shabd

by rani mahrani on February 15, 2009, 11:59:36 PM
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rani mahrani
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tere lab sai niklay shabd jo hain
ghulab ki khushboo pheladiay
har dil ko roshan ker diay
kai maghroor nashay mein ho gaye

pehchaanay sai vo shabd thai
hastay khiltay gharanai kay
jo haasil kiay thai humnai
vo havah mein gumshudah huay

pehchaan thi na door ki
kai noor sai nikli roshini
zameen per jab gir pari
toh havah mein baithay shabd jo thai
apnay raang dikhlagaye
sookhi zameen sai bhi voh
ghulab mein ghulab khila diay
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2009, 02:43:12 AM »
Rani Maharani ji... bahut badiya likha hai aapne  Usual Smile Thumbs UP
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 06:09:45 AM »
tere lab sai niklay shabd jo hain
ghulab ki khushboo pheladiay
har dil ko roshan ker diay
kai maghroor nashay mein ho gaye

pehchaanay sai vo shabd thai
hastay khiltay gharanai kay
jo haasil kiay thai humnai
vo havah mein gumshudah huay

pehchaan thi na door ki
kai noor sai nikli roshini
zameen per jab gir pari
toh havah mein baithay shabd jo thai
apnay raang dikhlagaye
sookhi zameen sai bhi voh
ghulab mein ghulab khila diay


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Rani bohat khoob likha hai aapne...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 09:18:57 AM »
Good Work Maharani....Keep writing
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