""wo khafa khafa mere naam se"" 'nirala'

by nirala on December 31, 2010, 03:53:02 PM
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ye dhua dhua sa hai ankh me
ye ghutan ghutan si hai saans me

hai kadam kadam pe udasiyan
nahi humsafar mere pass me-

mai jise kabhi nahi bhulta
hai basa hua meri aas me

magar uski berukhi dekhiye
wo khafa khafa mere naam
se

ye jo phool hai ise sab kahen
nahi koi saani tera baag me

magar itna kiski nazar me hai
jo daba daba sa hai khak me
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thanx
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2010, 04:04:08 PM »
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bht bht khoob nirala ji...
sabhi sher ek se badh kar ek hai...
hats off...
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2010, 04:11:11 PM »
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nice Niraala ji. shuru ke shero ki Bahr bahut achhi hai. koshish karte rahiye.

Abhi rang aur nikhrega,
Tu Fan ko aur chamkaaye chal....
Abhi aur bhi sher baaki hai,
Ghazale.n nayi banaye chal......

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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2010, 04:11:52 PM »
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hurreyyyyyyyyy---
aakhir mujhe Topi Uchhaal reply mil hi gaya:)Usual Smile
dekha mene wo kaam kr hi dia na.
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thanx
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aapko bhi hats off
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2010, 04:15:35 PM »
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thanx Vipul sir ji--
aapke comnts se hausala dugna ho gaya..
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2010, 04:58:59 PM »
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Bahut Khub Bhai Kya Likha Hai Kyu Mohhbbat Ho Gai Kya Aapko Bhi..
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2010, 05:02:11 PM »
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sahi me mastam hai ye nirala ji....mazaaa aagya ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 05:05:43 PM »
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thankuuuuuu
wese ye pyar kya hota hai janabe aali--:)Usual Smile
hhehehe pya wyar i ko nai pata bas tukke me likh jata hu kabi kabar.
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 05:14:03 PM »
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boohhoot hi umda nirala ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2010, 05:25:33 PM »
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bahut khub nirala jee,
 bahut ashiqana shayari hai apki
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2011, 01:04:24 AM »
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sukriya Pari aur Dev sahib.
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2011, 03:56:22 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Niralaji...

bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai...

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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2011, 03:59:24 PM »
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wah Niralaji bahut khoob

bahut hi badia likha hai..

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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2011, 02:49:13 PM »
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dil se sukargujar hu Manju aapka.
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