Aisa lagta hai ab main badi ho gayi hun..charan..

by lovely_charan on December 06, 2013, 11:18:18 PM
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Aisa lagta hai ab main badi ho gayi hun..
Na hansne ki hai fursat, na rone ka waqt..

Ya zamane se hatkar khadi ho gayi hun..
Na rukne ki hai himmat, na girne se dard..

Tez kaanton ki maano ladhi ho gayi hun..
Na lagne ki hai aahat, na dukhne ka marz..

Har iraadon mein ab main kadhi ho gayi..
Na zarurat ka bandhan, na apno ko harz..

Qillat mein hun, par Khadhi ho gayi hun..
Na khoon mein hai zillat, na imaan pe shaq..

Par lagta hai kyun main badi ho gayi hun..
Na dil mein hai rehmat, na zubaan pe jabt..
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2013, 11:24:52 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2013, 11:27:10 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2013, 11:28:06 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on December 06, 2013, 11:24:52 PM
Applause Applause
Usual Smile Usual Smile thank u dear.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2013, 11:28:49 PM »
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Quote from: nikss on December 06, 2013, 11:27:10 PM
very nice
Usual Smile thank u ..
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2013, 11:31:40 PM »
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Wow.... Bahuut achch likhaa hai......
Badaa ho jaaane ka ahsaas bada khushnumaa hotaa hai... Par sahii me dekhe to bahuut kuch chhut jata hai.. Befikr bachpan....... Wo sharrte.... Wo uchal kaud
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2013, 11:34:09 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 06, 2013, 11:31:40 PM
Wow.... Bahuut achch likhaa hai......
Badaa ho jaaane ka ahsaas bada khushnumaa hotaa hai... Par sahii me dekhe to bahuut kuch chhut jata hai.. Befikr bachpan....... Wo sharrte.... Wo uchal kaud

bahut bahut shukriya masoom jee..

bilkul sahi kaha aapne.. jab chhote the toh lagta tha ki kab bade honge aur sare kaam karenge.. ab lagta hai kyun bade ho gaye.. kaash woh din waapas aa jate..
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2013, 11:41:53 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on December 06, 2013, 11:34:09 PM
bahut bahut shukriya masoom jee..

bilkul sahi kaha aapne.. jab chhote the toh lagta tha ki kab bade honge aur sare kaam karenge.. ab lagta hai kyun bade ho gaye.. kaash woh din waapas aa jate..
hmmm bilkul sahii kahaa aapne... Kaash aesa mumkin hotaa.... Par ab mumkin to nahii hai.....
Kabhi-kabhi to ab aesa bhi waqat aata hai ki ye hi yaad nahi rahtaa ki aakhiri baar kab hase the.. Jabki bachpan me din bhar haste hi rahte the
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2013, 11:47:53 PM »
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jee bilkul.. ajkal har baar hansne pe tax jo dena padhta hai khud ko..

tum itna jo hansi ho toh rowogi bahut..
aaj akhbaar mein nikla bhi hai, aur
baahar mausam zara sa sard bhi hai..

hehe
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2013, 11:56:06 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on December 06, 2013, 11:18:18 PM
Aisa lagta hai ab main badi ho gayi hun..
Na hansne ki hai fursat, na rone ka waqt..

Ya zamane se hatkar khadi ho gayi hun..
Na rukne ki hai himmat, na girne se dard..

Tez kaanton ki maano ladhi ho gayi hun..
Na lagne ki hai aahat, na dukhne ka marz..

Har iraadon mein ab main kadhi ho gayi..
Na zarurat ka bandhan, na apno ko harj..

Qillat mein hun, par Khadhi ho gayi hun..
Na khoon mein hai zillat, na imaan pe shaq..

Par lagta hai kyun main badi ho gayi hun..
Na dil mein hai rehmat, na zubaan pe zabt..



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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2013, 11:57:06 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Lovely ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 07, 2013, 12:04:40 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 06, 2013, 11:56:06 PM

achchcha ehsaas hai Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya aapka Usual Smile
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 06, 2013, 11:57:06 PM
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bahut bahut khoob Lovely ji....!!!

thank u so so much hriday jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2013, 01:45:01 AM »
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bht khoob lovely..
aapki lekhni ke to hm ese hi fan hai
aur jb esi khalish ehsaason wali kavita ho to kya baat kya baat..

khush rahie
likhte rahie
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya aapka sarfira ji.. Usual Smile
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