Eh Maa Kaise Kahoon

by Bhupinder Kaur on July 26, 2013, 02:06:21 PM
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Eh Maa
Ab teri godh mei sar rakh kar b sukoon nahi
Kaise kahoon tujse, Aajkal main kis junoon mei hoon

Yeh such hai,Bahut din hue maa, mai soo nahi
Ek khwaab aisa dekha, dubara palakein band na huee kabhi

Haan sabse khafa khafa hoon, judha si bhi
Jis se maine ki wafa, woh mujse juda hi nahi

Patha hai tera dil tadapta hai,mere gurudware na jane par
Kaise kahu tujse, Jiski main bandgi karti hoon, woh khuda koi aur hai

Kyun na thukrau sabhi rishtey naate ko
Ke jise main saason  ki ladi se joda, uski yaad mei b main shaamil nahi

Jaanti hoon, tuje khush rakna mera farz hai
Ish liye toh mar mar ke bhi, main zinda hoon

Ee maa,Tere charano ko choom kar,Main yeh kehna chahti hoon
Main ab woh beti na rahee,Jo sirf tumse aur tumse pyar karti thi
Kambaqat, main dil kahi aur laga baitee, kisi se pyar karke

Mitti me mil jaande muje, ki waqt ho chala hai ab
Phir kabhi kali banke, tere hi angan mei dubara mehakongi Ye vaada tujse

Eh Maa Kaise Kahoon,  teri beti marr chukee hai....

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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2013, 02:33:05 PM »
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed


bahut dard chhupa hai ish kavita ke pichhe bhupider ji..

bahut khoob tareeke se dard ko lafzon me piroya hai aapne..


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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2013, 03:40:22 PM »
ralyy nice and full of emtions tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2013, 04:04:51 PM »
Very meaningful..
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2013, 05:08:40 PM »
bahut dard nihaan hai ismen
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2013, 10:13:33 PM »
Eh Maa
Ab teri godh mei sar rakh kar b sukoon nahi
Kaise kahoon tujse, Aajkal main kis junoon mei hoon

Yeh such hai,Bahut din hue maa, mai soo nahi
Ek khwaab aisa dekha, dubara palakein band na huee kabhi

Haan sabse khafa khafa hoon, judha si bhi
Jis se maine ki wafa, woh mujse juda hi nahi

Patha hai tera dil tadapta hai,mere gurudware na jane par
Kaise kahu tujse, Jiski main bandgi karti hoon, woh khuda koi aur hai

Kyun na thukrau sabhi rishtey naate ko
Ke jise main saason  ki ladi se joda, uski yaad mei b main shaamil nahi

Jaanti hoon, tuje khush rakna mera farz hai
Ish liye toh mar mar ke bhi, main zinda hoon

Ee maa,Tere charano ko choom kar,Main yeh kehna chahti hoon
Main ab woh beti na rahee,Jo sirf tumse aur tumse pyar karti thi
Kambaqat, main dil kahi aur laga baitee, kisi se pyar karke

Mitti me mil jaande muje, ki waqt ho chala hai ab
Phir kabhi kali banke, tere hi angan mei dubara mehakongi Ye vaada tujse

Eh Maa Kaise Kahoon,  teri beti marr chukee hai....


Wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2013, 10:54:15 PM »
Bhupinder jee likha to bahut bahut khoob hai..But

Itna dard chhupa ke rakhna acchi baat nahi,, 
Maa se uska adhikar chhin.na achhi baat nahi..

P.S. Sry if i hav said kuchh jayada..happy9

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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2013, 12:18:47 AM »
are mar kahan gayi ho, bahut achha likh gayi ho bhai!
leo isi baat pe ek rumaal i mean rau lo.

well jokes apart, dear its life,one has to see its brighter face.
baaki mujhe lagta hai u r a mature person so u can understand that being
negative can't be a solution for any happiness!

khush rahne ke ya positive rahne ke mere do funde hain! bilkul muft de raha hun lekin waise hi(uselessly) hi mat le lena! uff  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

pehla to ye ki khud ko egoless rakho! are eggless nahi egoless! haan! kyunki
90% life 90% persons doosron ki life jeete hain,ab ye thoda psycological hai aur tumne meri koi class bhi attend nahi ki hai abtak hehe phir bhi samjhaata hun! aadmi apne ego ke chakkar me apni soch se bahar nahi nikal paata aur apni life ko neutral hoke nahi dekh paata aur naturally uska ego
dunia ki bhedchaal me fans jaata hai aur isi k kha g roopi dukh me sukh dhundhta hua jiwan nikal jaata hai!

