Aajamalo mujhe..... manjum

by manjum on April 29, 2011, 12:16:39 PM
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Tum jo chaho to fir aajamalo mujhe.
Apni mahfil se yun na nikalo mujhe.

Tum se bas itni si mujhko ummid hai,
Ladkhadaun agar tum sambhalo mujhe.

Ek pal main palat ke main aa jaungi,
Ek aawaz do aur bulalo mujhe.

“mann” to tulsi ka chhota sa ek beej hai,
Apne aangan main bas ugalo mujhe.


manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2011, 01:21:17 PM »
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sanso se ruuh tak basa lu tujhe
bewafa nahi jo aajmaa lu tujhe

ladkhadaye kabhi jo kadam tere
baanho me apni utha lu tujhe

du ‘aawaaz’ dubaara na aaye wo naubat
ke ik baar me ‘apna’ bana lu tujhe

‘mann’ to haqikat hai ‘kb’ ke armaano ki
apne aangan ki khusboo bana lu tujhe…………
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2011, 05:59:38 PM »
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Bohat Badhiya Manjum Ji
N Nice Rep Killbill Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2011, 03:34:58 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kbji....

kamaal ka reply diya aapne....
sath rahie...
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2011, 03:36:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya......yashji...

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2011, 08:06:56 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anju jee aur Killbill dost..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2011, 08:16:44 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihabji.....

sath rahie.......
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2011, 08:17:41 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya rahimji..........

sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2011, 08:24:45 AM »
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Tum jo chaho to fir aajamalo mujhe.
Apni mahfil se yun na nikalo mujhe.

Tum se bas itni si mujhko ummid hai,
Ladkhadaun agar tum sambhalo mujhe.

Ek pal main palat ke main aa jaungi,
Ek aawaz do aur bulalo mujhe.

“mann” to tulsi ka chhota sa ek beej hai,
Apne aangan main bas ugalo mujhe.


manju "mann"

bahut pyara andaaz manjum iltejah karne ka
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2011, 08:30:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shebaji.....aapke cmnt dekh kar acha laga.....

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2011, 10:18:41 AM »
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Tum jo chaho to fir aajamalo mujhe.
Apni mahfil se yun na nikalo mujhe.

Tum se bas itni si mujhko ummid hai,
Ladkhadaun agar tum sambhalo mujhe.

Ek pal main palat ke main aa jaungi,
Ek aawaz do aur bulalo mujhe.

“mann” to tulsi ka chhota sa ek beej hai,
Apne aangan main bas ugalo mujhe.


manju "mann"

Waah ... Manjum Ji !!!

Kya khoob umdaa Khayaalaat Pesh kiye hai ... !

acchi ghazal huii ... tahe dil se daad .... !!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2011, 11:22:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob...

apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon..

saaree duniya mein raushan mera naam hai
koee kah ke 'Raqeeb' ab bulaao mujhe

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2011, 11:29:08 AM »
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wah
raushni tang galiyaron ki
aawara hu,kya qadar aawaron ki………………
Bahut khoob...

apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon..

saaree duniya mein raushan mera naam hai
koee kah ke 'Raqeeb' ab bulaao mujhe

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2011, 11:33:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob...

apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon..

saaree duniya mein raushan mera naam hai
koee kah ke 'Raqeeb' ab bulaao mujhe

Raqeeb Lucknowi

ujaala bhi andhere ki panaah chahata hai,
apni bhi ranggat woh sayaah chata hai
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2011, 11:35:40 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji...... aapne pasand kiya jankar acha laga...

sath rahie....
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