~*~ Zindagi nain soti ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on March 16, 2011, 08:10:37 PM
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Mushkilon ko dekh tu bhale ankhein bandd karlega,
Mager yaad rakh maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..

Tv, fridge, kapde; sabhi hai tere paas sivae shukar kay,
Kyun bhool jata hai kay kayi gharon main nahin hai roti..

Dil uska tujhe hi chahe sada mager thukra deta hai tu,
Keh kay yeh ‘meri girl friend nahin honi chahiye moti..’

Khud ki umar toh mashAllah asmaan jitni unchi hai,
Mager biwi chahiye umar main choti..

Jinke paas zarurat se zada unhe aur milta jata hai,
Jisse zarurat hai; ussi ki khwaish kyun puri nahin hoti?..

Issi desh main rehkar uski yaadein peecha nahin chorrti,
Kahin aur jaa kar ek nayi shuruwat chahta hoon zindagi ki,
Afsos, ‘Khamosh’ ki yeh tamana bhi puri nahin hoti..

Raaton ko bhale neend karlo taklifon ko bhoolane kay liye,
Yaad rakhna doston..Maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..!

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2011, 07:40:53 AM »
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Mushkilon ko dekh tu bhale ankhein bandd karlega,
Mager yaad rakh maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..

Tv, fridge, kapde; sabhi hai tere paas sivae shukar kay,
Kyun bhool jata hai kay kayi gharon main nahin hai roti..

Dil uska tujhe hi chahe sada mager thukra deta hai tu,
Keh kay yeh ‘meri girl friend nahin honi chahiye moti..’

Khud ki umar toh mashAllah asmaan jitni unchi hai,
Mager biwi chahiye umar main choti..

Jinke paas zarurat se zada unhe aur milta jata hai,
Jisse zarurat hai; ussi ki khwaish kyun puri nahin hoti?..

Issi desh main rehkar uski yaadein peecha nahin chorrti,
Kahin aur jaa kar ek nayi shuruwat chahta hoon zindagi ki,
Afsos, ‘Khamosh’ ki yeh tamana bhi puri nahin hoti..

Raaton ko bhale neend karlo taklifon ko bhoolane kay liye,
Yaad rakhna doston..Maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..!

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Good One ... Very Deep Thoughts ... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen .. !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2011, 10:35:45 AM »
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good one rahim...
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2011, 11:18:02 AM »
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Good poem Rahim-bhai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

"waqt se pahle aur kismat se jyada na kisi ko mila hai na milega"
Aur kismat karmo se banti hai........nek...achhe karm he answer hai....

Karm na achhe ho tou kismat nahi khulti
Sach he Maut se pehle zindagi nahi soti
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2011, 10:16:29 AM »
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Good One ... Very Deep Thoughts ... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen .. !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
Shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2011, 10:16:48 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Kayi Sher Bahut Gehre aur Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Ko Darshaate hai..

Bahut AChe.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2011, 10:17:56 AM »
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good one rahim...
Shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2011, 10:18:30 AM »
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Good poem Rahim-bhai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

"waqt se pahle aur kismat se jyada na kisi ko mila hai na milega"
Aur kismat karmo se banti hai........nek...achhe karm he answer hai....

Karm na achhe ho tou kismat nahi khulti
Sach he Maut se pehle zindagi nahi soti
Sach kaha apne di..
Shukriya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2011, 10:19:23 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Kayi Sher Bahut Gehre aur Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Ko Darshaate hai..

Bahut AChe.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2011, 03:55:35 PM »
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Nice Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2011, 02:57:42 PM »
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Nice Rahim Bhai
Shukriya Rishi bhai..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2011, 08:45:45 AM »
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Mushkilon ko dekh tu bhale ankhein bandd karlega,
Mager yaad rakh maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..

Tv, fridge, kapde; sabhi hai tere paas sivae shukar kay,
Kyun bhool jata hai kay kayi gharon main nahin hai roti..

Dil uska tujhe hi chahe sada mager thukra deta hai tu,
Keh kay yeh ‘meri girl friend nahin honi chahiye moti..’

Khud ki umar toh mashAllah asmaan jitni unchi hai,
Mager biwi chahiye umar main choti..

Jinke paas zarurat se zada unhe aur milta jata hai,
Jisse zarurat hai; ussi ki khwaish kyun puri nahin hoti?..

Issi desh main rehkar uski yaadein peecha nahin chorrti,
Kahin aur jaa kar ek nayi shuruwat chahta hoon zindagi ki,
Afsos, ‘Khamosh’ ki yeh tamana bhi puri nahin hoti..

Raaton ko bhale neend karlo taklifon ko bhoolane kay liye,
Yaad rakhna doston..Maut se pehle zindagi nahin soti..!

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

waah rahim sahab bahut khoob
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2011, 08:21:49 PM »
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waah rahim sahab bahut khoob
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Adil jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2011, 08:26:30 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bahoot hi khoob Likha hai... bahoot gehre aur sache jazabaaton se bhari hai tumari yea peshkash... Bahoot Khoob !!
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2011, 08:32:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bahoot hi khoob Likha hai... bahoot gehre aur sache jazabaaton se bhari hai tumari yea peshkash... Bahoot Khoob !!
Teh teh dil se shukriya Di..
Apka comment karna dil ko bahaut khushi deta hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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