Ghazal: Pal main doori zaat adhuri reh jati hai

by R.M. Dixit on May 19, 2011, 05:28:05 PM
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                Pal main doori ho jaati hai
                 Zaat adhori ho jaati hai.

                 Ankhon mai neend aati nahin
                 Raat poori ho jaati hai.

                 Pahle to hoti hai chahet
                 phir majboori ho jaati hai.

                 Tanhayee jab bool pare tu
                 Baat zaroori ho jaati hai

                 Had se pyaar ghuzer jaye to
                 Akse doori ho jaati hai.       
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2011, 09:32:19 AM »
bhahut sachi…
mast ghazal kahi janaab…
bht khub
daad dil se
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2011, 09:33:52 AM »



                Pal main doori ho jaati hai
                 Zaat adhori ho jaati hai.

                 Ankhon mai neend aati nahin
                 Raat poori ho jaati hai.

                 Pahle to hoti hai chahet
                 phir majboori ho jaati hai.

                 Tanhayee jab bool pare tu
                 Baat zaroori ho jaati hai

                 Had se pyaar ghuzer jaye to
                 Akse doori ho jaati hai.       


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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 03:47:10 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2011, 05:10:46 PM »

Dixit Ji,

Wah..kya baat hai..
Achchhi baat kahi hai aapne ghazal men.

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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2011, 10:15:11 AM »



                Pal main doori ho jaati hai
                 Zaat adhori ho jaati hai.

                 Ankhon mai neend aati nahin
                 Raat poori ho jaati hai.

                 Pahle to hoti hai chahet
                 phir majboori ho jaati hai.

                 Tanhayee jab bool pare tu
                 Baat zaroori ho jaati hai

                 Had se pyaar ghuzer jaye to
                 Akse doori ho jaati hai.       


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