Rakhta hu

by love4u on May 25, 2013, 04:27:09 AM
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Ye baat hai ki gumnaam rehta hu main,

Teri har khabar din raat rakhta hu main,

Teri har saans ki aahat aati hai mujhe,

Dil ke kareeb tere jazbaat rakhta hu main.


Teri khamoshi ki awaaz sunta hu main,

Teri unnkahi fariyaad sunta hu main,

Rehta nahi tere dil main ye aur baat hai,

Par tere dil ki har awaaz sunta hu main.


To kya hua Tujh se pyar ki umeed rakhta hu main,

Ye dil sirf tere liye rakhta hu main,

Vo aur honge dil todne wale,

Ki teri har khushi hifazzat se rakhta hu main.
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2013, 12:31:08 PM »
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Very nice. But if this is ur work then pls dont post in share section.
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2013, 02:14:08 PM »
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yes its my work, so in which section I should put in??
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2013, 11:09:08 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2013, 11:20:46 PM »
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bahut khoob..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2013, 12:03:26 AM »
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Bahut badhiya

apna creation aap shayri section ke approprite head me post kare..ise aap SUBMIT POETRY ke baad jo drop down menu hai vaha se select kar sakte hain.
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2013, 12:49:20 AM »
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dhanyevad mkv... aage se main aaisa hi karunga...!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 01:40:06 AM »
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very    nice   composition..... 
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 02:15:38 AM »
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thanks Tuhina...!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 02:09:39 PM »
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waah wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2013, 02:12:57 PM »
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aane wale waqt meN aap likhoge aur bhi sundar, main ye umeed rakhta huN.... Ahcha likha hai saaheb, bas aage bhi yuNhi likhte rahiye...!!
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