-----/// Waqt nahi lagta /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 12, 2012, 02:53:08 PM
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samaa ko badal jaanne me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,
bahaaron ko laut aane me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,

aaj dilon me nafrat hai to kya, kal pyaar hoga,
dilon ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

chhipaate ho khud ko aaeene se, isse kyaa hoga,
haalaat ko badal jane me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,

aaj ghum ke baadal hain har taraf, andhera hai,
par sahar ke aane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

kisi ko dil me basaayaa tha tumne pyaar samajhke,
pyaar ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

dosh dete ho use ki usne tumhaare dil se khela,
insaan ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

bhulaa do uuse, aur jee lo ye zindagi khud ke liye,
sach kehta hoon waqt ko badal jaane me waqt nahi lagta...


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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2012, 03:36:11 PM »
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bhut ache!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2012, 03:56:30 PM »
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bahut sundar ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2012, 04:22:29 PM »
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hriday ji bahut hi umda lajawab peshkash...aisi gazal ki tareef shabdo mein nahi kar paunga isiliye sirf.....


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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2012, 04:45:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob likhte hai hriday jee.
par kaise,  kitna nirmal hriday hai aapka, sheeshe ki tarah saaf.
khuda aapke jeevan ko khushiyon se bhar de.
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2012, 04:59:16 PM »
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Bohat Khub! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2012, 06:04:41 PM »
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samaa ko badal jaanne me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,
bahaaron ko laut aane me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,

aaj dilon me nafrat hai to kya, kal pyaar hoga,
dilon ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

chhipaate ho khud ko aaeene se, isse kyaa hoga,
haalaat ko badal jane me kabhi waqt nahi lagta,

aaj ghum ke baadal hain har taraf, andhera hai,
par sahar ke aane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

kisi ko dil me basaayaa tha tumne pyaar samajhke,
pyaar ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

dosh dete ho use ki usne tumhaare dil se khela,
insaan ko badal jaane me zyaadaa waqt nahi lagta,

bhulaa do uuse, aur jee lo ye zindagi khud ke liye,
sach kehta hoon waqt ko badal jaane me waqt nahi lagta...


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verii gud
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2012, 08:07:19 PM »
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sah kaha aapne Hrday sahab--
yhan kuch bh badalne me jada waqt nahi lagta--
bahot khoob janaab
daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2012, 08:25:45 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohto khoob sir

gaam mile hai jo tujhe to mayiuus na ho
garmi hai to barsaat ka mosaam bhi hoga
rittuoon k badal jane mai waqt nahi lagta
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 01:44:34 AM »
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Beautifull composition.
Ab ham bhi aapko Rau dene me waqt nahi lagate warna aap......
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2012, 03:27:46 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2012, 03:46:06 AM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower bahut khoob hriday ji dili daad qubool kare
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2012, 05:56:56 AM »
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lajawaabbbbbbbbbbbbbb jawaabbbbbbb kp..... jo soch ke tumne likha hai wo ehsaas bhi kamaal...... superbbbbbbbbb .......
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«Reply #13 on: June 19, 2012, 03:35:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pawan ji....!!!

bhut ache!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 19, 2012, 03:52:20 PM »
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very good
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