chalo doosraa funda wo ye ki aadmi khud ko khud hi positive kar sakta hai,koi doosra nahi i mean self-motivation! kabhi bhi apne ko guilt nahi karna chahiye ya insecure nahi samajhna chahiye,apne adhyaatm(uski class kabhi aur dunga)me main ise hi gair zururi maanta hun!

and last but not the least aur wo ye mam ki vyakti ke paas ek aim hona chahiye something meaningful,adhiktar aimless hona hi dukh ka kaaran hota hai i mean hamari bhaawuk energy ka channelisation hume karna aana chahiye aur uska sabse achha tareekaa hai use apne aim me lagaana!


ok nw bye! is bachhe ki baaten bahut ho gayin! b cheerful!

 
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2013, 11:13:50 AM »
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waah waah waah waah bahut sundar , bahut bahut pyaari rachnaa ... !!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2013, 11:25:27 PM »
gud.
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2013, 08:40:30 AM »
tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed


bahut dard chhupa hai ish kavita ke pichhe bhupider ji..

bahut khoob tareeke se dard ko lafzon me piroya hai aapne..


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Thank You for understanding the emotions behind the poem
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2013, 08:42:41 AM »
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waah waah waah waah bahut sundar , bahut bahut pyaari rachnaa ... !!!

Thank You ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2013, 08:44:29 AM »
Good.
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2013, 01:06:01 PM »
are mar kahan gayi ho, bahut achha likh gayi ho bhai!
leo isi baat pe ek rumaal i mean rau lo.
Hmm such kaha aapne, M  Still Alive & Thanks for the Rau

well jokes apart, dear its life,one has to see its brighter face.
baaki mujhe lagta hai u r a mature person so u can understand that being
negative can't be a solution for any happiness!
Ji sumtimes Bn Positive also, doesn’t means happiness & I jus tried to portray the feelings nothing else

khush rahne ke ya positive rahne ke mere do funde hain! bilkul muft de raha hun lekin waise hi(uselessly) hi mat le lena! uff  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
pehle toh ye ki khud ko egoless rakho! are eggless nahi egoless! haan! kyunki
90% life 90% persons doosron ki life jeete hain,ab ye thoda psycological hai aur tumne meri koi class bhi attend nahi ki hai abtak hehe phir bhi samjhaata hun! aadmi apne ego ke chakkar me apni soch se bahar nahi nikal paata aur apni life ko neutral hoke nahi dekh paata aur naturally uska ego
dunia ki bhedchaal me fans jaata hai aur isi k kha g roopi dukh me sukh dhundhta hua jiwan nikal jaata hai!
 “EGO” woh kya hota hai, meri life ki dictionary mei yeh word hai hi nahi ji, M quite natural but neutral nahi ho pathi.... def i will try ji


chalo doosraa funda wo ye ki aadmi khud ko khud hi positive kar sakta hai,koi doosra nahi i mean self-motivation! kabhi bhi apne ko guilt nahi karna chahiye ya insecure nahi samajhna chahiye,apne adhyaatm(uski class kabhi aur dunga)me main ise hi gair zururi maanta hun!
 M O+ve ji ha ha ha aksar log jo doosro ko motivate karte hai, par khud ko kar sakte nahi.

and last but not the least aur wo ye mam ki vyakti ke paas ek aim hona chahiye something meaningful,adhiktar aimless hona hi dukh ka kaaran hota hai i mean hamari bhaawuk energy ka channelisation hume karna aana chahiye aur uska sabse achha tareekaa hai use apne aim me lagaana!
Hmm I Agree there should be an “AIM” & according to my dis poem, my aim is to explore life after death ha ha ha


ok nw bye! is bachhe ki baaten bahut ho gayin! b cheerful!
Ji hum aapki baatein yaad rakhenge..... hmm M Cheerful, M Beautiful & M jus a Fool ha ha ha

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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2013, 01:09:11 PM »
bahut dard nihaan hai ismen
Thank You Sirji
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