-----/// Waqt ko thahar jaane do ///----- Hriday

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nashaa  saa  chhaane  lagaa hai mohabbat kaa
zaraa  waqt  ko  aaj yahaan  thahar  jaane  do

dooriyaan itni kam  ho  jaayen  darmiyaan  aaj
saanson ko  saanson  se hoke guzar  jaane  do

bheege lab tumhaare mere labon ko chhuulen
usi  meethe  zeher  se aaj mujhe mar jaane do

haathon  ki  ungliyaan   kare  sharaarat thodi
pyaar ke  sparsh  se   khudko nikhar jaane do

na  rahe  koi  baat baaki  dil  me  humaare ab
dil   ki  hasratein    saari   poori  kar  jaane  do

khuli  baahen   meri ,  tumhe  bulaa  rahi  hain
aake  inme   khud  ko  tut  ke  bikhar jaane do
 

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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2013, 03:43:40 PM »
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Wah hriday, super poem! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2013, 05:25:32 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2013, 12:55:53 AM »
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wah wah wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2013, 02:02:47 AM »
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bht bht romantic post Hriday sahab--

aaj Kasak ji ko miss kar raha mai coz--iss post par unka ek jhakash reply hota Usual Smile

khus rahie
likhte rahie
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2013, 02:42:48 AM »
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Wah wah wah kapil bhai... Romance se bharpur bahut sunder kalaam.... Love guru ji valentine day par to aapki kavita ko hee sabhi deewane apni gf ko girt dena chahenge...... I love it..... Dherondaad aur ek rau bhi
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2013, 05:15:43 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2013, 05:37:14 AM »
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nashaa  saa  chhaane  lagaa hai mohabbat kaa
zaraa  waqt  ko  aaj yahaan  thahar  jaane  do

dooriyaan itni kam  ho  jaayen  darmiyaan  aaj
saanson ko  saanson  se hoke guzar  jaane  do

bheege lab tumhaare mere labon ko chhuulen
usi  meethe  zeher  se aaj mujhe mar jaane do

haathon  ki  ungliyaan   kare  sharaarat thodi
pyaar ke  sparsh  se   khudko nikhar jaane do

na  rahe  koi  baat baaki  dil  me  humaare ab
dil   ki  hasratein    saari   poori  kar  jaane  do

khuli  baahen   meri ,  tumhe  bulaa  rahi  hain
aake  inme   khud  ko  tut  ke  bikhar jaane do
 

*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2013, 06:14:41 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2013, 09:01:51 AM »
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behtareen rachna hridayji dheroon daad
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2013, 12:28:15 PM »
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Very romantic hriday ji. bas aise hi likhte rahiye. bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad.
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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2013, 03:55:05 PM »
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thank you soooo much Jaikumar ji......!!!

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