Aane Wale kal mein Log Puchenge Ke Bachpan Kaisa Hota hai "Khwaish"

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«Reply #30 on: May 15, 2010, 07:00:00 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 14, 2010, 10:09:47 AM
wah wah bahut khoob khwaishji.hamesha ki tarhaa bahut achha likha hai

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«Reply #31 on: August 25, 2010, 06:11:56 PM »
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Pehli hi line dil main ek gehra asar daal gayi...aur sochne ko majboor karti aapki ye nazm bohot behtareen peshkash hai...Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost ek baar phir se ek talakh magar sachchi baat kehne ke liye  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #32 on: September 04, 2010, 07:21:01 PM »
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Khwaish jitani tareef karu , utani he kam hai... wah wah ek ek shabd rooh ko hilata chal agaya ..... superbbbb..//// I am really speechless after reading your this poem... Bhagwaan ji hamesha app per aor apki kalam per apna ashirwaad rakhein....
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«Reply #33 on: September 04, 2010, 07:45:02 PM »
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khawahish Jee Aadaab!

bahut hi mindblowing thought hai janab aur usper aapka andaaz e bayaaN bhi khoob raha....
Kafi achchi kavita kahi hai aapne......

Aapke is sachai bhari kavita per dil se daad janab....

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye.......
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«Reply #34 on: January 13, 2011, 08:51:39 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 14, 2010, 11:10:15 AM
Wah bahoth qoob .. Khawish sahab .. Dad qubool karen ..khuch kahene ko mann karta hai kaafi mutasir kiya hai taherir ne .. do misre jo ke issi pasmanzar me kahe hain .. umid hai pasand aye apko ..


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«Reply #35 on: February 08, 2011, 07:53:01 AM »
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Quote from: mrkotians on April 16, 2010, 03:16:37 AM
Main Hairaan Hoon,Iss Zameen Par Aaj Bhi,
Log Ladhte Hai Sirf Dharam-Mazhab ke Naam Par!!!
"Khwaish" Insaano Ki Iss Zameen Par Insaano Wali Baat Nahi,
Pata Nahi Unn Panchiyon ka Ambar Kaisa Hota Hai....

Wah... Wah.. Khwaish Ji... Subhan Allah... Subhan Allah...
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Aapka... Daad Kubool Kijiye...

Aapka Teh Dil Se shukriya Rehaan Ji..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega..
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«Reply #36 on: February 08, 2011, 08:08:05 AM »
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Quote from: shab on April 16, 2010, 09:45:12 AM
BAHUT HI BAHUT HI KHOOB KHWAISH SAHAB....
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«Reply #37 on: August 16, 2011, 07:10:42 PM »
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Khwaish jitani tareef karu , utani he kam hai... wah wah ek ek shabd rooh ko hilata chal agaya ..... superbbbb..//// I am really speechless after reading your this poem... Bhagwaan ji hamesha app per aor apki kalam per apna ashirwaad rakhein....


Sooooooooooo sweeeet Of You...Thankyou Soooooooooo much Pooja..

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«Reply #38 on: December 10, 2011, 01:11:06 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 04, 2010, 07:45:02 PM
khawahish Jee Aadaab!

bahut hi mindblowing thought hai janab aur usper aapka andaaz e bayaaN bhi khoob raha....
Kafi achchi kavita kahi hai aapne......

Aapke is sachai bhari kavita per dil se daad janab....

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye.......
Khdua hafez........ Usual Smile         



Aapka tehhhhhhhhh Dil Se Shukriya parwaaz Ji..

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«Reply #39 on: December 11, 2011, 04:07:44 AM »
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Kwahish Saab adab arz,
Apki nazam kafi heart felt lagi, duniya ko aap jaise aman passand login ki zaroorat hai, lekin afsos ye hai ke ghurbat aur bhook-o-aflaas logon ko extremist bana deti hai, apne humsaya mulk Pakistan ki hi misaal lijye, bohat se ghareebon ke bache extremist wahabi madrisson main taleem pate hain aur phir unko 'dirty power politics' ke liye use kiya jata hai. Kassab sahib ki hi misaal le lain. Jab tak duniya main ghurbat hai ruling elite  mazhab or nationalism ke naam per politics khelain ge. apko shayad bura lage lekin mazhab aur komiyat donon double edged swords hain, achai aur burai donon ke liye istamal hoti ayi hain, babri masjid ka saniha, Taliban hon ya nazi ye sab bhook ki zameen per fasslain lagin aur inhain ruling elite ne apne azaym ke liye use kiya aur karte rahain ge. Aur vaise bhi insaan 'territorial animal' hai. Tribes aur religions main butta hua hai.
Rang aur nasl,zaat aur mazhab jo bhi hon admi se kamtur hain
Iss haqeeqat ko tum bhi meri tarah maan jao tau koi baat bane ( Sahir)
Lekin ooper vale sher ko samajhne ke liye bhi 'a degree of' aasoodgi chahiye.
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«Reply #40 on: June 23, 2012, 07:16:02 AM »
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Quote from: Khurmi on December 11, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
Kwahish Saab adab arz,
Apki nazam kafi heart felt lagi, duniya ko aap jaise aman passand login ki zaroorat hai, lekin afsos ye hai ke ghurbat aur bhook-o-aflaas logon ko extremist bana deti hai, apne humsaya mulk Pakistan ki hi misaal lijye, bohat se ghareebon ke bache extremist wahabi madrisson main taleem pate hain aur phir unko 'dirty power politics' ke liye use kiya jata hai. Kassab sahib ki hi misaal le lain. Jab tak duniya main ghurbat hai ruling elite  mazhab or nationalism ke naam per politics khelain ge. apko shayad bura lage lekin mazhab aur komiyat donon double edged swords hain, achai aur burai donon ke liye istamal hoti ayi hain, babri masjid ka saniha, Taliban hon ya nazi ye sab bhook ki zameen per fasslain lagin aur inhain ruling elite ne apne azaym ke liye use kiya aur karte rahain ge. Aur vaise bhi insaan 'territorial animal' hai. Tribes aur religions main butta hua hai.
Rang aur nasl,zaat aur mazhab jo bhi hon admi se kamtur hain
Iss haqeeqat ko tum bhi meri tarah maan jao tau koi baat bane ( Sahir)
Lekin ooper vale sher ko samajhne ke liye bhi 'a degree of' aasoodgi chahiye.


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«Reply #41 on: April 24, 2013, 04:50:03 AM »
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