Aao ek shuruaat karen....!

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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2008, 12:17:41 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob!! bahut acha likha hai celmira aapne.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2008, 12:18:11 AM »
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bahoot khoob celmira!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2008, 12:27:23 AM »
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bahut saral aur sampporn kavita..behad umda.gustaakhi maaf-aaj pata nahi kyon tark he soojh raha he---

gum unka kaise na hoga
dil mera nahi he patthar
jo chhot gaye woh bhee saathi the
tum kehte ho na dekho mudkar!

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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2008, 01:13:36 AM »
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Khwaish, Pooja, Prateek Ji, aapka behad shukriya jo aapne pasand kiya aur saraha...


Prateek Ji,


Mudkar dekhne se baar baar,
musafir laut nahin aata
Dard bhi yaadain bhi,
par jeevan thehar nahin jaata
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2008, 02:08:59 AM »
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Bohot khoob celmira ji... aap ki sada par ham labbyk kehte hen.


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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2008, 09:44:08 AM »
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Sayyid randeri ji,
 
beautiful creation.bahut accha likha he aapne .

Celmira ji,

accha jawaab.

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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2008, 02:15:30 PM »
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Really very nice Celmira..
Simple words mein bahut badi baat keh di aapne..

Beautiful Replies Parteek ji and Sayyid Randeri ji.. Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2008, 12:17:36 AM »
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Thanks a lot Sayyid, Prateek and Mahiya !!

Sayyid, aapne bohot achcha likha hai, jaldi hi yahan likhenge, abhi to dimagh hi nai chal raha  BangHead
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2008, 12:59:29 AM »
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Hum bhala chorh isko kahan jaayenge
Iske daaman main hi sukoon paayenge

Seencha hai ye paudha bade pyaar se
Ab shaakh-e-gul pe aashiaan banayenge

Dukh dete hain jo, ho unka bhi bhala
Hum tarane khushi ke sada gaayenge
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2008, 12:29:40 AM »
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Sayyid randeri ji,
 
beautiful creation.bahut accha likha he aapne .

Celmira ji,

accha jawaab.

Prateek
 

Shukriya Prateek ji meherbaani aap ki.
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2008, 12:31:25 AM »
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Really very nice Celmira..
Simple words mein bahut badi baat keh di aapne..

Beautiful Replies Parteek ji and Sayyid Randeri ji.. Applause

Mahiya ji himmat afzaai ka shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2008, 12:42:05 AM »
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Hum bhala chorh isko kahan jaayenge
Iske daaman main hi sukoon paayenge

Seencha hai ye paudha bade pyaar se
Ab shaakh-e-gul pe aashiaan banayenge

Dukh dete hain jo, ho unka bhi bhala
Hum tarane khushi ke sada gaayenge

kamaal he bohut hi umda bohut achha likha he aap ne celmira ji.

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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2008, 04:34:17 AM »
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Shukriya Sayyid, bohot khoob !!

Iss bazm ki raunaq kya kahiye,
Iss bazm ke jalwe kya kahiye
Saanson se judi yeh mehfil hai,
Iss mehfil ki rangat kya kahiye
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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2008, 12:11:28 AM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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