Jazbaaton Ki Lehar mein Kabhi Naa Doobta Hua Koi Insaan Rahe "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 13, 2010, 12:18:36 PM
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Tera Mujh Par Bas Itna Sa Ehsaan Rahe
Main Jab Bhi Dekhu Tujhe Tere Chehre Pe Muskaan Rahe...

Asaan Hai Zamaane Mein Kisi Se Bhi Dushmani Nibha Lena
Kabhi Kisi Se Dosti Nibhaane Ka Bhi Dil Mein Tere Armaan Rahe...

Guzarte Hue Lamhon Se Kabhi Koi Shikayat Naa Karna!!!
Zakhm Khaaye Hai To Yeh Bhi Zarori Hai ke Kuch Nishaan Rahe...

Log Kehte Hai Ke Khushiyan To Mehmaan Jaise Hoti hai
Dua Hai Tere Ghar Pe Hardum yeh Mehmaan Rahe....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Tabdeeliyan Zindagi Ki Tasveer Badalti Hai
Par Jazbaaton Ki Lehar mein Kabhi Naa Doobta Hua Koi Insaan Rahe..

Agar Lafzon mein Bandhi Hui Har Baat Hi Duniya Ke Liye Sach Hai!!!
To Eh khuda Kuch Yuh Kar ke Dil ki bhi Kabhi Koi Zubaan Rahe....

"Khwaish" Duniya Mein Har Cheez Ka Kuch Mol Zaroor Hota Hai!!!
Kisi ke Gham ke Badle Koi Khushi Dede, Aisi Bhi Duniya mein koi Dukaan Rahe...

                       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 12:22:05 PM »
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Wah Khwaish ji Wah kamaal ki poem likhi hai. Bahut hi achha laga aapka andaaze-bayan aur sukhanwari. Marhaba.
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 12:39:47 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne as usual Khwahish jee..Akhri chaar lines toh bas dil ki gehrayion main sama gayi...Bahaut bahaut ache!

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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 01:38:26 PM »
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Wah Khwaish ji Wah kamaal ki poem likhi hai. Bahut hi achha laga aapka andaaze-bayan aur sukhanwari. Marhaba.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Riyaz Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 01:50:35 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne as usual Khwahish jee..Akhri chaar lines toh bas dil ki gehrayion main sama gayi...Bahaut bahaut ache!

Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teh Dil Se shukriya Bhai Rahim!!! Aapne iss Ghazal Ke ehsaas Ko Samjha..humein Aur Kya Chaahiye..Thankyou Soooooooooooo Much icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2010, 04:59:09 PM »
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WAH WAH WAH KHWAISH JI , WAH WAH WAH.... BAHUT BAHUT HI KHOOB, WAH WAH


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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2010, 07:17:33 PM »
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waah khwaish ji waah bahut hi khoob...

Log Kehte Hai Ke Khushiyan To Mehmaan Jaise Hoti hai
Dua Hai Tere Ghar Pe Hardum yeh Mehmaan Rahe....

YE LINES BAHUT HI UMDA HAI...BAHUT BADHIYA JI..Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 03:18:16 AM »
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Tera Mujh Par Bas Itna Sa Ehsaan Rahe
Main Jab Bhi Dekhu Tujhe Tere Chehre Pe Muskaan Rahe...

Asaan Hai Zamaane Mein Kisi Se Bhi Dushmani Nibha Lena
Kabhi Kisi Se Dosti Nibhaane Ka Bhi Dil Mein Tere Armaan Rahe...

Guzarte Hue Lamhon Se Kabhi Koi Shikayat Naa Karna!!!
Zakhm Khaaye Hai To Yeh Bhi Zarori Hai ke Kuch Nishaan Rahe...

Log Kehte Hai Ke Khushiyan To Mehmaan Jaise Hoti hai
Dua Hai Tere Ghar Pe Hardum yeh Mehmaan Rahe....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Tabdeeliyan Zindagi Ki Tasveer Badalti Hai
Par Jazbaaton Ki Lehar mein Kabhi Naa Doobta Hua Koi Insaan Rahe..

Agar Lafzon mein Bandhi Hui Har Baat Hi Duniya Ke Liye Sach Hai!!!
To Eh khuda Kuch Yuh Kar ke Dil ki bhi Kabhi Koi Zubaan Rahe....

"Khwaish" Duniya Mein Har Cheez Ka Kuch Mol Zaroor Hota Hai!!!
Kisi ke Gham ke Badle Koi Khushi Dede, Aisi Bhi Duniya mein koi Dukaan Rahe...

                       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut khub dil ko chu lene wali poetry
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 03:57:17 AM »
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bahoot hi khoob. har ashar pe lakhon daad khwaish bro........pdhkar dil khush ho gaya
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 06:44:12 AM »
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Bhai Khwaish Aadab...
Aur Kya Tareef Karun Samajh Nahi Aa Raha
Humesha Kuch Naya Hi Dekhne Ko Milta Hai Aapse
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz Hai Bhai Yeh Bhi...
Bahut Hi Umda Peshakash...Mubaraq Ho...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Majid Bhai..

Aapne Itna Kuch keh Diya..Ab humein Aur Kya Chaahiye..Bas Aap Humesha Apna Waqt Dete rahiye..Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2010, 08:40:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Rayees Ji..

Aapne Kuch Kaha To nahi Par Aapke Taaliyon Ki Guunj Humein Yahan Tak Sunai De rahi hai.. Shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2010, 08:47:56 AM »
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Wah bahoth qoob , Hazaro dad apki is taqleeq ki nazar , qubool karen khawish sahab .. Khush rahe hamesha ..


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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 09:04:43 AM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,lovely gazal ,kamaal ke likhte ho aap.excellent creation.keep up the good work. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2010, 09:27:33 AM »
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Khwaish ji aapne sachmuch kamaal ka likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



tera bus mujh par itna sa ehsaan rahe.
kabhi aajaun khayalom mein to hothon pe muskaan rahe.

kehte hain ki fasaana hai ye zindgaani.
to fir kyon haqikat ko dekhne ka armaan rahe.
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