Waqt Ke Haathon Sikandaro Ne Bhi Maat Khaayi Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 11, 2011, 08:37:28 AM
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Dil Ka Dard lafzon mein Utaarna
Asaan Nahi Hai Bikhre Hue Ko Sawaarna

Yahan Har Baat Par Tanz kaste Hai Log!!
Muskhil Hai kuch Baaton Se Khud Ko Ubhaarna

Chaloge To Inn Raaston Mein Giroge Zaroor!!!
Chalne Se pehle Seekhlo Zara Khud Ko Sambhaalna

Jaha Kuch Nazar Naa Aaye Waha Insaano Se Phir Kaisi Umeed!!!
 Aise Mein Sar Jhuka kar Apne Khuda Ko Hi Pukaarna

Patharo Ko Taraashkar Duniya Isse Bhi Heera Bana Deti Hai!!!
Apni Zindagi Ko Tum Bhi Kuch Iss kadar Nikhaarna

Waqt Ke Haathon Yahan Sikandaro Ne Bhi Maat Khaayi Hai!!
yehi Zindagi Hai "Khwaish" kabhi jeetna To Kabhi Haarna


                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2011, 08:52:31 AM »
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one of ur best post khwaish ji..........

u know apki shayri ki sabse dilchasp baat jo muje lagti he wo ye ki aap apni poetry ko bht practical way me likhtey he.........mean a truth.........aaj ye zindagi ke uper likha he apne.........it is mindblowing .........as usal behtareen poetry he........sidhe dil me jagah banatai hui poetry.......

ek baar mene kuch likha tha regarding zindagi........hope apne shayad pahle bhi ye pada hoga yaha post kar chuka hu......well want to share it with ur post.....




Ye Badsurat, Behaal Aur Badnaam Zindagi
Pahli Saans Se Maut Ka Paigam Zindagi

Hazaar Khwaishe  Aur  Ek Nakaam Zindagi
Bana Waqt Zaya Karne Ka Naam Zindagi

Hum Jese Diwane Kya Jane Jine Ka Salika
Hume To  Khud Per Hi Lage He Iljaam Zindagi

Jab Humne Hi Palee The Saap Aastino Me
Fir Kyu Na Ho Dard Ka Duja Naam Zindagi

Kuch Is Tarah Mili He Zillat Aur Zalalat Ki
Ab To Dil Chahta He Ek Gumanaam Zindagi

Hausla He Ab Bhi Aur Umiid Bhi He Baqi Ki
Ek Din To Karegi Humko Bhi Salam Zindagi

Yakinan Us Din Masal Kar Hi Rakh Dunga
Jab Hogi  “Utkarsh Banaam Zindagi”


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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2011, 09:11:18 AM »
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kya baat kya baat…
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2011, 09:11:30 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji,,, MashaAllah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai.. Bahoot Umda !!!

Matrix ji
.. yea wala shayad pehli baar pada hai.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne ..

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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2011, 09:29:02 AM »
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one of ur best post khwaish ji..........

u know apki shayri ki sabse dilchasp baat jo muje lagti he wo ye ki aap apni poetry ko bht practical way me likhtey he.........mean a truth.........aaj ye zindagi ke uper likha he apne.........it is mindblowing .........as usal behtareen poetry he........sidhe dil me jagah banatai hui poetry.......

ek baar mene kuch likha tha regarding zindagi........hope apne shayad pahle bhi ye pada hoga yaha post kar chuka hu......well want to share it with ur post.....




Ye Badsurat, Behaal Aur Badnaam Zindagi
Pahli Saans Se Maut Ka Paigam Zindagi

Hazaar Khwaishe  Aur  Ek Nakaam Zindagi
Bana Waqt Zaya Karne Ka Naam Zindagi

Hum Jese Diwane Kya Jane Jine Ka Salika
Hume To  Khud Per Hi Lage He Iljaam Zindagi

Jab Humne Hi Palee The Saap Aastino Me
Fir Kyu Na Ho Dard Ka Duja Naam Zindagi

Kuch Is Tarah Mili He Zillat Aur Zalalat Ki
Ab To Dil Chahta He Ek Gumanaam Zindagi

