-----/// Wo rishte hum tod aaye /// ----- Hriday

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jis haath ki ungli pakad ke humne chalna seekhaa,
jis haath ko thaam ke kabhi humne padhna seekhaa,
aaj jab us haath ko hamaare haath ki jarurat hui,
humne us haath se haath chhudaake nikalna seekhaa...

aajkal ghar ghar ki yahi kahaani hai... maa baap bachchon ko padha likhaa ke apne paaon pe khade hone laayak banaate hain aur khud se duur achche colleges me admission karwaate hain... unhe wahi job mil jaataa hai... aur wo bachche wahi settle ho jaate hain...!!!


wo dono jo khud bhuke reh ke humein khilaayaa karte the,
wo dono jo humein apni godi me le ke sulaayaa karte the,
aaj jab unhe hamaari jarurat hai, jarurat hai sahaare ki,
hum daud me apni zindagi ke, unhe bahut pichhe chhod aaye,

wo is ummeed me din kaat rahe hain ki kabhi to hum milenge,
wo is ummeed me hain ki unka haath thaam ke fir hum chalenge,
kya pata unhe ki hum talaash me chand sikko ke unhe chhod aaye,
wo rishta to atoot hai unse hamaara, hum us rishte ho tod aaye,

kya isi din ke liye maa baap janam dete hain bachchon ko,
kya isi din ke liye insaan banaate hain apne bachchon ko,
ki jab budhaape me unhe jarurat ho apne bachchon ki tab,
wo bachche unhe bhulaake unse bahut duur chale jaayen.....


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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2012, 09:43:00 PM »
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aajkal her ghar mein yehi kahani hai hriday jee.

accha likha hai aapne jee. maa baap ka farz banta hai bacchon ko padana aur un bacchon ko bi majburan jahan paisa jyada milta hai wahi apna ghar basa lena padta hai. sad5

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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2012, 09:45:40 PM »
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jis haath ki ungli pakad ke humne chalna seekhaa,
jis haath ko thaam ke kabhi humne padhna seekhaa,
aaj jab us haath ko hamaare haath ki jarurat hui,
humne us haath se haath chhudaake nikalna seekhaa...

aajkal ghar ghar ki yahi kahaani hai... maa baap bachchon ko padha likhaa ke apne paaon pe khade hone laayak banaate hain aur khud se duur achche colleges me admission karwaate hain... unhe wahi job mil jaataa hai... aur wo bachche wahi settle ho jaate hain...!!!


wo dono jo khud bhuke reh ke humein khilaayaa karte the,
wo dono jo humein apni godi me le ke sulaayaa karte the,
aaj jab unhe hamaari jarurat hai, jarurat hai sahaare ki,
hum daud me apni zindagi ke, unhe bahut pichhe chhod aaye,

wo is ummeed me din kaat rahe hain ki kabhi to hum milenge,
wo is ummeed me hain ki unka haath thaam ke fir hum chalenge,
kya pata unhe ki hum talaash me chand sikko ke unhe chhod aaye,
wo rishta to atoot hai unse hamaara, hum us rishte ho tod aaye,

kya isi din ke liye maa baap janam dete hain bachchon ko,
kya isi din ke liye insaan banaate hain apne bachchon ko,
ji jab budhaape me unhe jarurat ho apne bachchon ki tab,
wo bachche unhe bhulaake unse bahut duur chale jaayen.....


*****HRIDAY*****


Bahut Bahut Khooob Hridayji..

bahut Acha Laga Yeh Dekhkar ke Aapne Kuch Social issue Par Bhi Likha, Jo Main Chaata Hoon Ke Aur Bhi Log Likha Kare..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat..Iss Theme Par maine Bhi kuch Din Pehle Hi likha Hai..Great Work By you..

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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2012, 10:19:35 PM »
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bahut bahut umdaa khyaalaat pesh kiye hain hriday ji badhaai
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2012, 11:50:21 PM »
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ye hui na kuch baat kp..... mazaa aaya adhkar... aur aankhein num bhi hui.... tum pehle se bahot better likh rahe ho keep writing dear..
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 06:22:17 AM »
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Mast mastam poem Kapil.....Dard apno se durr hone ka.....
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kis ko dein hum dosh.....unhe jin ne udnaa seekhaaya.....prerna di apna ghoslaa banaao.....
Jisne paath padhaaya "MONEY IS EVERYTHING" in this yug......ya apni kismat ko......
Durriyein jaroor ho gayi hain TAN ki nahi hain ye MANN ki.....Aaj bhi Rishte wahi hain....Mein lautna chahta hu....wahin jahaan hum Rishte  chhod aaye......
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2012, 05:51:36 PM »
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Hriday Ji, aapne emotional kar diya, bilkul sahi kaha, yahi ho raha hai aajkal, iske liye aapko dheron daad aur ek rau bhi aapki nazar
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2012, 01:19:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji meri is koshish ko dil se padhne ke liye... koshish ki thi kuch alag likhne ki aur jaanke bahut achcha lagaa ki aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi...!!!

aajkal her ghar mein yehi kahani hai hriday jee.

accha likha hai aapne jee. maa baap ka farz banta hai bacchon ko padana aur un bacchon ko bi majburan jahan paisa jyada milta hai wahi apna ghar basa lena padta hai. sad5


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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 07:16:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Khwaish ji,.....!!!


Bahut Bahut Khooob Hridayji..

bahut Acha Laga Yeh Dekhkar ke Aapne Kuch Social issue Par Bhi Likha, Jo Main Chaata Hoon Ke Aur Bhi Log Likha Kare..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat..Iss Theme Par maine Bhi kuch Din Pehle Hi likha Hai..Great Work By you..

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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 08:21:01 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

bahut bahut umdaa khyaalaat pesh kiye hain hriday ji badhaai
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2012, 04:46:57 PM »
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thanks a lot ji.... aapki baat maan ke hi kuch alag likhne ka try kiya tha... !!!

ye hui na kuch baat kp..... mazaa aaya adhkar... aur aankhein num bhi hui.... tum pehle se bahot better likh rahe ho keep writing dear..
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2012, 07:31:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Anam ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai....!!!

Mast mastam poem Kapil.....Dard apno se durr hone ka.....
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kis ko dein hum dosh.....unhe jin ne udnaa seekhaaya.....prerna di apna ghoslaa banaao.....
Jisne paath padhaaya "MONEY IS EVERYTHING" in this yug......ya apni kismat ko......
Durriyein jaroor ho gayi hain TAN ki nahi hain ye MANN ki.....Aaj bhi Rishte wahi hain....Mein lautna chahta hu....wahin jahaan hum Rishte  chhod aaye......
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2012, 07:32:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Goldy ji....!!!

Hriday Ji, aapne emotional kar diya, bilkul sahi kaha, yahi ho raha hai aajkal, iske liye aapko dheron daad aur ek rau bhi aapki nazar
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