eh KAZAA uske jaane tak to, THAHAR jaane de...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 23, 2012, 02:46:33 PM
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Dil se maine, mujhse ye dil ne kaha kabhi,, bure waqt me zalim, tu na apna raha kabhi,, use bhi aayegi yaad, wo v degi duaa kabhi,, hum sochte hi reh gaye par na aisa huaa kabhi,, jise is darza chahta huN main, jisse mohabbat karta huN main,, usne bhi humko tha chaaha kabhi,, sach kehta huN usne v tha humko chaaha kabhi,, dil se maine, mujhse ye dil ne kaha kabhi…………………!!!!




YaadoN ke zeher ko ragoN me utar jaane de,
Us shakhs ka is dil se kuch asar jaane de….

Use raqeeboN ki baahoN me bikhar jaane de,
Bewafaai ki saari haddoN se guzar jaane de….

Shab-e-furqat* ki ye aakhiri pahar jaane de,
Eh kazaa# uske jaane tak to thahar jaane de….

*Judaai ki raat, #Maut...!!

Thoda ro luN thaam ke main daaman bahaar ka,
KaliyoN ko v zaraa ashqoN se tarr jaane de….

Uske badan ko v jo husool* ho meri tadap ka,
To panghat# pe mere ashqoN ki lahar jaane de….

*ehsaash. #nadi ka kinara jahaaN aurateN nahati aur paani bharti haiN.

Ab bas aur kab tak jiyegaa kambakht “Taish”,
Ho gaya hai waqt ab khud ko marr jaane de….
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2012, 05:35:57 PM »
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Bahut umda ghazal hai
dard se tar batar. yun hi likhte rahiye.

ye ashaar khoob rahe
YaadoN ke zeher ko ragoN me utar jaane de,
Us shakhs ka is dil se kuch asar jaane de….

Use raqeeboN ki baahoN me bikhar jaane de,
Bewafaai ki saari haddoN se guzar jaane de….

Shab-e-furqat* ki ye aakhiri pahar jaane de,
Eh kazaa# uske jaane tak to thahar jaane de….

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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 01:06:33 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2012, 01:46:27 AM »
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ati sundar
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2012, 02:55:18 AM »
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Bahut umda ghazal hai
dard se tar batar. yun hi likhte rahiye.

ye ashaar khoob rahe
YaadoN ke zeher ko ragoN me utar jaane de,
Us shakhs ka is dil se kuch asar jaane de….

Use raqeeboN ki baahoN me bikhar jaane de,
Bewafaai ki saari haddoN se guzar jaane de….

Shab-e-furqat* ki ye aakhiri pahar jaane de,
Eh kazaa# uske jaane tak to thahar jaane de….




sir ji, aap sharmindaa kar rahe hain, humari na ye haisiyat hai aur na aisa likh paate hain ki koi humara mureed ho, ye to bas aapki dariyadili hai, aur chand logoN ki kuch hausla afzaayi jo kosish karte rehte hain kuch ehsashon ko lafzon ki jubaan dene ki, bas yuNhi satah nibhaate rahiye aap, aur humari kosish bhi jaari rahegi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2012, 03:57:31 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2012, 04:30:16 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut umda....
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«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2012, 04:36:08 AM »
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very nice lucky jee bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2012, 06:04:58 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero dad

tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya prashad sahab, yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN aap aage bhi... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2012, 09:51:14 AM »
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ati sundar

bahut bahut dhanya wad, bahukhandi sahab ise pasand karne ka, bas aage v yuNhi saath dete rahiyegaa aap... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2012, 01:52:43 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

saini sir shukriya, yuNhi aage v saath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2012, 06:40:35 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut umda....
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Sunil sahab bahut bahut shukriya aapka, ki aapne ise pasand kiya, bas aage v yuNhi aap saath nibhaate rahiye...
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2012, 08:36:18 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very nice lucky jee bahut khoob

Shukriya aqsh saahibaa, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko peshkash pasand aayi, umeeed karta hun ki aage v aapko pasand aane laayak kuch peshkasheN karte rahenge...
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