Hausla He Ab Bhi Aur Umiid Bhi He Baqi Ki
Ek Din To Karegi Humko Bhi Salam Zindagi

Yakinan Us Din Masal Kar Hi Rakh Dunga
Jab Hogi  “Utkarsh Banaam Zindagi”


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Sabse pehle, aapka Tahe dil se shukriya jo aapne iss ehsaas ko itna bahkoobi samjha..bahut bahut shukriya  icon_flower

Aur Waah waah Waah!!! Kua kahoon Uthkarsh Ji..Aapne Itna Acha Likha Hai ke Bas padhta Hi gaya..bahut bahut Khoob Dost!!!vaakai Zindagi ke baut Kareeb!!!Main Bhi saath Kuch Likhta Chaloon...


Chalte jaane ka Dusra Naam hai zindagi
Har Pehar nayi Mushkile ,Kaha Ab Araam hai Zindagi

Rote hue Ke Saath yahan Ab kaun Rota Hai!!!
Matlab-Parastiyon Ke Liye Ab Badnaam Hai zindagi

Khilono Ki Tarah Yahan Ab Dil Bhi Toothte Hai!!!
Zakhmo Se Lahu-Luhaan eK Nishaan Hai zindagi

Dard Apna Khud Se Hi Baant Lete Hai!!!
Kuch Yuh jeete Hai jaise Khud Par Ek Ehsaan hai Zindagi

"Khwaish" Hosh Ki Baat Yahan Kaun Karta Hai!!!
Rote Hue jo Muskura De, Bas Wahi Ek Muskaan Hai Zindagi
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2011, 09:56:41 AM »
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kya baat kya baat…


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Killbillji icon_flower

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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2011, 10:14:52 AM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...
very nice reply mg..
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2011, 11:48:30 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji,,, MashaAllah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai.. Bahoot Umda !!!

Matrix ji
.. yea wala shayad pehli baar pada hai.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne ..



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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2011, 12:03:35 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...
very nice reply mg..

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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2011, 12:31:43 PM »
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Waah ji wah ki khubsurat kavita likhi hai khwaish ji hor matrix ji ne v bahut hi umda likheya hai..bahut changa lageya zindgi di kuch sachiya padhkar..
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2011, 05:54:32 AM »
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Waah ji wah ki khubsurat kavita likhi hai khwaish ji hor matrix ji ne v bahut hi umda likheya hai..bahut changa lageya zindgi di kuch sachiya padhkar..

Tuada Tehhhh Dillll To Shukriya Geetji..

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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2011, 07:09:46 AM »
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wah wah... wah.. bahut khub khwaishji... bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne....

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metrixji aapne bhi bahut hi sundar likha hai...

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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2011, 11:28:46 AM »
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wah wah... wah.. bahut khub khwaishji... bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne....

 Applause Applause Applause

metrixji aapne bhi bahut hi sundar likha hai...

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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2011, 11:44:08 AM »
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khwaishji bilkul sach kaha
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yahan sikander bhi maat khate zaroor hain.
kyunki insaan ki fitrat mein hota gurur hai,

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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2011, 11:03:15 AM »
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Dil Ka Dard lafzon mein Utaarna
Asaan Nahi Hai Bikhre Hue Ko Sawaarna

Yahan Har Baat Par Tanz kaste Hai Log!!
Muskhil Hai kuch Baaton Se Khud Ko Ubhaarna

Chaloge To Inn Raaston Mein Giroge Zaroor!!!
Chalne Se pehle Seekhlo Zara Khud Ko Sambhaalna

Jaha Kuch Nazar Naa Aaye Waha Insaano Se Phir Kaisi Umeed!!!
 Aise Mein Sar Jhuka kar Apne Khuda Ko Hi Pukaarna

Patharo Ko Taraashkar Duniya Isse Bhi Heera Bana Deti Hai!!!
Apni Zindagi Ko Tum Bhi Kuch Iss kadar Nikhaarna

Waqt Ke Haathon Yahan Sikandaro Ne Bhi Maat Khaayi Hai!!
yehi Zindagi Hai "Khwaish" kabhi jeetna To Kabhi Haarna


                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


Bahut Khoooob ... Khwaish Ji !

ehsaas behad umdaa soch ke saath likhe hai ... dil se daad !
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