee rahooN setum guzar lenaa
thak jo jaoge tum safar me kaheeN
chhaaNv zulfoN kee hai thahar lenaa
bekhudee me jo naam looN teraa
meree baatoN kaa naa asar lenaa
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 09:31:44 AM » |
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mindblowing ji.........superb......
asusal its behtareen......
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 09:33:01 AM » |
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wah wah jhakash nagma.
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aaj udne do manzil ki taraf
kal jo chaho to par katar dena
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ye line aapke kavita ki Ruuh hai
bahut khub.
lekin
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apni raaheN manzil aap banao
katar de aapke par koi---
iss qadar kisi ko na chuune dena
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 10:32:51 AM » |
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aaj udane do maNziloN kee taraf
kal jo chaaho toh par katar lenaa
Bahut umdaa aur gehraa Khayaal ... Mamtaa Ji !
vaise sabhi ashaar asardaar rahe .. dil se daad ... !
likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... !
khush rahen ...
duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2011, 11:40:13 AM » |
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Bohat Hi Khoobsurat Mamta Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 12:09:25 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Utkarsh!
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 12:20:30 PM » |
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Mamta ji namaskar-
aasirwaad do aap pahle bas.
aapki taraf se ek aur dil ko chune wali peshkash--
bas padhta gaya padhta gaya.
hum aapko daad de hi nahi sakte.
bas dua kar sakte hain.
yun hi lagaataar likhte rahiye.
chen o aman se rahiye
khus rahiye
sukriya
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aasirwaad to lekar hi rahunga mai aapse
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 12:23:25 PM » |
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Naresh jee dher saa shukriyaa......
aap ke shabd humari lekhni kaa sambal haiN...
aap kee duaoN kee hameshaa muntazir hooN...
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2011, 12:31:00 PM » |
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Suresh jee aap ke saath humaaraa aasheerwaad or shubh-kaamnaayeN dono haiN....
dil khushi se bhar jaataa hai jab aap kee aisee tahreer paRhane ko miltee hai....
aap kee daad binaa humaaraa kalaam zaaye ho jayegaa...
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2011, 12:37:17 PM » |
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Kam padte hain shabd taariff ko T Aate jaate hee ik nazar lenaa
ho sake to kabhee khabar lenaa
teree deewaangee bhalee see lage
kal bhee hai zindagee sudhar lenaa
kyoN pareshaaN ho bikharee zulfoNse
aainaa hooNmai tum saNwar lenaa
aaj udane do maNziloNkee taraf
kal jo chaaho to par katar lenaa
jaan jaoge pyaar kaa matlab
dil kee rahooN setum guzar lenaa
thak jo jaoge tum safar me kaheeN
chhaaNv zulfoN kee hai thahar lenaa
bekhudee me jo naam looN teraa
meree baatoN kaa naa asar lenaa
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2011, 12:54:19 PM » |
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aap ki is rachna se muje ek gujrati garba yaad aagaya ...aavata jata jara nazar to nakhta jajo biju to kai nahi pan kem so kaheta jajo...bahut khoob manko chu gayi aap ki ye rachna
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2011, 12:54:55 PM » |
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ye kya Mamta jee----
mere liye dia gaya aasirwaad Suresh ko mil gaya aur mai khaali ka khaali hi raha:(
ab jaldi se Subhash ko yani mujhe aasirwaad do bas--
nahi to mai gussa ho jaunga haan
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2011, 02:08:06 PM » |
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Sorry Subhaash !
tumhaare naam likhne me thodi chook ho gayee waise tum ne samajh liyaa ...
achchha hai...
Suresh ko to sirf aasheerwaad or shubh-kaamnaayeN hee mileeN thee tumhe saath me meraa aseem sneh bhee mil rahaa hai
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2011, 02:10:13 PM » |
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Shukriyaa Shiba!
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