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Author Topic: Dhoop Seh Kar Jo Zamaane Ko De Chaau......  (Read 555 times)
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« Reply #15 on: June 01, 2009, 10:59:36 AM »
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subhan allah khawiesh sahab khuda ki kasam aaj paheli baar

 mujhe yoindia per sub se badiya ashar padne ko mila jo apki nazam ka pahela

ashar hai wah wah kya hi badi bath kahi hai apne puri nazam pe savar hai pahela

ashar aur nazam ki tarif karna bus ki bath nahi sahab apko yaad hi hoga mai

shayari ki baadi izzath karta hon gulaam ho gaye hum apke ...wah bhai wah !!

allah apko hamesha khush rakhe aur apka zahen hamesha iss taraha paak o saaf

rahe !! eak shayar ke liye issi badi bath kya ho sakti hai ke ussi ki shayari

se kissi ke sahen badal jayen jaise ke Talat bahen ko ahesaas howa ke rishte

toode nahi jaate kissi bhi wajhe ke liye !! bahoth qoob sahab !! allah apko

izzath de !! Ameen!!


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Qadeer Bhai, Sabse Pehle To Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka,Apane Is Kalam ko Padha Aur Saraha,Yeh Bahut badi Baat Hai Mere Liye..Aapne Iss Nazm Ke Liye Jitni Tareef Ki hai..Padhkar Behad Khushi Hui...Bas Aap Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega..Aap Se Bahut Kuch Seekhna Hia humein..Teh Dil Se Shukriya Qadeer Bhai.. notworthy notworthy
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« Reply #16 on: June 02, 2009, 12:30:04 AM »
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Sach mein bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne Hamesha ki tarah KhwaishJi...

Sach hi hia, insaan agar rishton ki ehmiyat ko samajh jaaye to duniya ke kitne dukh sulajh jaaye...

Lovely to read this work Usual Smile

Thankyou Soooooo Much Angel!! Aapne iss Nam Ke Dard Ko Samjha Aur Saraha..Teh Dil se Shukriya Dost!!
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« Reply #17 on: June 02, 2009, 01:07:03 AM »
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Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

bahut yakeen dila gaye aapke shabd
dost aor dosti par
fantastic composition
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« Reply #18 on: June 05, 2009, 10:17:37 PM »
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Waah KYa Khobn Kaha Hai, Khwaish Bhai, Sachchi, Ek Bohat Bohat Achchi Nazm Pardhne Ko Mili,.


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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« Reply #19 on: June 06, 2009, 05:02:18 PM »
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Mindblowing.. Khwaish Ji.. I really liked the Title.. and the Poetry inside is Fantastic... ! Usual Smile
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« Reply #20 on: June 06, 2009, 06:05:01 PM »
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OH DEAR KYA LIKHA HAI YAAR TUMNE
DIL GAADAN GAADAN HO GAYA
WAKAI BAHUT KHUB
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« Reply #21 on: June 07, 2009, 08:01:49 PM »
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Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

bahut yakeen dila gaye aapke shabd
dost aor dosti par
fantastic composition

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Niraji..Aapne Itna Kuch keh diya,Ke Kya Kahoon Aap..Thanks A Lot For Giving your Time To This poetry..
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« Reply #22 on: June 08, 2009, 12:17:32 PM »
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atiuttam Khwaish ji........Mandir Masjid Charch Gurudware........jis tarah se inhe aapne ek sath prastut kiya h.....kaabile tarif h

           rishte naate sab dhagoon ki tarah hote h........bahoot bahoot khub

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« Reply #23 on: June 09, 2009, 08:49:43 PM »
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Mindblowing.. Khwaish Ji.. I really liked the Title.. and the Poetry inside is Fantastic... ! Usual Smile

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Sophi..Ek Ke Comment Ka Intezaar Sa Rehta Hai.. Usual Smile
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« Reply #24 on: June 12, 2009, 12:28:29 PM »
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OH DEAR KYA LIKHA HAI YAAR TUMNE
DIL GAADAN GAADAN HO GAYA
WAKAI BAHUT KHUB

Thankyou Sooo Much Bro..
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« Reply #25 on: June 28, 2009, 10:47:19 PM »
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atiuttam Khwaish ji........Mandir Masjid Charch Gurudware........jis tarah se inhe aapne ek sath prastut kiya h.....kaabile tarif h

           rishte naate sab dhagoon ki tarah hote h........bahoot bahoot khub

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Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Pooja!!!!

Aapne iss nazm ko Padha Aur Saraha,Yeh jaankar,bahut khushi Hui hai..

Thanks A Million Dost!! icon_flower
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« Reply #26 on: June 29, 2009, 06:27:58 AM »
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Band Palkon Mein Ujaalo Ki Tarah Hote Hai,
Rishte To Zindagi Ki raahon Mein, Chiraago Ki Tarah hote Hai!!!


Rishto Ko Nibhaana Aa Jaaye To Mann Khusbooyon Se Bhar Jaata Hai,
Kaanto Ke beech yeh Rishte Phoolon Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke,Dhoop Sehkar Bhi Jo Zamaane Ko Deta Hai Chaau,
Woh Mandir ,Masjid, Church Aur Gurduwaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Woh Shaks Ka Jeena Bhi Kya Hai Jeena, Jo Jiye Sirf khud Ke Liye,
Doobte Hue Ko Jo Naa Sambhaal Sake Woh To Sirf Kinaaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Yeh Zindagi Aakhir Kya Hai??
Ek Rang-Birangi Chaadar!!!

Rishte-Naate Sab Dhaago Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


a very good creation khwaish ji
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« Reply #27 on: July 05, 2009, 06:30:39 PM »
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a very good creation khwaish ji

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Pooja..
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« Reply #28 on: July 05, 2009, 06:36:51 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,mindblowing,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #29 on: July 11, 2009, 12:28:33 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,mindblowing,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhuji..

Thanks A Lot For Always Appreciaiting My work!!! icon_flower
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