Ek nayi shuruaat...!!!

by Talat on July 27, 2007, 03:10:04 PM
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Bohot dino ke baad kuch likha hai....have lost the knack of writing...

Rooth gaye hain jo saathi, un ko manaya jaaye,
Udaas hain jo dil, phir aaj unko hansaaya jaaye

Zindagi ka safar kaise katega ghamgeen ho ke,
Honton par phir se tabassum ko sajaya jaaye

Khwaabon main reh kar jeena nahin hai aasaan,
Zindagi ki haqeeqat chalo sab ko bataya jaaye

Jod len tukde dil ke, khushq kar len aansoo apne,
Dil pe lage zakhmon ko chalo ab miataya jaaye

Kya, jo na mile ek manzil, hain manzilain aur bhi
Ek naye safar pe chalo qadam badhaya jaaye !!
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2007, 05:09:52 PM »
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Badhiya hai !!

nicely expressed !
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2007, 09:10:58 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai!! her ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai Talat!!!

Simple words with deep meaning!!

Good Job!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2007, 10:04:37 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Talat Ji,..
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,..
Hume Seekhne Ko Milaga,..
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2007, 05:31:34 AM »
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nice Talat....
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2007, 05:33:05 PM »
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Talat ji hum naye hai  yoindia pe lekin ap to kafi purani hai leki hume mili nahi abhi tak.
aap aur achi shayari likhe taki hum pad sake
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2007, 01:03:10 PM »
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Thanks Ricky, Pooja, Azeem, Paani and Zehra for the appreciation.....

Azeem and Zehra, I will try to come and write more often...these days due to my busy professional life I am not able to come frequently here.
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2007, 01:32:31 PM »
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Tallu

Bahut khoob ! Nice to see you writing.

Ek sujhaav deta hoon....Yoindia ka frequent flyer program join kar lo tongue3 :lol:
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2007, 02:33:30 PM »
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Very Very Nice one Talat... =D> Usual Smile

It reminded me one of my Favorites from Nida Fazli ji's Collection.

Apna Gam Leke Kahi Aur Na Jaya Jaye,
Ghar mein bikhari hui chizon ko sajaya jaye...

Jin chiragon ko havaon ka koi Khauf nahin,
Un chiragon ko havaon se bachaya jaye...

Baag mein janey ke adab hua karate hain,
Kisi titali ko naa phulon se udaya jaye...

Khudkushi karane ki himmat nahi hoti sab mein
Aur kuch din yun hi auron ko sataya jaye...

Ghar se masjid hai bahut duur chalo yun kar lein,
Kisi rote hue bachche ko hansaya jaye...
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2007, 02:59:33 PM »
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Theek Hai Ji,..
aapko jab waqt Mile Likh Dena,..
thank U,..
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2007, 03:40:12 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir for appreciation and your advice ! Usual Smile

Shikha, thank you....i read long time ago the last line of this ghazal by Nida Fazli somewhere...Thanks for sharingthe whole of it here !!

Azeem...I ll try to be here !
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2007, 11:03:18 AM »
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Theek Hai Talat Ji,..
Intezaar rahega,./
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2007, 09:28:03 AM »
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superbb Talat sis...n thanx for sharing such good nazam Shikha sis

chaliye abb zindagi ko ek naye mod se shuru karein
kuch hum koshish karte hain
kuch intzaam aap bhi karein

purane kisse bhool kar
nayi umeedein khadi karein
har darvaze pe khushiyon ke parde lagayein
har khidki pe baharon ki roshni karein

chaliye aaj zindagi ko naye sire se shuru karein
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2007, 08:35:25 PM »
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Thanks Nikki Usual Smile

Nice lines from you...

Ek shuruaat ki hai, zindagi ko phir se ji rahe hain
Kuch aankh se baha diye, kuch ashk pi rahe hain

Khwaahishain, armaan kisne dekhe poore hote
Khwaabon se bahar, haqeeqat main ji rahe hain
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2007, 07:14:05 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB TALATJI...UMDA LIKHTE HAI AAP

ZINDAGI KE KHEL MEIN TAQDEER
SAJAANA SEEKH LIYA
HUM NE TO AANSU PI PI KE BI
MUSKURANA SEEKH LIYA
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