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Author Topic: "BAABUL TERA GHAR NA CHOOT PAYEGA"  (Read 705 times)
k.shael
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« on: May 10, 2008, 07:57:09 AM »

THIS POEM IS DEDICATE TO MY PAPA

BAABUL AAJ TERI BETIYA KO TO EK BAAT
BATA,SAB KEHTE HAI MUJHE TERA GHAR
CHODNA HOGA...

ISS GHAR KE SAB RISHTOON KO TODNA
HOGA,BAABUL MUJHE NAHI CHODNA GHAR
TERA,NA HI TOOTEGA KOI RISHTA MERA

MUJHE NAHI JANA TUJHE CHOD KAR,KEH DE
TU ISS DUNIYA KO BOL KAR,KYUN DUSRE
GHAR JAO MEIN,

KYUN ISS GHAR KO PARAYA BATTAON MEIN,
NA MUJHE MILAEGI MERI MAA WAHA,NA HOGA
MERA BHAI WAHA....

CHOOTI KE SAATH JHAGAD PAAONGI KAISE,
AGAR BHEJEGA TU MUJHE WAHA,TERE PASS
KYA KAMI HAI MUJHE JO TUJHE CHOD US
GHAR MEIN JAO MEIN,

TU HI BATA AKELI NAYE RISHTOON MEIN,
KAISE KHUD KO DHAL PAAONGI MEIN,TERA
AANAGN NA MILEGA NA HOGA SAATH
SAHELIYOON KA,

TU HI DE JAWAB MERI INN PAHELIYOON KA
BABA TUJHE TERI BETIYA SE PYAR NAHI,MERI
CHOD TU KHUD KI BATA KAISE REH PAYEGA TU
MERE BINA....

PAL-PAL YAAD KAREGA MUJHE PAL-PAL AAWAJ
DEGA,PHIR KON AAKAR TUJHE PAANI KA GILAAS
DEGA,

JAB TU RAAT KO THAK HAAR KE GHAR AAYEGA,
KAISE MERI HASSI KO SUN KHUD KO KHUSH KAR
PAYEGA,BIN TERE AAGAR MEIN HOON AADHOORI
TO TERA GHAR BHI TO SOONA HO JAYEGA....

JANE KISS DESH MEIN BHEJEGA TU MUJHE,
KAISE TUJHSE MILAN HO PAYEGA,BABA EK BAT
BATA APNI BITIYA KO KYA TU USKE BINA REH
PAYEGA...

KAREGA JAB MERI VIDAAI TU USS KHUDA KA BHI DIL
BHAR AAYEGA,KAR ITNI REHMAT MUJHPE MERE BAABUL

TERE GHAR MEIN REHNE DE MUJHE,KABHI TUJHE
DUKH NA DOONGI YE WAADA HAI MERA,BAABUL TU
HI BATA MUJH BIN KAISE HOGA GUJARA TERA...

BAABUL KEH DE USS KHUDA AUR ISS DUNIYA SE,KI
TU MUJHE JUDA NA KAR PAAYEGA,BAABUL EK BAAT
BATA APNI BITIYA KO KYA TU MERE BINA REH
PAYEGA...

BY. K.SHAEL
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"TERI YAAD MEIN BAHUT PAIGAM LIKHTE HAI,TERE SAATH GUJARI WO SHAMM BAAR-2 LIKHTE HAI, WO KALAM BHI TERI DIWANI HO JATI HAI, JISSE "KRISHNA" TERA NAAM LIKHTE HAI"
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« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2008, 08:02:15 AM »

Excellent ! Just superbbbbbbbbb Applause Applause

k.shael aap ko Yoindia par dekh kar bahut achcha laga !

Your poems are full of emotions !

