Main tuteya patta kisse birk da..........

by JEET* on October 08, 2009, 09:10:09 AM
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JEET*
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Main tuteya patta kisse birkh da
meri zindagi di bas ehi kahani

din kaale te raatan suniya
naam kisse de jad hoyi jawani

na main rowa, na main hassa
ankhan vich bas bhareya paani

har ik pal main tenu tarsan
JEET
,edan hi bas jind muk jaani



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Sammual
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2009, 10:14:45 AM »
Bahut Khoob Jeet Ji.Likhte Rahiye..
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JEET*
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2009, 10:31:41 AM »
Tuhaada bohaat bohaat dhanwaad Sam...badi chiran pichon punjabi vich likhan da mann hoya hai... je ho sake tan reply karke saath dewo


jad kade payar di badli chawundi honi ae
bhuli bisri kitte sadi vi yaad aundi honi ae

sambh rakhi jo sadi yaad tu purani
ankhan aggge oh vi aa jaandi honi ae

dekh basant khildi vich,titli-phool milde
mayaoosi tere chehre te vi aundi honi ae

maneya,dil pathar kar kitte door chali gayi
par jande jaande,koi dhaw tu vi mari honi ae
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2009, 11:16:40 AM »
woww very nice Jeet..padh ke bahut changa lagiya..

mere dil de chaalee kade tainu vi nazar aonge ki nahi
kade meriyan akhiyan de hanju tere dil nu narmaonge ki nahi

kade mere shahar de baddal tere kothe te vi garjan
kade mere dard di badli teri galli ch vi chaave

kade tun sochan ch hove te tainu mera khayal aave
oh pal oh guzariya hoia vela teriyan akhiyan aggon langh jave

jadon patjhad di rutte birkhan ton patte jhadange
tainu mera pyar hawa da jhoka ban ke choo javega
fer na tu gussa kar sakenga..te na eh jagg koi ilzaam la pavega


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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2009, 01:07:35 PM »
Waah Waah Jeet And Nikki bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Keep Rocking !
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JEET*
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2009, 01:40:32 PM »
Waah Waah Jeet And Nikki bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Keep Rocking !

Thanks Sophi....
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JEET*
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2009, 01:44:43 PM »
woww very nice Jeet..padh ke bahut changa lagiya..

mere dil de chaalee kade tainu vi nazar aonge ki nahi
kade meriyan akhiyan de hanju tere dil nu narmaonge ki nahi

kade mere shahar de baddal tere kothe te vi garjan
kade mere dard di badli teri galli ch vi chaave

kade tun sochan ch hove te tainu mera khayal aave
oh pal oh guzariya hoia vela teriyan akhiyan aggon langh jave

jadon patjhad di rutte birkhan ton patte jhadange
tainu mera pyar hawa da jhoka ban ke choo javega
fer na tu gussa kar sakenga..te na eh jagg koi ilzaam la pavega






 wah Nikki ... too gud...tuhade nal likh ke bas puraane din yaad aa jande ne.... kidan ek toh bad ek jawab likheya karde si, jiwe kisse tank de gole fire hunde hon... Usual Smile  par hun tan koi reply vi nahi mildi.. dekho na sada dost vi sanu ithe bhula ke gayab hoya phirda hai 

naa jee saka, naa maar saka
tera hijar na hun main jar saka

tutte taare, tutte waade
hun bhrosa kisse te na kar saka

hoya han majboor,bas ik tere karke
Ilzam vi tere ser, na koi dhar saka

aaisi baaji khedi tain Ishqe di
Na main Jit saka,na har saka....
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2009, 04:27:06 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoor he vadiya likhiya hai Jeet ji and Nikki dear!!!  Dost gayab nahi hua hai...yahi hai befikar ho likhte raho!!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2009, 05:35:09 PM »
Bahut Khoob Jeet Ji
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Sammual
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2009, 11:23:27 PM »
Wah Bahut Hi Wadiya Jeet Ji & Nikki Ji. Applause Applause

Jaan Ban Ke Jaan le Gaye Oh,
Dokha Kar Ke Maan Le Gaye Oh,
Dukh Ta Sirf Is Gal Da Hai,
Dil De Ke Jahaan Le Gaye Oh.

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nikki
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2009, 10:47:08 AM »
Thank u so much Sammual, Sophi, Rajesh, Jeet and Pooja sis!
Jeet tussi fer ton bahut vadhiya likhiya...

Ishke di baazi har ke vi jit laindi
je tu mere naal hunda

Main gumma nu vi sir mathe rakh laindi
je tera saath hunda

main teri khatir iss duniya nu vi chad dendi
je hoia tu na enna majboor hunda

na aapan vichad_de
na dilan nu thes lagdi
na jeena enna dushvaar hunda
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2009, 06:15:17 PM »
Nice and excellent Jeet Ji, Nikki JI and Sammual ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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JEET*
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«Reply #12 on: October 13, 2009, 03:50:53 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoor he vadiya likhiya hai Jeet ji and Nikki dear!!!  Dost gayab nahi hua hai...yahi hai befikar ho likhte raho!!!

thanks ji Usual Smile
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JEET*
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«Reply #13 on: October 13, 2009, 03:51:28 PM »
Bahut Khoob Jeet Ji

Thanks Harish....
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JEET*
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«Reply #14 on: October 13, 2009, 03:53:08 PM »
Wah Bahut Hi Wadiya Jeet Ji & Nikki Ji. Applause Applause

Jaan Ban Ke Jaan le Gaye Oh,
Dokha Kar Ke Maan Le Gaye Oh,
Dukh Ta Sirf Is Gal Da Hai,
Dil De Ke Jahaan Le Gaye Oh.



Bohat vadhiya... wonderful Usual Smile

Vas ke dil vich chandri
dard ishq da seene la gayi
aap so jawe befikar neendran
te sanu taare ginNa sikha gayi

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