waiting for death

by maan harpreet on November 20, 2015, 05:24:41 PM
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Main bahut hi udeekdan ha ohnu,
par oh aundi nahin.
pata nahi lokin kyon ronde(cry),
Jad oh aundi hai.
Meri rooh tan osnu,
milne nu kurlaundi hai.
Oh aave te mainu lai jave othe,
jithe na khushian na khere ne,
na othe dukh hai,
na othe sukh hi bathere ne.
kaash oh aave tan main v khush ho jaavan,
te kade na mukan wali nindre (sleep) so (sleep) javan.
Oh Mainu te main usnu paa lawan.
Meri Maut mainu khaa laye te main usnu paa lawan.

Written by harpreet Maan.
Pls comment......
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2015, 05:48:04 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2015, 06:53:02 AM »
bahut changaa likhyaa tusii, lekin ik gal kavan gaa gey ke maut da intzaar karnaa buzdilii eh, apney waqt naal zaroor aayegi. Zindgi nun jeenaa rab wal faraz bandaa eh.
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2015, 06:28:04 AM »
Thanx 4 ur rly... Shiv kumar batalvi said that life is a slow suicide and thus this poetry came in my mind....
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