Uffff merra dil...Geet...

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«Reply #15 on: March 22, 2011, 12:50:35 PM »
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Uffff ye tera Dil Geet-di.... love9
Na jaane kya kya gul khilaataa hai re....
Kabhi ruthtaa hai.... kabhi pyaar me Jhoomta hai....
Kabhi shikve kare tou kabhi toot-ta hai ye tera dil...
Mujhe tou lage masti loot-ta hai ye tera dil... love9

Nice to see your lines after a long time Kalaashkerji....
Aur Anaam tumne tou kamaal kar diya...mast reply dear...keep it up
Aaj-kal achha likhne lage ho re.....sab rango mai... Winking Winking Winking
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Thnx koyal...Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 22, 2011, 01:32:07 PM »
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bht bht khoobsurat peshkesh geet ji...
very nice...
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«Reply #17 on: March 22, 2011, 01:35:59 PM »
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Bahut shukriya priya ji..
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«Reply #18 on: April 30, 2011, 01:03:11 AM »
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shukriya Geet ji mera jawaab pasand karne ke liye... aur yunhi likhte rahiye aap... take care...!!!

Bahut acha laga kapil ji kaafi dino k baad apko yoindia pe dekhe yahan tou sab acha hi hai aur kapil ji ye merri dard bhari nhi bus thodi tadap bhari kavita hai aur main zyada udaas nhi rehti hu maine apse pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe zyada waqt udaad rehna nhi aata...aur shukriya apka merri kavita pasand karne k liye aur jawaban apne behad khubsurat panktiya likhi hai bahut shukriya apka...take care...Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: April 30, 2011, 09:14:44 AM »
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Dil ne jise manga hai din rat apni duao mein,
aaj usi se dil door jana chahta hai,

intezar karta hai uska har pal,
phir bhi usise nazar hatana chahta hai,

itna kuch kho diya hai zindgi mein,
ab nhi raha uske layak mujhe batana chahta hai,

dil k hatho itni majbur ho chuki hu main,
usko naraaz kar k ab khud ko tadpana chahta hai,

arzu rakhta hai har lamha uske aane ki,
betab hai itna ki use uske apno se churana chahta hai,

kabhi uspe bepanah mhbt barasata hai,
kabhi usise har baat chhupana chahta hai,

bina unke ye tou bus dil ka haal-e-bayan hai dosto..
warna har surat merra dil merre ajnabi ko hi pana chahta hai.........








BAHUT KHOOB.

MOHABBAT KI AAG MEIN BHI JALL KAR MUSKURATE HAIN LOG,
 MUJHE EK CHINGAARI NE KYA CHUAA KI JALTI RAHI AAJ TAK
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«Reply #20 on: April 30, 2011, 01:45:10 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji mera jawaab pasand karne ke liye... aur yunhi likhte rahiye aap... take care...!!!


Ji zarur...Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: April 30, 2011, 01:45:56 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB.

MOHABBAT KI AAG MEIN BHI JALL KAR MUSKURATE HAIN LOG,
 MUJHE EK CHINGAARI NE KYA CHUAA KI JALTI RAHI AAJ TAK

Bahut khoob kaha aur bahut shukriya sheba ji..
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«Reply #22 on: April 30, 2011, 02:00:33 PM »
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aaj mood me tha to socha aapke iss post par ek reply de du……
lekin aaj dard wale shabd kuch gahre naikal rahe mujhse……
kahi aap ro na de so nahi likha kuch……:)

uff aapka ye dil
jaane kya kya sahta hai
thoda thoda kahta hai
kuch jada hi ‘chupaata’ hai
tadapta hai akele me
mehfil me ‘phool’ barsaata hai
bikhar bikhar kar judta hai
jud jud kar bikharta hai
uff aapka ye dil bbl
jaane kya kya sahta hai
judai me tadapta hai
milan me bhi dhdkta hai
uff aapka ye dil bbl
aapka ye dil…
*apke dil ko dua h mere dil se
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«Reply #23 on: April 30, 2011, 02:39:47 PM »
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aaj mood me tha to socha aapke iss post par ek reply de du……
lekin aaj dard wale shabd kuch gahre naikal rahe mujhse……
kahi aap ro na de so nahi likha kuch……:)

uff aapka ye dil
jaane kya kya sahta hai
thoda thoda kahta hai
kuch jada hi ‘chupaata’ hai
tadapta hai akele me
mehfil me ‘phool’ barsaata hai
bikhar bikhar kar judta hai
jud jud kar bikharta hai
uff aapka ye dil bbl
jaane kya kya sahta hai
judai me tadapta hai
milan me bhi dhdkta hai
uff aapka ye dil bbl
aapka ye dil…
*apke dil ko dua h mere dil se
Bahut shukriya killbill ji aur bahut khoob likha aapne..
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