tujhe paane ke liye Katle-aam kar diya

by thegrimreaper on July 28, 2009, 02:46:01 AM
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this is a thread from my old account which though i never used but felt i should share

Tujhe Paane ke Liye Katle-aam kar diya
Pure Jahaan ke Saamne apne pyaar sareaam kar diya...
Jab tum na ho sake humaare
Humne Zindagi ko Zindagi se Viraan kar diya...

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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2009, 11:22:29 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI BAhut hi badiya.....thegrimreaper ji....

baha di khoon ki nadiya maine,
tere maathe pe lagaane bindiya maine,
kya kya na kiya tujhko paane ke khaatir,
aur tu hi dagaa de gayi mujhko aakhir.
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2009, 01:20:54 PM »
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baha di khoon ki nadiya maine,
tere maathe pe lagaane bindiya maine,
kya kya na kiya tujhko paane ke khaatir,
aur tu hi dagaa de gayi mujhko aakhir.

thankyou cara ji and great lines indeed
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2009, 02:58:36 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Reaper Ji

Nice lines Cara
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2009, 09:23:53 PM »
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thanks Celmira ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2009, 09:58:29 PM »
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waah bahoot khoob Grimpreaper ji

Good line Haresh ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2009, 10:28:31 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Lajawab Likha hai Grimpreaper ji  aapne.. Applause Applause


Cara Ji aapne Bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai.. Applause


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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2009, 01:08:11 AM »
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waah bahoot khoob Grimpreaper ji

Good line Haresh ji

thanks Sophi ji

ppl's genuine comments are my driving force
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 05:01:58 AM »
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shukriya mann sahab sunny
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 05:11:37 AM »
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bahoot khoob thegrimreaper ji and cara ji...
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 05:30:51 AM »
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SHUKRIYA POOJA JI hello
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