<>*Bhule sab Bhule*<>

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<>*Bhule sab Bhule*<>


Tan bhule hum man bhule
Tujhse milkar sara jag bhule

Thhor bhule thikaana bhule
Apna hum aashiyana bhule

Gairon sang jab lagaya dil ko
Hum apna aur paraya bhule

Saagar ko jab pyasa dekha
Apni khaali h gaagar bhule

Tere pyaar ki dhoop me jalkar
Mamta ki thandii chhanw bhule

Bachon ko jab bhuka dekha
maili tan ki chaadar bhule...!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 12:18:21 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 12:45:30 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful hai ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 01:33:29 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooob kasak ji... daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 02:00:04 PM »
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kya kasak hai. Wah bahut khoob. Doom macha diya.. Last ki lines seedhe dil me utar jati hain. Tan ki maili chadar.. Lajavaab.
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 03:04:55 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 04:14:20 PM »
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bahot khooob...
Gairon sang jab lagaya dil ko
Hum apna aur paraya bhule

Saagar ko jab pyasa dekha
Apni khaali h gaagar bhule
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 04:31:17 PM »
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<>*Bhule sab Bhule*<>


Tan bhule hum man bhule
Tujhse milkar sara jag bhule

Thhor bhule thikaana bhule
Apna hum aashiyana bhule

Gairon sang jab lagaya dil ko
Hum apna aur paraya bhule

Saagar ko jab pyasa dekha
Apni khaali h gaagar bhule

Tere pyaar ki dhoop me jalkar
Mamta ki thandii chhanw bhule

Bachon ko jab bhuka dekha
maili tan ki chaadar bhule...!!

hi kasak... bahot acchaa likha hai tumne, mujhe tumhaare ehsaas aur unme se uthtaa dard nazar aaya hai... lekin mahaz ehsaas hi kalaam ko muqammal nahi karte, baaki cheezon par bhi thoda dhayaan diya karo like qaafiya radeef etc...

tumhaare andar wo baat hai jo kisi shayari likhne waale me hotii hai.... likhti raho, khush raho... aur plzzz meri baaton ka buraa mat maan,naa its just my thought for u sweet heart...
again daad bahot saari...

Sidra.
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 06:00:46 PM »
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Veryyy niceee....
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 08:50:04 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob.... bade hi gehre aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko sameta haia aapne apni kalaam meiN...

Behad khoobsurat kalaam huyi hai... HaaN jee lagta hai YO se door rahkar aap likhna bhool gayi hai...
Par hume yaqeen hai aap jaldi hi dhamakedar waapsi kareNgi...

Is kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aur agli kalaam ke good luck jee...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 06:27:16 PM »
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mast likha hai tumne kasu... bahut khoooob.. Usual Smile
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