Yad aata hai har pal

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Deewana bana gayee mujhe, anjan haseena
Dil me bas gayee mere, ban ke vo nageena

Chanchal bare thhe usske, kajrare do naina
Madhosh bana gayee mujhe, bin peeye paimana

Kya roop payee thhi bala ka, vo mautarma
Milne ko roj tarse ab, looti mera chaina

Sapno mein roj aane lagi, yaro vo najneena
Yad aata hai har pal, uska alhar muskurana


  
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2015, 10:52:34 AM »
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बहुत शानदार शायरी।
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2015, 12:00:04 PM »
खूब कहा......

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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2015, 02:01:08 PM »
Deewana bana gayee mujhe, anjan haseena
Dil me bas gayee mere, ban ke vo nageena

Chanchal bare thhe usske, kajrare do naina
Madhosh bana gayee mujhe, bin peeye paimana

Kya roop payee thhi bala ka, vo mautarma
Milne ko roj tarse ab, looti mera chaina

Sapno mein roj aane lagi, yaro vo najneena
Yad aata hai har pal, uska alhar muskurana


 

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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2015, 05:22:58 PM »
bohat khubsurat ehsaas sir ji waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2015, 05:24:14 PM »
Deewana bana gayee mujhe, anjan haseena
Dil me bas gayee mere, ban ke vo nageena

Chanchal bare thhe usske, kajrare do naina
Madhosh bana gayee mujhe, bin peeye paimana

Kya roop payee thhi bala ka, vo mautarma
Milne ko roj tarse ab, looti mera chaina

Sapno mein roj aane lagi, yaro vo najneena
Yad aata hai har pal, uska alhar muskurana


wah wah.. bahut accha likha hai.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2015, 10:53:54 PM »
bahut khoobsurat Nandbahu Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2015, 05:59:38 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause

बहुत शानदार शायरी।
thanx
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2015, 06:00:30 AM »
खूब कहा......


thanx amit ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2015, 06:47:26 AM »
बहुत सुंदर रचना ढेरो दाद कबूल करे
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2015, 08:45:54 AM »
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thanx adil
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2015, 08:46:31 AM »
bohat khubsurat ehsaas sir ji waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
thanx jeet ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2015, 08:47:08 AM »
wah wah.. bahut accha likha hai.. Applause Applause Applause
thanx suman ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2015, 08:48:13 AM »
bahut khoobsurat Nandbahu Jee.
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thanx surindran ji
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