~*~ Yaadein~*~

by deepika_divya on July 25, 2009, 05:51:12 AM
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Hum Sab Ki life se Hamesha Kuch Na Kuch Yaadein Judi hoti hai, kuch Katti tho Kuch Mitti tho kabhi Kahi aur kabhi Unkahi yaadein... Aao hum sab mil kar Un Yaadon ko Apne lafso se sajaaye..


Bachpan ki yaadein :- yea aisi yaadein hai jinne hum chah kar bhi bhool nahi paate


Bachpan ki woh Naadaniyaa,Daadi Naani ki Kahaaniyaa
Aaj bhi yaad hai , Jab woh mujhe pyaar se sehlati thi

Khelte Khelte jab gir ka jor jor se Roti thi main
Tho Pyaar se mera sar tap tapaa kar mujhe chup karati thi

Naani, Daadi Roz Roz mere man pasand ki cheese banati
Aur beetaake Mujhe apne Ghod mea, Pyar se Khilaati thi

Kitna Pyara tha woh bachpan mera, Jab main hasti gaati thi
Jab karke Khud galti, Dusro ko daant kar ghar aa jati thi 

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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2009, 02:08:04 PM »
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Wah Divya.. Such Me Bachpan Ki Yaad dila di yaar.. Bachpan Ki Khubsoorat Dino Me le gaina aap Humen.. Usual Smile  icon_thumleft Waqai bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai.. Bahut Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2009, 02:26:34 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   SOPHI JI.....

HAR YAADEIN BHOOL SAKHTA HAI INSAAN,
BACHPAN KI YAADEIN KABHI NA BHOOL PAEYGA INSAAN.
BANGLA, GAADI, IZAAT, SHURAT,KITNI BHI CHAEY HAASIL KARLEN INSAAN,
BACHPAN KI KHUSHIYAN GAR KOI LOUTADEY,USKO HAR CHEEZ DE SAKHTA HAI INSAAN.
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2009, 03:02:19 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob Divya ji ..... bohat khoob yaad dilaaya aapne..
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2009, 04:22:05 PM »
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bahut khub bahut achha likha hai jaise mera bachpan ki tasveer ankhon ke samne utar ayi ho!!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice ji.
mein bhi kuch share kar raha hun and these lines are dedicate to  my lost father. he is the person i can't forget ever.


papa kahan ho chale aao wapas fir ek baar
yaad hai woh apka mujhe school lejan
wog sham ko bazar me garam karhi ka
doodh pilana.

woh baithe saath mere mera home work karana
kahan ho papa chale aao ek baar fir.

yaad hai meri galti par datna mujhe
fir gift kar kuch mujhe manana
woh kehna apka woh batan aap biti apki
yaad hai mujhe hansi woh kabhi kabhi
gusse se bhari aankh apki.

ab meri galti par kaun dantega mujhe
kaun fir manaye.
kahan ho papa chale aao ek baar fir.....

Tanhaa....

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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2009, 05:42:25 PM »
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Rawat Sahab.. Aapki Yeh Poem Padh kar Dil Me Ek Udaasi Si Chhaa gai.. Bahut dard Hai aapki is Poem Me.. Apni Yaadon Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Peshkash hai dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Yash Bhai & Cara Ji aapne Bhi Bahut Accha likha hai.. Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2009, 05:13:08 AM »
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Wah Divya.. Such Me Bachpan Ki Yaad dila di yaar.. Bachpan Ki Khubsoorat Dino Me le gaina aap Humen.. Usual Smile  icon_thumleft Waqai bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai.. Bahut Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Thank you So So Much Vicky for you appreciation. Thank you Usual Smile
Tum bhi Kuch likhte apni yaadon ko share karte tho acha lagta..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2009, 05:14:30 AM »
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wow kitna acha likha hai aapne Divya ji  Applause Applause  Applause Applause  Applause
bahot hi maasomiyat liye hue alfaaz

bahot bahot acha topic chuna aapne

aur usme bhi shuruaat bachpan ki yaadon se ki

when i was reading i went through in my childhood days
also aur bahot acha laga.

bachpan ki baaten yaad karte hi ek sama bandhta hai
dil jisme se chaah kar phir nikalna nahi chahta hai


vo garmi me gaanv jana,aur vahan shaam ko khoob ghoomna
kisi bhi bageeche me jakar aam aur amiya khana


vo baarish ka mausam jisme kagaz ki naav chalana
vo copy kitaabon par kitni maasoomiyat se jild chadana

 

Bahoot Bahoot Sukhriyaa Kaash Ji.. Bachpan ki yaadein sach mea mast Hoti hai..

