-----/// Bataao to jaane ///----- Hriday

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rehte   ho  duur  duur  mujhse, kabhi  mere paas aao to jaane
kehte ho mujhe  mohabbat, kabhi  seene  se  lagaao  to jaane

aasaan nahi hai  mohabbat  jaanaa,  aag  ka  dariyaa  hai  yeh
apni  mohabbat  ke  liye  tum  sholon  se  guzar jaao to jaane

bheegi  barsaaton   me tum bheeg lete ho saheliyon ke sangh
kabhi paas aake meri   mohabbat me tum bheeg jaao to jaane

seene se  lagaa ke tumhe, hothon ko tumhaare chhoo lu main
baahon me aake  mere  kabhi tum tut_ke bikhar jaao to jaane

karte ho mohabbat humse agar tum, khul ke bataao to jaane
ban  jaao  meri  aur  mohabbat ki hadd se guzar jaao to jaane


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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2013, 11:39:03 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Janab kyuN imposible task batakar pareshaan karna chah rahe hai..  icon_geek
Par aapke kwahishoN aur tamannaoN ke bhi kia kahne jee bahut khoob..Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2013, 11:41:51 AM »
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rehte   ho  duur  duur  mujhse, kabhi  mere paas aao to jaane
kehte ho mujhe  mohabbat, kabhi  seene  se  lagaao  to jaane

aasaan nahi hai  mohabbat  jaanaa,  aag  ka  dariyaa  hai  yeh
apni  mohabbat  ke  liye  tum  sholon  se  guzar jaao to jaane

bheegi  barsaaton   me tum bheeg lete ho saheliyon ke sangh
kabhi paas aake meri   mohabbat me tum bheeg jaao to jaane

seene se  lagaa ke tumhe, hothon ko tumhaare chhoo lu main
baahon me aake  mere  kabhi tum tut_ke bikhar jaao to jaane

karte ho mohabbat humse agar tum, khul ke bataao to jaane
ban  jaao  meri  aur  mohabbat ki hadd se guzar jaao to jaane


*****HRIDAY*****






bahut khoob dear.......      !
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2013, 11:47:20 AM »
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Waaah..Bahut bahut Khooob!!!!

Hriday Ji Mann Ko Lubhaa Jaane Wali Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne.

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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 12:11:20 PM »
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waahhh wahhh wahhh janaab waahhh... gudgudate ehsaason se bharpur kalaam hai ye aapka... behar umdaa.. khush rahen likhte rahen
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 12:23:36 PM »
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waah waah waah hriday jee. jitni baar padho dil karta hai aur ek baar padhlo bahut hi pyaari kalam.bahut bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2013, 01:20:59 PM »
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bahut khoob , hriday ji . bahut mubarakbafd.
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2013, 02:48:05 PM »
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Khubsurat Ehsaas!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2013, 02:20:59 AM »
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wah wah wah wah, dhero mubarakbad
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2013, 02:54:40 AM »
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excellent
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2013, 08:25:40 AM »
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kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2013, 08:42:38 AM »
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har lafz mohabbat hai dooba nazar aata
ki rachana parhne waala ye khoob pahchaane
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2013, 02:44:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji....!!!

Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Janab kyuN imposible task batakar pareshaan karna chah rahe hai..  icon_geek
Par aapke kwahishoN aur tamannaoN ke bhi kia kahne jee bahut khoob..Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2013, 02:40:29 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji....!!!


bahut khoob dear.......      !
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«Reply #14 on: January 09, 2013, 03:09:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Khwaish ji....!!!

Waaah..Bahut bahut Khooob!!!!

Hriday Ji Mann Ko Lubhaa Jaane Wali Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne.

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