Tu hi merra maktoob hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 29, 2011, 05:59:14 PM
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Khalipan jo lagta hai zindgi mein,
vo tumhare paas na hone ka sabut hai,

khakh si lagti hai har aas tum bin,
khushiyo ka tumse hi wajud hai,

muskurahate tumse milti hai merre labo ko,
tum nhi tou gulistan bhi barud hai,

Har ehsas tumhara hi hai mujhme,(merre ajnabi)
likhti hu tujhpe kyunki tu hi merra maktoob hai,

karna hai tumse hi nayi zindgi ka aghaaz bhi,
aur tumse hi ab har khuab ka mansoob hai.........

mansoob-relate,judna
Maktoob-writting,likhawat...



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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 06:15:28 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 07:01:35 PM »
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Nice Geet Ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 09:00:48 PM »
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Acha likha hai Geet di..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 05:23:24 AM »
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achha bahut sundar geet Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2011, 08:48:30 AM »
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kya kahne geet....
bada accha laga padh kar.......
tumhe tumhara ajnabee mil jaye jaldi se....
dua karti hu.....
simply superb lines..........
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2011, 12:14:31 PM »
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Khalipan jo lagta hai zindgi mein,
vo tumhare paas na hone ka sabut hai,

khakh si lagti hai har aas tum bin,
khushiyo ka tumse hi wajud hai,

muskurahate tumse milti hai merre labo ko,
tum nhi tou gulistan bhi barud hai,

Har ehsas tumhara hi hai mujhme,(merre ajnabi)
likhti hu tujhpe kyunki tu hi merra maktoob hai,

karna hai tumse hi nayi zindgi ka aghaaz bhi,
aur tumse hi ab har khuab ka mansoob hai.........

mansoob-relate,judna
Maktoob-writting,likhawat...





good one broken ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2011, 02:36:42 PM »
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wah wah bahut achha likha hai Geet ji.
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Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji,rishi ji,rahim,sheba ji,priya ji,shihab ji,kishan ji aur suresh ji...

Priya ji apki duao k liye tahe dil se shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2011, 05:40:57 PM »
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bht mast likha hai geet..dil ki batein badi achhci lagti hain jab tumhare shabdon me sunti hun....
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2011, 05:52:30 PM »
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Shukriya kasak ji..
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 07:52:42 PM »
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Khalipan jo lagta hai zindgi mein,
vo tumhare paas na hone ka sabut hai,

khakh si lagti hai har aas tum bin,
khushiyo ka tumse hi wajud hai,

muskurahate tumse milti hai merre labo ko,
tum nhi tou gulistan bhi barud hai,

Har ehsas tumhara hi hai mujhme,(merre ajnabi)
likhti hu tujhpe kyunki tu hi merra maktoob hai,

karna hai tumse hi nayi zindgi ka aghaaz bhi,
aur tumse hi ab har khuab ka mansoob hai.........

mansoob-relate,judna
Maktoob-writting,likhawat...





Good One .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2011, 03:06:06 PM »
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Shukriya naresh ji..
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 03:11:52 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob geetji!!!

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Yaar Tussi Te lajawaab Hi ho...Koi Shaq!!!! tongue3
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Bahut Bahut Khoob geetji!!!

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Yaar Tussi Te lajawaab Hi ho...Koi Shaq!!!! tongue3


He he he enaa na chadhao ji..shukriya tuada...Usual Smile
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