NAGIN BIRAH KI HAYE RE DASNE LAGI ...........By "Aarish"

by Aarish on September 03, 2012, 01:30:08 AM
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Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,
 
 Lekin sakhi ri aaNkh se aansu nikal gaye,


 Kaase kahuN tohre bina lage nahi jiya,        (Kaase = kaise )

 Kahe gaya bideswa julmi morey piya            (Morey = Mere )


 Dekhe kabhi jo pyaar ke sapne hi jal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin Sakhi ri aaNkh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Bairan hawa ye shool si chubhne lagi mujhe,

 Nagin birah ki haye re dasne lagi mujhe,


 Tum to badal ke jindagi najreN badaL gaye,            (Jindagi = Zindagi / NajreN = NazreN )


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 Lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye,


 Koyal kuhu kuhu kare pi pi papihara,

 kari ghata ko dekhkar jalta hai man mora,            ( Kari = kali )


 Ab ke baras bhi pyaar ke mosam nikal gaye,


 Jab se gaye hamre piya hum to sambhal gaye,

 lekin sakhi ri aankh se aaNsu nikal gaye..

 


                 " Aarish"

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 02:42:38 AM »
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wah wah wah aarish ji kya khoob likha hai aapne........virah mein tadpti ladki ki kahani ki kya khoob masumiyat bayani ... jo sirf bada fankar hi kar sakta hai.........


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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 02:49:33 AM »
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Vaah Vaah aarish bhai
bahut umda.. kya kahne..
ye virah vedna..kya kahuN..
vo maasumiyat se..aansu bah gaye kahna..
is ek line pe hi dil khush ho gaya..Bahut khoob
dili DAAD .....aur
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 03:44:23 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Aarish Ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 04:12:13 AM »
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wah wah wah aarish ji kya khoob likha hai aapne........virah mein tadpti ladki ki kahani ki kya khoob masumiyat bayani ... jo sirf bada fankar hi kar sakta hai.........


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shukriya saudagar jee hausla afzai ka, lekin kuch zyada hi tareef kardi aapne, main koi bada fankar nahi , bas aap sab ka bhai hun, aise hi pyar banaye rakhyega...
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 04:13:08 AM »
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Vaah Vaah aarish bhai
bahut umda.. kya kahne..
ye virah vedna..kya kahuN..
vo maasumiyat se..aansu bah gaye kahna..
is ek line pe hi dil khush ho gaya..Bahut khoob
dili DAAD .....aur
shukriya mukesh ji , bohut nawazish...
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2012, 04:16:29 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Aarish Ji
shukriya sanjeev ji ,
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 04:23:20 AM »
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bahut bahut badhuiya aarish ji.. Usual Smile

maja aa gaya padh ke.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 04:52:28 AM »
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bahut bahut badhuiya aarish ji.. Usual Smile

maja aa gaya padh ke.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2012, 04:55:28 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Aarish ji....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2012, 05:13:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Aarish ji....!!!
shukriya hriday ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2012, 06:14:25 AM »
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bahut khoob....
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2012, 06:30:58 AM »
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bahut khoob....
Shukriya gayatri ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2012, 08:17:08 AM »
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Arish Sahaab Aadaab!

kia kahne janab waaH bahut umdaa ... bada hi khoob
geet kaha hai janab... ahsaas O khayaal aur lafzoN
ki mithas aik se badhkar aik rahi.. Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat nazm par humari dheroN dili daad hazir
hai likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2012, 08:32:11 AM »
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Arish Sahaab Aadaab!

kia kahne janab waaH bahut umdaa ... bada hi khoob
geet kaha hai janab... ahsaas O khayaal aur lafzoN
ki mithas aik se badhkar aik rahi.. Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat nazm par humari dheroN dili daad hazir
hai likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile


shukriya parwaz bhai
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