be-zubaan......(K_A)

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                               taqdeer  jab  sey  meharbaan  huii.!
                               muflisi  ghar  kii  mehmaan  huii.!!

                               hai  taakhir   kyon   namaaz  mein.!
                               bahut   pahley   hi   azaan   huii.!

                               dekh   dostii   maraz  key   saath.!
                               muskuraatii zindagi pareshaan huii.!

                               jazbaat-o-zameer  kii  baat naa kar.!
                               mohabbat  bhi  abb  be-imaan   huii.!

                               khandher  ko  makaan  kahnaa  meraa.!
                               phir    to     aafat-e-jaan    huii.!

                               sazaa  haqq  kii milii aisi khamosh.!
                               aawaaz  apnii  phir be-zubaan huii.!!


                               
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 05:42:46 PM »
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Bahut bahut Umda KA jee
is behatreen peshkash par dil daad kubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 05:54:27 PM »
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bahut khoob,KA ji.maqta khqs taur se bahut achha kaha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 06:27:59 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH behad umdaa ahsaar kahe hai sabhi ashaar
behad khoob rahe gazab ki gehrai aur umdaa fikra behad
kkhoob...

Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad ..

O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2012, 12:27:14 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 02:42:04 AM »
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                               taqdeer  jab  sey  meharbaan  huii.!
                               muflisi  ghar  kii  mehmaan  huii.!!

                               hai  taakhir   kyon   namaaz  mein.!
                               bahut   pahley   hi   azaan   huii.!

                               dekh   dostii   maraz  key   saath.!
                               muskuraatii zindagi pareshaan huii.!

                               jazbaat-o-zameer  kii  baat naa kar.!
                               mohabbat  bhi  abb  be-imaan   huii.!

                               khandher  ko  makaan  kahnaa  meraa.!
                               phir    to     aafat-e-jaan    huii.!

                               sazaa  haqq  kii milii aisi khamosh.!
                               aawaaz  apnii  phir be-zubaan huii.!!


             
VERY. NICCCEEEEEEEEEEE.
                 
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 04:17:10 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 09:53:20 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 10:38:53 AM »
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                               taqdeer  jab  sey  meharbaan  huii.!
                               muflisi  ghar  kii  mehmaan  huii.!!

                               hai  taakhir   kyon   namaaz  mein.!
                               bahut   pahley   hi   azaan   huii.!

                               dekh   dostii   maraz  key   saath.!
                               muskuraatii zindagi pareshaan huii.!

                               jazbaat-o-zameer  kii  baat naa kar.!
                               mohabbat  bhi  abb  be-imaan   huii.!

                               khandher  ko  makaan  kahnaa  meraa.!
                               phir    to     aafat-e-jaan    huii.!

                               sazaa  haqq  kii milii aisi khamosh.!
                               aawaaz  apnii  phir be-zubaan huii.!!


                               
Waah Khamosh ji kya khoob gazal likhi hai apne matla khoob kaha hai aur Maqta to ek dam se lajwaab raha dheronn daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.........Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2012, 04:23:01 PM »
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Bahut bahut Umda KA jee
is behatreen peshkash par dil daad kubool farmaayen.
THANK YOU

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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 01:15:19 AM »
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                               taqdeer  jab  sey  meharbaan  huii.!
                               muflisi  ghar  kii  mehmaan  huii.!!

                               hai  taakhir   kyon   namaaz  mein.!
                               bahut   pahley   hi   azaan   huii.!
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                               dekh   dostii   maraz  key   saath.!
                               muskuraatii zindagi pareshaan huii.!

                               jazbaat-o-zameer  kii  baat naa kar.!
                               mohabbat  bhi  abb  be-imaan   huii.!

                               khandher  ko  makaan  kahnaa  meraa.!
                               phir    to     aafat-e-jaan    huii.!

                               sazaa  haqq  kii milii aisi khamosh.!
                               aawaaz  apnii  phir be-zubaan huii.!!



                               

bahut hi umda peshkash. daad kabul kariyega zarur  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 04:01:35 PM »
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bahut khoob,KA ji.maqta khqs taur se bahut achha kaha hai.

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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2012, 04:23:08 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2013, 06:21:37 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH behad umdaa ahsaar kahe hai sabhi ashaar
behad khoob rahe gazab ki gehrai aur umdaa fikra behad
kkhoob...

Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad ..

O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile                 



thanx
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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2013, 05:48:27 PM »
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bahut khoob

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