Keep flowing Applause
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« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2008, 08:08:55 AM »

THANX SO MUCH RAJBIR,
IT'S MY LUCK KI MEIN AAP
SAB KE SAATH HO....
YE POEM PAPA KO BATANE KE LIYE
LIKHEI HAI KI MEIN UNKA GHAR NAHI
CHODNA CHAHTI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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"TERI YAAD MEIN BAHUT PAIGAM LIKHTE HAI,TERE SAATH GUJARI WO SHAMM BAAR-2 LIKHTE HAI, WO KALAM BHI TERI DIWANI HO JATI HAI, JISSE "KRISHNA" TERA NAAM LIKHTE HAI"
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« Reply #3 on: June 02, 2008, 03:13:46 PM »

Beautiful Work K.Shael ! Applause
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« Reply #4 on: June 02, 2008, 03:19:53 PM »

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob shally!!
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« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2008, 02:37:01 AM »

THANK U SOOOO MUCH,
CELMIRA JI & POOJA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2008, 03:55:03 AM »

wow..nice emotions K.sheel ji...keep posting
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kuch logon ko bikne ko baazar nahi milte,
kuch log bikne ke liye taiyaar nahi milte
mayoos hua jab bhi gaya, bikne ko "bekarar"
zameer wale ghulaamon ko kharidaar nahi milte


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« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2008, 03:59:51 AM »

THANK U SOOOO MUCH,
BEKARAR JI....
AAP U HI ESS NACHEEZ KE KALAMO KO PADTE
RAHIYE YE NACHEEZ TA-UMAR LIKHNA BAND NAHI
KAREGI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2008, 05:03:48 AM »

"BAABUL TERA GHAR NA CHOOT PAYEGA"

Wah kamaal ka likha hai shael..  Clapping Smiley


DARD BHI HOTI HAI AUR AANSU BHI NIKAL JAATI HAI
BAABUL KA GHAR CHOOT JAAYE TOH JEEVEN SE KHUSHIYAN NIKAL JAATI HAI

EK NAYA GHAR EK NAYE RISHTE HOGE PAR NAHI HOGA WOH BAABUL KA PYAAR
DARD BHI HOTI HAI AUR AANSU BHI NIKAL JAATE HAI

NAHI MILEGI WOH HASEEN MUHABBAT BHARI BAATEIN SOCHKAR AANSU BHI NIKAL JAATI HAI
EK NA EK DIN BETI HOTI HAI PARAYA YE SACH BHI KABHI KABHI JAAN LETI HAI

KUSH HOGA BAABUL JAB BETI JAAYE SASURAL AUR LAAYE KHUSHI KA PAIGAAM
DARD BHI HOTI HAI AUR AANSU BHI NIKAL JAATI HAI


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« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2008, 05:15:50 AM »

THANK U SOOOO MUCH,
HONEYROSE....

SACH KAHA AAPNE DARD BHI HOTA HAI
AUR AANSOO BHI CHALE AATE HAI JAB
JAB BABA AUR BHAI APNI DULARI KO
VIDA KARNE JATE HAI....
BHAI SISAK SISAK KE AAHE BHARTA HAI
AUR MAA GALE LAG CHOOT NA PATI HAI,
SACH MEIN YE BIDAAI BETI KI BAHUT
KEHAR DHATI HAI....
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« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2008, 05:30:05 AM »

Excellent Work K.Shael... Applause
It Reminded me One of my poem on "Baabul"... icon_smile

HoneyRose.. Good One too... Applause
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« Reply #11 on: June 03, 2008, 05:34:01 AM »

THANX SOOOO MUCH,
MAHIYA JI....
IT'S MY PLEASURE KI AAP
SAB NE ISS KALAM KO ITNE DAYS
BAAD HI SAHI PAR PADA TO
THANX....
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2008, 06:57:04 AM »

very nise work shael
aapne yeh ehsaas dilaya ki APNA GHAR sach mein APNA GHAR
hota hai aur use koi chod nahin sakta

jayadi nice work fron ur side too
KEEP IT UP!!
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PATHAR MUJHE KEHTA HAI MERA CHAHNE WALA
MAIN MOOM HOON ...
USNE MUJHE CHU KAR NAHIN DEKHA
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« Reply #13 on: June 03, 2008, 07:14:58 AM »

Thanx Diya Ji,
Ki aap ne hamara kalam pada
aur use saraha.
Thanx again
BY.  K.SHAEL
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« Reply #14 on: June 03, 2008, 07:42:46 AM »

wow ..too good k.shael ji....

Honey di aap ka bhi...
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