Ankhon ko unagalio se

by Bhupinder Kaur on June 12, 2013, 01:40:14 PM
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Ankhon ko unagalio se
Malte hue gaya
Subha ko saanj mei
Dhaalte hue gaya
Jhilmil karta, tare ki tarah
Haseen khayal bante hue gaya
Chattan ko mom mei
Badalte hue gaya
Nazaaro ko khusnuma sa
Nikharte hue gaya
Pawan ke jhoko se
Man ko gudgudte hue gaya
Mausam ki nami se
Hasi bikerte hue gaya
Ek palchin zindagi se
Churate hue gaya
Sunheri kirano ke pehre o mei
Apna rang bharte hue gaya
Din ke ujale mein
Mitti neend ko bulate hue gaya
Jaise koi surmayee ehsaas
Saanso ko sulagte hue gaya
Hae saanwala sa ladka
Ek sawal bante hue gaya……
Ankhon ko unagalio se
Malte hue gaya..................
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2013, 02:22:14 PM »
WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2013, 02:29:57 PM »
wah wah wah wah... bahut hi khoob, wah wah

aakhoh koh maltey huye, main yeh sher padtey huye gaya
dhirey dhirey aakhoh koh jaisey main kholtey huye gaya
padtey padtey aisa nazara aa raha tha saamney
main har ek shabd sey hosh sambhaltey huye gaya


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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2013, 03:26:36 PM »
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waah kya kehna uss sanwale ladke ka jo ankho ko ungaliyo se malte hue gaya..
Bahut umda peshkash hai bhupinder jee..daad daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2013, 05:14:08 PM »
behtereeN nazm,.............bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2013, 07:15:20 PM »
bahut achcha likhe ho bhupinderji. badi hi pyaari nazm rahi. hazaron dili daad.
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2013, 02:59:26 AM »
Ankhon ko unagalio se
Malte hue gaya
Subha ko saanj mei
Dhaalte hue gaya
Jhilmil karta, tare ki tarah
Haseen khayal bante hue gaya
Chattan ko mom mei
Badalte hue gaya
Nazaaro ko khusnuma sa
Nikharte hue gaya
Pawan ke jhoko se
Man ko gudgudte hue gaya
Mausam ki nami se
Hasi bikerte hue gaya
Ek palchin zindagi se
Churate hue gaya
Sunheri kirano ke pehre o mei
Apna rang bharte hue gaya
Din ke ujale mein
Mitti neend ko bulate hue gaya
Jaise koi surmayee ehsaas
Saanso ko sulagte hue gaya
Hae saanwala sa ladka
Ek sawal bante hue gaya……
Ankhon ko unagalio se
Malte hue gaya..................



Awesome......

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan Bhupinder Ji...

Saanwla Sa Ladka....Very Interesting...

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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2013, 12:00:00 PM »
Waah bahaut khoob Bhupinder ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2013, 07:43:17 PM »
Thank you all for your valuable time & comments. icon_flower
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