Waqt Ne Halaat Se Ladna Seekha Diya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 05, 2010, 04:32:12 PM
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Aaj jo main kavita Post kar raha Hoon Yeh Dil le Bahuttt kareeb hai, Kyonki Iss Kavita Ko maine Jis Daur mein Likha Tha, uss Daur Main Naa-Umeedi Se Guzar Raha Tha, Ek Bebasi, ek lachaari Si thi Har Mod Par..Par Har Ek kadam kuch Seekhta Raha..Iss Poetry Ko Maine Sirf likha Nahi par Jiya Hai...

Har Thokar Ne Meri
mujhko Chalna Seekha Diya

Mere Aankhon Ke Aansuo Ne
Mujhe Khulkar Hasna Seekha Diya

Samundar Ki lehron Ne
Mujhe Gir Kar Phir se Ubarna Seekha Diya

Baarish Ki Bundon Ne,
Zameen Par Bhi Rehna Seekha Diya

Phoolon Ne Bikhar kar Bhi
Mehakna Seekha Diya

Taara Tootkar Bhi Kisi Ke kaam Aata Hai
Zindagi Ki sachaiyon Ne Mujhe Chalte Rehna Seekha Diya

Woh Fakeer Jo Do Roti Ke Liye Taras Jaata Hai
Majbooriyon mein Jazbaaton Ka Hadd Se Guzarna Seekha Diya

Aage Yuh To Karvan Chalte Rahega "Khwaish"
Waqt Ne Aankhon Ki Nami Ke saath Muskuraane Ka Hunar Seekha Diya

Gile-Shikwon,Shikaayton Se Kuch Bhi Haasil nahi "Khwaish"
Waqt Ne Halaat Se Ladna Seekha Diya..

                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 04:41:21 PM »
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khwaish bhaii khoob kaha apne~
daad hazir he`

hazar bar tukde tukde kiya mujhe unhone
"Abhi" me na roya ki annsu sookh chuke~
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 06:50:43 PM »
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bahut khub khwaish ji daad kabool farmaye Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 06:53:20 PM »
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Dost apki har nazm mujhe kuch na kuch dikhati hai..yeh bahuat khbsoorat nazm share karne kay liye shukriya..bahaut sunder likha hai..

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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2010, 07:13:43 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KHWAISH JI.....

WAQT NE HALAAT SE LADNA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE TOOFANO SE TAKRANA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE GIR KAR SAMBHALNA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE APNE AASUON KO PEENA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE GUM ME BHI KHUSH RAHENA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE ANDHERON ME BHI RAASTA DEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE HI ZINDAGI JEENA SEEKHA DIYA....
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2010, 12:56:19 AM »
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Bhut khoob ji ..........

Too very gud !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2010, 01:07:55 AM »
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bht khubsuratpoem khwaish ji.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
dil me ek nahi soch dedi ...kuch likha hai dekhiye ji...


Har ek beete pal ne mujhe aksar ye samjhaya hai
Nahin aaunga laut k main kyun tune mujhe ganwaya hai

Haule halue chalti hawa bhi aksar mujhse kehti hai
Maine  tere garmi se jalte jism ko aaram pahonchaya hai

Chhanw me jab main jaa baithti hun kadi dhup me
Kehti hai maine tujhe thandak ka ehsaas karaya hai

Chandni raat me jab nahin hota koi chiraag bhi sath
Chanda ki kirnon ne tab mujhe raasta dikhaya hai

Kisi ki majburi dekh kabhi main jo udas ho jati hun
Uss majburi ne majburi me sambhalke rehna sikhaya hai

Jab bhi tujhse kuch kaha hai ee mere humraahi maine
Tune hath pakad k mera mujhe manzil pe pahonchaya hai

Kaise kahun k tu dur hai mujhse ee mere jaan e jigar
Tujhe to maine har pal apne ruuh me basa paaya haiā€¦!!!


Aaj jo main kavita Post kar raha Hoon Yeh Dil le Bahuttt kareeb hai, Kyonki Iss Kavita Ko maine Jis Daur mein Likha Tha, uss Daur Main Naa-Umeedi Se Guzar Raha Tha, Ek Bebasi, ek lachaari Si thi Har Mod Par..Par Har Ek kadam kuch Seekhta Raha..Iss Poetry Ko Maine Sirf likha Nahi par Jiya Hai...

Har Thokar Ne Meri
mujhko Chalna Seekha Diya

Mere Aankhon Ke Aansuo Ne
Mujhe Khulkar Hasna Seekha Diya

Samundar Ki lehron Ne
Mujhe Gir Kar Phir se Ubarna Seekha Diya

Baarish Ki Bundon Ne,
Zameen Par Bhi Rehna Seekha Diya

Phoolon Ne Bikhar kar Bhi
Mehakna Seekha Diya

Taara Tootkar Bhi Kisi Ke kaam Aata Hai
Zindagi Ki sachaiyon Ne Mujhe Chalte Rehna Seekha Diya

Woh Fakeer Jo Do Roti Ke Liye Taras Jaata Hai
Majbooriyon mein Jazbaaton Ka Hadd Se Guzarna Seekha Diya

Aage Yuh To Karvan Chalte Rahega "Khwaish"
Waqt Ne Aankhon Ki Nami Ke saath Muskuraane Ka Hunar Seekha Diya

Gile-Shikwon,Shikaayton Se Kuch Bhi Haasil nahi "Khwaish"
Waqt Ne Halaat Se Ladna Seekha Diya..

                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2010, 06:59:21 AM »
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Ladna Sikha Diya...

Bahut pyara sa rachna aapka.. Khwaish ji... Bahut khoob..

Likhte rahiyega...
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2010, 12:15:30 PM »
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khwaish bhaii khoob kaha apne~
daad hazir he`

hazar bar tukde tukde kiya mujhe unhone
"Abhi" me na roya ki annsu sookh chuke~


Bahut bahut Shukriya Abhiji Aapka..

Aur Aapke Kya kehne...bahut Khoob!!!

Yeh Aansu Aankhon mein Sookh Bhi Jaaye To Kya
"Khwaish"Yeh Aansu Hi hai Jo Hardum Waffa Nibhate Hai
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2010, 01:32:34 PM »
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bahut khub khwaish ji daad kabool farmaye Applause Applause


Bahut Bahut Shukriya baadalji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 02:02:01 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2010, 05:53:16 PM »
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Dost apki har nazm mujhe kuch na kuch dikhati hai..yeh bahuat khbsoorat nazm share karne kay liye shukriya..bahaut sunder likha hai..

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itna Pyaar bakshne ke liye Teh dil se shukriya Bhai Rahim

bas Yuhi Saath dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2010, 11:36:17 PM »
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bahot khub \..............
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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2010, 01:43:37 AM »
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khwaish bro............bahoooooot hi khooooob.......dil se daad
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2010, 01:07:48 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KHWAISH JI.....

WAQT NE HALAAT SE LADNA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE TOOFANO SE TAKRANA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE GIR KAR SAMBHALNA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE APNE AASUON KO PEENA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE GUM ME BHI KHUSH RAHENA SEEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE ANDHERON ME BHI RAASTA DEKHA DIYA
WAQT NE HI ZINDAGI JEENA SEEKHA DIYA....

bahut bahut Shukriya caraji..

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