Apna Sa Sapna.

by Bambi on April 11, 2009, 01:29:27 PM
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Koi aapna ho
Koi aapna sa sapna ho
  Koi aapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho
Din ko jo jagaye
Rath ko jo bhagaye
  Aisa koi ek sapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho

Chalo, chalen
Jheel ke uss parr
  Rehthi hai jahan
   Sapno ki chidhiya
Roz subha voh sapno ko thode  
Roz subah voh sapno ko jode
Ik sapna hai
     neela sa,
       peela sa,narangi,
          sunehra sa.

 Aisa koi ek sapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho

Chede voh mujhe jhadiyon ke peche se,
    Dheme se voh aaye  
       Chuke muskuraye
Ek nahi,
 Do nahi
   Theen bhi nahi
Saathon raang voh laaye
Cham chamaye

Aisa koi
  Aaapna sa,
    Sapna sa,
Ek sapna ho.

Masti se voh aaye,
  Dharthi ko gudgudaye,
             Dharthi hase,
Bachchcon ki kilkariyan sunaye.
Didi ko,
  Guddi ko,
    Ammi ko,
       Soni ko.
Sab mil jayen Sapna banjaye
Aisa koi
 Apna koi
   Sapna le aye

Bambi



        
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 01:49:14 PM »
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Gud one Bambi ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 02:38:42 PM »
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Nice Bambi....
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 02:57:11 PM »
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Nice 1 Bambi
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 03:13:56 PM »
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Quote from: Bambi on April 11, 2009, 01:29:27 PM
Koi aapna ho
Koi aapna sa sapna ho
  Koi aapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho
Din ko jo jagaye
Rath ko jo bhagaye
  Aisa koi ek sapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho

Chalo, chalen
Jheel ke uss parr
  Rehthi hai jahan
   Sapno ki chidhiya
Roz subha voh sapno ko thode 
Roz subah voh sapno ko jode
Ik sapna hai
     neela sa,
       peela sa,narangi,
          sunehra sa.

 Aisa koi ek sapna ho
    Koi aapna sa sapna ho

Chede voh mujhe jhadiyon ke peche se,
    Dheme se voh aaye 
       Chuke muskuraye
Ek nahi,
 Do nahi
   Theen bhi nahi
Saathon raang voh laaye
Cham chamaye

Aisa koi
  Aaapna sa,
    Sapna sa,
Ek sapna ho.

Masti se voh aaye,
  Dharthi ko gudgudaye,
             Dharthi hase,
Bachchcon ki kilkariyan sunaye.
Didi ko,
  Guddi ko,
    Ammi ko,
       Soni ko.
Sab mil jayen Sapna banjaye
Aisa koi
 Apna koi
   Sapna le aye

Bambi



         

gud one bambi..
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 05:02:05 PM »
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Hmm, Nice One bambi Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2009, 05:09:50 PM »
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Shukriya jaanasheen ji. Please critique the poem, if you have the time. Thanks !
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Shukriya jaanasheen ji. Please critique the poem, if you have the time. Thanks !

Main Kuch Samjha Nahi,.
Iska Matlab Bambi Ji,.
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Aapki rai main kuch galat likha ho toh zarur batana.
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Quote from: Bambi on April 11, 2009, 05:21:00 PM
Aapki rai main kuch galat likha ho toh zarur batana.
Are Ye Kya Keh Rahe Ho Aap,.

Aapne To Mashallah Bohat Hi Badhiya Likha Hai, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Dil Ka Haal Jab Shayari Mein Likh Dete Hain, Likhne Ke Baad Ye Nahi Sochte, Ke Saamne Waale KO Pasand Aayegi Ya Nahi,.

Bas Dil Ki Baat Khte Rehna Chahiye. Inshallah Kehte Kehte, Sab Seekh Jaayenge Yaar,.

Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne,.

Nice One Again.
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2009, 05:26:44 PM »
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shukriya ... bahut bahut shakriya. Usual Smile
Ek bahut achchi baath samjhadi aaj aapne mujhe. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2009, 06:34:00 PM »
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wah bambi, bahut khoob, wah

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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2009, 06:35:53 PM »
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Thank you jasbir ji. hope you are doing well.
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Quote from: Bambi on April 11, 2009, 06:35:53 PM
Thank you jasbir ji. hope you are doing well.

I am quite well sir .. and am told that some round of me going on here in YO ... I am not sure what ... since i came here after a very long period

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