waiting for someone.

by stromy on January 28, 2009, 02:23:31 PM
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i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
whom i know will pass by the lane,
my heart says she is the one for whom i m waiting.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
she did not arrived at the usual time,
my heart says she will come in a minute or two.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
now its getting dark i can hardly see things around,
still hoping to see her bright face in that dark.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
she did not show her up after long hours,
god has got some time to play tricks it started to drizzle.

i m still standing,im still standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 02:50:37 PM »
lovely one   stromy ji..

I AM STANDING,I AM STANDING,
TO SEE THE GLIMPSE OF A GIRL.
AS USUAL,SHE WILL PASS BY THIS LANE,
MY HEART SAYS WITHIN A MINUTE,SHE WILL COME IN THIS LANE.

I AM STANDING,IAM STANDING,
TO SEE THE GLIMPSE OF A GIRL.
SUDDENLY MY FRIENDS PHONE CAME TO ME,AND SAYS TO ME,
SHE IS PASSING BY MY LANE,AND LOOKING AT ME.


AND SAYS,SHE IS PASSING IN MY LANE,AND LOOKING AT ME.

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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2009, 03:34:32 PM »
Bohat Hi Achche,.
Nice One Stormy Ji,.
And Cara Ji,.

Kash Ke Mujhe Bhi English Aati,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2009, 07:43:57 PM »
well done Cara jee and Stormy jee..



i was once an english writer...i used to write in only english...today all that seems like a memory...well ill add two lines to the poem but not the way the is already set...

as the clock ticks,
i wait and wait,
to see the moon that lives on earth,
the moon that lightens my heart...

the anxiousness to make it to her heart kills me,
the patience runs within milli seconds of seconds,
the blood bursts out of my face in anger,
the anger of tearing my heart apart by her soul...

she stares at me giving me a touch of life,
a touch of her soft lips which wont be mine ever,
the pain of desperation leaves me no where in this world,
the desperation of holding her tight in my arms once...


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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2009, 08:00:36 PM »
Wah Rahim Bhai,.
Aap Bhi Aangrezi Likhte Ho,.
Great yaar,.

Nice One,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2009, 04:59:33 AM »
shukriya...hum toh pehle sirf angrezi main hi likha karte the...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2009, 05:40:19 AM »
Very nice Stromy.. Thumbs UP

Very nice cara ji.. Thumbs UP

very nice DH... Thumbs UP
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2009, 05:56:32 AM »
Shukriya Honey jee
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stromy
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2009, 03:02:34 PM »
Shukriya yaroon....  notworthy
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 08:21:06 AM »
Well done stromy , cera & dead heart . keep it up.
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dead heart
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 08:22:29 PM »
Shukriya Sophi jee
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 09:44:35 PM »
i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
whom i know will pass by the lane,
my heart says she is the one for whom i m waiting.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
she did not arrived at the usual time,
my heart says she will come in a minute or two.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
now its getting dark i can hardly see things around,
still hoping to see her bright face in that dark.

i m standing,i m standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
she did not show her up after long hours,
god has got some time to play tricks it started to drizzle.

i m still standing,im still standing,
to see the glimpse a girl,
Nice presentation Stormy Ji

Khade khade intezaar karte rahe
Har dard ko dil mein sahte rahe
Na aayee woh to khud ko samjhate rahe
Aur anth mein bhagwaan ko koshte rahe
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stromy
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2009, 05:03:01 PM »
Khade khade intezaar karte rahe
Har dard ko dil mein sahte rahe
Na aayee woh to khud ko samjhate rahe
Aur anth mein bhagwaan ko koshte rahe




very nice
rajesh harish laughing4 ji
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