Main Koi Waqt To Nahi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 11, 2011, 10:10:18 AM
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Main Tere Rang Mein,
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga!!!
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chukar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga

Waqt Ka Taakaza kaho Yaa Kaho
Isse Koi Khel Haathon Ke lakeeron Ka
Aaj Jaam Haath mein Hai!!!!
Bas pee lene Do, Main kal Sudhar Jaaunga

"Khwaish" Chot Agar Raaston Ke
Patharo Ne Di Hai To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
Main Phir Se Chalna Seekhunga
Aur Yakeenan Main Sambhal Jaaunga

Main Tere Rang Mein
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chuu Kar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 10:44:39 AM »
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khwaish ji..1 of ur best post hai ye....mere collection me shamil ho gai ji.......
bhtttttttttt hi achchi lagi mujhe
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
sply ye para

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 11:29:04 AM »
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khwaish ji..1 of ur best post hai ye....mere collection me shamil ho gai ji.......
bhtttttttttt hi achchi lagi mujhe
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
sply ye para

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Anuji, Jo Aapne Isse Ani Collection Mein Shaamil Kiya..Agar Aap Kehte Ho ke Yeh One of the Best Post hai to maan lete hai

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Anuji Jo Aapne Apna waqt diya.. icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 12:01:21 PM »
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Mujhe mere Khwaish dost ki har nazm bahaut khaas lagti hai..
Kya baat hai yaar..Bahaut bahaut khoob mere dost..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 12:02:19 PM »
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Main Tere Rang Mein,
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga!!!
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chukar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga

Waqt Ka Taakaza kaho Yaa Kaho
Isse Koi Khel Haathon Ke lakeeron Ka
Aaj Jaam Haath mein Hai!!!!
Bas pee lene Do, Main kal Sudhar Jaaunga

"Khwaish" Chot Agar Raaston Ke
Patharo Ne Di Hai To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
Main Phir Se Chalna Seekhunga
Aur Yakeenan Main Sambhal Jaaunga

Main Tere Rang Mein
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chuu Kar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Ki gal hai ji tusi chha gye bahut wadiya likheya hai tuadi es nazm nu mein gungunande hoye pad'di gyi...bahut wadiya ji...
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 12:06:29 PM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji....
specially 2nd last....
superb.....
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2011, 01:25:59 PM »
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Wah Kya Bata Hai
Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...


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Aapne Apna Waqt Diya, Aap ka Teh Dil Se Shukriya majid Bhai icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2011, 03:17:39 PM »
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   Nice song Khwaish ji, padh kar maza aaya. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2011, 04:35:31 PM »
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khwaish bro.....aapki lekhni nit nayi unchaiyon ko choo rahi hai...jaisa KDK ji ne likha aapki behtreen rachnaon me se ek....dhero daad
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2011, 07:28:32 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

behad khoob ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai janab..
Daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2011, 11:06:06 AM »
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Khwaish Ji Bahut Hi Pyari Apki Post Hai Bahut Sunder Creation Kiya Hai Aapne U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Hume Padhne Ka Mauka Dete Rahiye Daad Kabul Kijiye

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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 07:58:56 AM »
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Mujhe mere Khwaish dost ki har nazm bahaut khaas lagti hai..
Kya baat hai yaar..Bahaut bahaut khoob mere dost..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!


Bhai Rahim, Aap Khud Khaas Ho Isliye Aapko Meri Likhi nazm Bhi Kuch Cheez Khaas lagti hai.. tongue3

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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2011, 08:03:46 AM »
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wah wah khwahishji bahut khub bahut badia.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2011, 08:05:36 AM »
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oo ji khwaish ji twada jawab nahi ji........

tussi jo bhi likhte ho dil vich ghus jata he ....its superb.....and amajing words........keep it up ji

ek choti si gustakhi kar raha hu ek jagah ek word kuch kam jama..

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga ...ye badal jaunga

agar ye hota to
"main koi waqt to nahi
jo ek pal me gujar jaunga..."

pls dnt mind ji raha nahi gaya so bata diya .....
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2011, 08:17:18 AM »
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oo ji khwaish ji twada jawab nahi ji........

tussi jo bhi likhte ho dil vich ghus jata he ....its superb.....and amajing words........keep it up ji

ek choti si gustakhi kar raha hu ek jagah ek word kuch kam jama..

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga ...ye badal jaunga

agar ye hota to
"main koi waqt to nahi
jo ek pal me gujar jaunga..."

pls dnt mind ji raha nahi gaya so bata diya .....

Uthkarsh Ji Aapka Bhaut Bahut Shukriya Jo Aapne Iss Nazm Ko pasand farmaya..Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka..

Uthkarsh Ji, Plz Bura Nahi maniyega...yeh Jo line Hai Iska Matlab yeh Nikalta hai..

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko Naa Nibha Sako
To koi Baat Nahi
Main Koi Waqt To Nahi
Jo Pal Pal Mein badal jaunga"

Iss Line Par Zara Gaur Kariye, Yahan Maine Yeh Likhna Chaaha Ke Agar Aap Mohabbat Ke Rasmo Ko Naa Nibha Sako to koi Baat nahi, main Koi Waqt nahi Jo Pal Pal mein badal jaunga..Main Waqt Ko yahaan Par Halaat Se Jodna Chahata Hoon,Chaahe Insaan ka Waqt Acha Chal Raha Ho yaa Bura,Main Waqt Ke mutaabik Nahi Badlunga..Main Waqt Ko Yahan Ghadi Ya Samay Se nahi Jod Raha Tha..

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