-----/// Tujhe paane ki koshish /// ----- Hriday

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main aaj tujhe paane ki ek saazish aur kar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya maut haasil kar lunga,

chaukhat pe tere baith ke tera naam pukaar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya khud ko hi haar lunga,

tu aajaaye agar laut ke baahon me tujhe bhar lunga,
hothon ko tere chhoo ke main pyaar tujhe kar lunga,

aana tujhe  hai, tu aayegi, main intezaar kar lunga,
seene se lag jaana mere main tera aetbaar kar lunga,

tod ke sab bandhano ko main tujhe sweekaar kar lunga,
ye pyaar hi to hai mujhe, tujhse hazaar baar kar lunga,  

main aaj tujhe paane ki ek saazish aur kar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya maut haasil kar lunga...


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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 12:49:01 AM »
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wah sir ji wah... mind blasting...

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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 02:37:57 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 03:59:11 AM »
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Bahaut mohobat se likha hai Kapil dost..
Wakei, bahaut mohobat..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 09:27:08 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 02:00:25 PM »
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main aaj tujhe paane ki ek saazish aur kar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya maut haasil kar lunga,

chaukhat pe tere baith ke tera naam pukaar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya khud ko hi haar lunga,

tu aajaaye agar laut ke baahon me tujhe bhar lunga,
hothon ko tere chhoo ke main pyaar tujhe kar lunga,

aana tujhe  hai, tu aayegi, main intezaar kar lunga,
seene se lag jaana mere main tera aetbaar kar lunga,

tod ke sab bandhano ko main tujhe sweekaar kar lunga,
ye pyaar hi to hai mujhe, tujhse hazaar baar kar lunga,  

main aaj tujhe paane ki ek saazish aur kar lunga,
ya to tu mil jaaye mujhe ya maut haasil kar lunga...


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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2012, 04:07:10 PM »
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wah wah...bahut khoob hridayji....
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2012, 07:21:32 PM »
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Thank you soooo much....!!!

wah sir ji wah... mind blasting...

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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 08:07:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Anush ji....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2012, 11:42:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Rahim bhai....!!!

Bahaut mohobat se likha hai Kapil dost..
Wakei, bahaut mohobat..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2012, 12:47:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 12:47:42 AM »
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thanks...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

wah wah...bahut khoob hridayji....
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2012, 12:51:55 AM »
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bahut khoob hriday ji... kya zidd hai payr ki.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley daad kabool kare.
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2012, 01:00:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa I_W ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya ... bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

bahut khoob hriday ji... kya zidd hai payr ki.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley daad kabool kare.
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