Aapne Bhi Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai.. Bahoot Pyaara !:)
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2009, 05:15:28 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   SOPHI JI.....

HAR YAADEIN BHOOL SAKHTA HAI INSAAN,
BACHPAN KI YAADEIN KABHI NA BHOOL PAEYGA INSAAN.
BANGLA, GAADI, IZAAT, SHURAT,KITNI BHI CHAEY HAASIL KARLEN INSAAN,
BACHPAN KI KHUSHIYAN GAR KOI LOUTADEY,USKO HAR CHEEZ DE SAKHTA HAI INSAAN.

Sukhriya Haresh Ji..

Waah Kya khoob Kaha hai aapne.. Bahoot bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2009, 05:16:07 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob Divya ji ..... bohat khoob yaad dilaaya aapne..
 Applause Applause Applause

Thank you Saurabh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2009, 05:18:27 AM »
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bahut khub bahut achha likha hai jaise mera bachpan ki tasveer ankhon ke samne utar ayi ho!!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice ji.
mein bhi kuch share kar raha hun and these lines are dedicate to  my lost father. he is the person i can't forget ever.


papa kahan ho chale aao wapas fir ek baar
yaad hai woh apka mujhe school lejan
wog sham ko bazar me garam karhi ka
doodh pilana.

woh baithe saath mere mera home work karana
kahan ho papa chale aao ek baar fir.

yaad hai meri galti par datna mujhe
fir gift kar kuch mujhe manana
woh kehna apka woh batan aap biti apki
yaad hai mujhe hansi woh kabhi kabhi
gusse se bhari aankh apki.

ab meri galti par kaun dantega mujhe
kaun fir manaye.
kahan ho papa chale aao ek baar fir.....

Tanhaa....



Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa itne pyaare alfaaz k liye.. Sukhriyaa.

Dukh Dua aapke Pita k baare mea jaan kar.. God Bless Him.

Sach mea Rawat ji aapne bahoot bahoot Khusbsoorat Likha hai.. bahoot Bahoot sunder mano sab drishya saamne aa gaye..Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2009, 05:33:01 AM »
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Sach Mea Hum sab k saath Bachpan ki yaadein is kadar judi hoti hai jaise jism se saaya... Bachpan ki woh katti Mitti yaadein ab bhi sabke man mea taaza hai..

Bachpan ki yaadein - Kuch aur yaadein samete hue lo fir kuch aur baatein

Pyaara tha Bachpan mera , Jab sab mujhe dero laad kiya karte the
Bas kehne bas se hi sab, Meri Jholi mea dero khusiyaa bar diya karte the

Woh Galiyoin mea Pittu khelna, Tennis k bol se Ak dujhe ko Maarna
Chupte chupate kabi sachai se tho kabi cheating se khel ko jeeta karte the

Woh Baarish mea School se Chutti Marna, Barish mea Dosto k sang bheegna
sab milkar Pyaar se naav banate, aur chupke se dusre ki naav duba diya karte the

Woh paani mea chap chap kar k Khudna, khichad se khud ko pooth liya karte
Fir Mummy ki Dant khate, aur unnse kehkar manpasand pakwaan banwaya karte the
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2009, 04:01:21 AM »
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Divya Phir se Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai Dear.. Bachpan Ki yaadon Ko Lafzon me Bakhoobi utaara hai.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2009, 08:49:42 AM »
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Wah Sophi ji,mindblowing,very nice and wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Kaash ji,Rawat ji and Cara ji.bahut khoob likha aap sab ne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: July 27, 2009, 02:08:42 PM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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