zindagi mein jaan..............

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 04, 2011, 04:25:05 PM
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Jee lo jee jaan se,
Jaan jaane kab jaane lage.
jee kar jaan dal do bejaano mein
zindagi mein jaan aane lage.
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2011, 04:27:10 PM »
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Jee lo jee jaan se,
Jaan jaane kab jaane lage.
jee kar jaan dal do bejaano mein
zindagi mein jaan aane lage.
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2011, 05:31:06 PM »
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Jee lo jee jaan se,
Jaan jaane kab jaane lage.
jee kar jaan dal do bejaano mein
zindagi mein jaan aane lage.


Nice Lines ..... SURESH Ji !
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 05:52:53 PM »
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ekdum jhakashhhhhh
mast fultu fatakk hai Ji.
sahi aur sateek baat
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 06:22:40 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne hai janaab... char line dil cheer ke chale gaye...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


Woh Hogi baahoN meiN meri, maiN chaahuN agar toH
MaiN dekhuN usko Zindagi, maiN soNchuN agar toH
         


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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 07:41:51 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 08:02:46 PM »
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Jee lo jee jaan se,
Jaan jaane kab jaane lage.
jee kar jaan dal do bejaano mein
zindagi mein jaan aane lage.

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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2011, 05:05:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshumali ji.
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Nice Lines ..... SURESH Ji !
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 05:06:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya marhoom ji
hausla afzahi ka. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2011, 05:08:07 PM »
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Parwaaz ji waqt dene ka aur hausla afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya.
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne hai janaab... char line dil cheer ke chale gaye...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


Woh Hogi baahoN meiN meri, maiN chaahuN agar toH
MaiN dekhuN usko Zindagi, maiN soNchuN agar toH
         



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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2011, 05:10:27 PM »
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nirala ji aapka yo aur sabko waqt dene ka ,har ek kavita par dhyan dene ke aapki jitni taareef ki jaye kam hai.
jald hi aap yo india shayar honge.
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ekdum jhakashhhhhh
mast fultu fatakk hai Ji.
sahi aur sateek baat
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2011, 03:08:31 PM »
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Nice Line Suresh JI
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2011, 05:16:57 PM »
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thank u Rishi ji.
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Nice Line Suresh JI
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«Reply #13 on: February 07, 2011, 05:20:11 AM »
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Suresh ji---
aapne mera maan badhaya iske liye thanx.
aur haan hum to achhi kalamo ke deewane hain sahab.
padhna sauk hai.
mujhe kya fark padega ki mai kon sa sayar hun.
wese hame khuskusi shayr hi rahne de mere nature ko suit karta hai Usual Smile
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thanx
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