~*~ Yaadein~*~

by deepika_divya on July 25, 2009, 05:51:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 27, 2009, 04:05:52 PM »
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Divya Phir se Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai Dear.. Bachpan Ki yaadon Ko Lafzon me Bakhoobi utaara hai.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so Much Vicky .. Thank you once again Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: July 27, 2009, 04:07:04 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause bahot khoob aur kafi realistic likha hai
Sophi ji, very nice

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa kaash ji.. Usual Smile Bas apne bachpan ki yaadon ko lafzo mea sanjo rahi hun....
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«Reply #17 on: July 27, 2009, 04:08:16 PM »
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Wah Sophi ji,mindblowing,very nice and wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Kaash ji,Rawat ji and Cara ji.bahut khoob likha aap sab ne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so so so so Much Madhu ji.. itni saari appreciation k liye bahoot bahoot shukriyaa
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«Reply #18 on: July 27, 2009, 04:08:50 PM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Sammual ji Usual Smile
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rawattanha
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«Reply #19 on: July 28, 2009, 01:07:07 PM »
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shukriya mann ji and sophi ji bahut shukriya....
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rawattanha
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«Reply #20 on: July 28, 2009, 01:16:53 PM »
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                     YAAD BACHPAN KI


AJJ KI DUNIYA JI RAHE BHULE YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

KABHI HANSAATI KABHI RULATI PAYARI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

ROTE DILL KO PHIR BEHLATI SUHANI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

LAUT LAUT KAR PHIR AAJATI PURANI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

BHAGTI DAURHTI DUNIYA KO PEECHE LAUTATI SAHLATI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

BIKHRE JEEVAN KA EHSAAS DILATI KHILKHILATI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

AAO HUM SAB YAAD KARIN AAJ YAADEIN BACHPAN KI




TANHAAA.....

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«Reply #21 on: August 03, 2009, 04:04:37 PM »
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                     YAAD BACHPAN KI


AJJ KI DUNIYA JI RAHE BHULE YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

KABHI HANSAATI KABHI RULATI PAYARI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

ROTE DILL KO PHIR BEHLATI SUHANI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

LAUT LAUT KAR PHIR AAJATI PURANI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

BHAGTI DAURHTI DUNIYA KO PEECHE LAUTATI SAHLATI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

BIKHRE JEEVAN KA EHSAAS DILATI KHILKHILATI YAADEIN BACHPAN KI

AAO HUM SAB YAAD KARIN AAJ YAADEIN BACHPAN KI




TANHAAA.....



waah Waah Kya baat hai bahoot Khoob Rawat ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #22 on: August 03, 2009, 04:07:03 PM »
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bachpan ke din yun to adhiktar hi yaad aate hain
par us vaqt kuch zyada jab hum khud ko dard me paate hain


bachpan me kaise hum ek doosre ke tifin box badal lete the
kaise doston ke saath khelte hue hi ghar aate the
phir aate hi kuch der me phir nikal jate the
kitna ghulmilke rahte the shak kya nafrat kya nahi jante the
bade hokar dil me hamare nafrat shak ne bhi jaise jagah paa li
bachpan me kitni maasoomiyat ka ghar hum hua karte the

Bahoot bahoot Khoob Kaash ji... sach mea pyaara tha woh bachpan
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«Reply #23 on: August 03, 2009, 04:36:59 PM »
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School Ki yaadein:- School ki yaadein aisi yaadein hai jab hum pehle pehle dost bannana seekte hai... Teacher sabd ka gyan hota hai aur unse sab se judi der saari pyaari yaadein....

Jab hum School jaya karte the,
Basta baari tang, hum roya karte the
Papa utta lete beg huamra baari sa
fir masti karte school jaya karte the !!

School ki masti , Woh dosto ki yaari
bahoot yaad aati hai, Woh bachpan ki khilkaariya
Na thi koi pareshaani , Na Muskil thi koi raah
Bina kisi dar k karte the, Khub saari Shitaaniya

Woh Recess mea Jhoola joolna, Khud der tak khelna
Mil baat kar hum ak saath lunch kiya karte the
ladte the jagadte the, Fir pyar se ak duje ko manate
yaad hai woh pal jab hum betuki baatein kiya karte the

Woh ladko ki pitaai karna, Ladko ki kichai karna
Teacher jab na aaye class mea, woh teacher ki utarna nakal
Woh black board pe khud ka naam likh kar sajana
Jab teacher dekh le hume , tho masooom si banana sakal

Woh picnic k din , woh har wakt Uchalna khudna
yaad hai woh pal jab has has k din guzaar diya karte the
woh exaam k dino mea ek saath milkar padna padana
yaad hai woh pal jab 1st aane k liye Mehnat kiya karte the

Will continue.....

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«Reply #24 on: August 03, 2009, 05:54:10 PM »
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beautiful thread sophi.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #25 on: August 06, 2009, 04:52:58 PM »
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beautiful thread sophi.

Thank You so Much Nidhiii Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: August 07, 2009, 03:05:24 PM »
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Wow Divya.. Ek baar Phir bahut Hi Khubsoorat Yaadon ko kaagaz Par Utaara hai apne... school ki yaaden taaza ho gain.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #27 on: August 10, 2009, 04:23:55 PM »
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Wow Divya.. Ek baar Phir bahut Hi Khubsoorat Yaadon ko kaagaz Par Utaara hai apne... school ki yaaden taaza ho gain.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thank you so so much Mann Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: August 31, 2009, 11:53:59 AM »
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 Applause :clap:GOOD VERY GOOD

KUCH PESH KAR RAHA HUN
LIJIYE PESHE-KHIDMAT HAI

BACHPAN APNA KITNA PYARA
HANSTI AANKHON KA JAHAN SARA

DEKHKAR KHUSHI SE KHUSH HONA
ROUN TOH ROTA CHAMAN SARA

KITNA SUHAN MAUSAM LAGTA
JAB LAUT AANKHON KHELE HUMARA

KHILKHILATI NADI MEIN TAIRTA
BACHHON KA KHFILA NYARA


BACHPAN APNA KITNA PYARA
HANSTI AANKHON KA JAHAN SARA

ITRA ITRA KAR BATEIN KARNA
LUBHANE LAGTA DILL KO PYARA.

KABHI LARHNA KABHI SAATH KHELNA
PHIR HUNSKAR HAATH PAKRHNA
DILL  KO YAAD AATA WOH PAL SARA.
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«Reply #29 on: September 05, 2009, 08:00:59 AM »
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Applause :clap:GOOD VERY GOOD

KUCH PESH KAR RAHA HUN
LIJIYE PESHE-KHIDMAT HAI

BACHPAN APNA KITNA PYARA
HANSTI AANKHON KA JAHAN SARA

DEKHKAR KHUSHI SE KHUSH HONA
ROUN TOH ROTA CHAMAN SARA

KITNA SUHAN MAUSAM LAGTA
JAB LAUT AANKHON KHELE HUMARA

KHILKHILATI NADI MEIN TAIRTA
BACHHON KA KHFILA NYARA


BACHPAN APNA KITNA PYARA
HANSTI AANKHON KA JAHAN SARA

ITRA ITRA KAR BATEIN KARNA
LUBHANE LAGTA DILL KO PYARA.

KABHI LARHNA KABHI SAATH KHELNA
PHIR HUNSKAR HAATH PAKRHNA
DILL  KO YAAD AATA WOH PAL SARA.

Thank you so much Rawattanha ji..

waah kya baat hai bahoot Khoob!.. Bahoot Gehre jasbaat bhari yaadon ko bakoobhi sabdo ka roop diya hai aapne..
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