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Author Topic: Dhoop Seh Kar Jo Zamaane Ko De Chaau......  (Read 553 times)
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« on: May 29, 2009, 12:40:39 AM »
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Band Palkon Mein Ujaalo Ki Tarah Hote Hai,
Rishte To Zindagi Ki raahon Mein, Chiraago Ki Tarah hote Hai!!!


Rishto Ko Nibhaana Aa Jaaye To Mann Khusbooyon Se Bhar Jaata Hai,
Kaanto Ke beech yeh Rishte Phoolon Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke,Dhoop Sehkar Bhi Jo Zamaane Ko Deta Hai Chaau,
Woh Mandir ,Masjid, Church Aur Gurduwaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Woh Shaks Ka Jeena Bhi Kya Hai Jeena, Jo Jiye Sirf khud Ke Liye,
Doobte Hue Ko Jo Naa Sambhaal Sake,
Woh To Sirf Kinaaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Yeh Zindagi Aakhir Kya Hai??
Ek Rang-Birangi Chaadar!!!

Rishte-Naate Sab Dhaago Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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« Reply #1 on: May 29, 2009, 12:46:15 AM »
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Kya kahun Dost, aapki is nazm ka jawab nahin..kuch kehne ko lafz nahin mere paas......kitni khoobsurat baat batayi hai aapne.......Ek dam sach kaha Dost, rishte har cheez se upar hain.....to shayad hume chote chote dukh dard bhool kar rihston pe zayada ahmiyat deni chahiye.....Koi rishta badi mushkil se banta hai aur koi bhi cheez, itni important nahin ki uske liye rishton main daraar daal den....aapne apni poem se mann ko bohot shaanti di hai...jo ek gussa sa tha kahin mann main, wo ek dam nikal sa gaya hai ye nazm padh kar......!!

Thanks Khwaish !
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« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 01:35:10 AM »
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wah kya baat hai khwaish
bahut hi acha likha hai aapne
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« Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 03:13:54 AM »
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Bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Khwaish ji, very nice creation bahot dil se likha hai aapne Applause Applause
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« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 11:15:21 AM »
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Kya kahun Dost, aapki is nazm ka jawab nahin..kuch kehne ko lafz nahin mere paas......kitni khoobsurat baat batayi hai aapne.......Ek dam sach kaha Dost, rishte har cheez se upar hain.....to shayad hume chote chote dukh dard bhool kar rihston pe zayada ahmiyat deni chahiye.....Koi rishta badi mushkil se banta hai aur koi bhi cheez, itni important nahin ki uske liye rishton main daraar daal den....aapne apni poem se mann ko bohot shaanti di hai...jo ek gussa sa tha kahin mann main, wo ek dam nikal sa gaya hai ye nazm padh kar......!!

Thanks Khwaish !

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Dost,Koshish Itni Hi Thi Ke Rishto Ko Phir Wahi Jagah De,Jo hamesha Hum Dete Rahe Hai..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Dost,Jo Aapne Iss Nazm Ko Padha,Samjha Aur saraha..

Thanx For Always Being there..

                             Thankyou !
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« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 11:27:24 AM »
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Aapki ye lines pad ke ek baar phir se rishto par aitbaar karne ko dil karta hai, par aab bhi kadam dhagmagate hai ki phir se inn rishto ki wajah se kahiin girr na jao, khair

Aapne bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai Khawish Ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.

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« Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 03:32:29 PM »
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Thankyou Sooooooo Much Dost,Koshish Itni Hi Thi Ke Rishto Ko Phir Wahi Jagah De,Jo hamesha Hum Dete Rahe Hai..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Dost,Jo Aapne Iss Nazm Ko Padha,Samjha Aur saraha..

Thanx For Always Being there..

                             Thankyou !


You are most welcome dear....
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« Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 06:30:11 PM »
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subhan allah khawiesh sahab khuda ki kasam aaj paheli baar

 mujhe yoindia per sub se badiya ashar padne ko mila jo apki nazam ka pahela

ashar hai wah wah kya hi badi bath kahi hai apne puri nazam pe savar hai pahela

ashar aur nazam ki tarif karna bus ki bath nahi sahab apko yaad hi hoga mai

shayari ki baadi izzath karta hon gulaam ho gaye hum apke ...wah bhai wah !!

allah apko hamesha khush rakhe aur apka zahen hamesha iss taraha paak o saaf

rahe !! eak shayar ke liye issi badi bath kya ho sakti hai ke ussi ki shayari

se kissi ke sahen badal jayen jaise ke Talat bahen ko ahesaas howa ke rishte

toode nahi jaate kissi bhi wajhe ke liye !! bahoth qoob sahab !! allah apko

izzath de !! Ameen!!


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« Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 10:47:08 PM »
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wah kya baat hai khwaish
bahut hi acha likha hai aapne

Thankyou Sooooo Much Richa..And Welcome To Yoindia... Usual Smile
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« Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 10:50:30 PM »
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Sach mein bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne Hamesha ki tarah KhwaishJi...

Sach hi hia, insaan agar rishton ki ehmiyat ko samajh jaaye to duniya ke kitne dukh sulajh jaaye...

Lovely to read this work Usual Smile
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« Reply #10 on: May 30, 2009, 12:04:45 AM »
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Bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Khwaish ji, very nice creation bahot dil se likha hai aapne Applause Applause

bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..
Apane Hamesha Se Hausla Badhaya Hai. Usual Smile
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« Reply #11 on: May 30, 2009, 12:20:09 AM »
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Waah KYa Khobn Kaha Hai, Khwaish Bhai, Sachchi, Ek Bohat Bohat Achchi Nazm Pardhne Ko Mili,.
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« Reply #12 on: May 31, 2009, 01:08:57 PM »
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Aapki ye lines pad ke ek baar phir se rishto par aitbaar karne ko dil karta hai, par aab bhi kadam dhagmagate hai ki phir se inn rishto ki wajah se kahiin girr na jao, khair

Aapne bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai Khawish Ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shally...It's Always Nice To Have Comments By you..

Par Rishto Par Aitbaar Karna Hi Padta Hai..Bin Rishto Ke bhi To Zindagi Jeena Mumkin Nahi...Dukh-Sukh Mein rishte Hi Kaam Aate Hai..
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« Reply #13 on: June 01, 2009, 10:52:11 AM »
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You are most welcome dear....

Thankyou Soo Much Dear!!! icon_flower
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« Reply #14 on: June 01, 2009, 10:53:18 AM »
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Waah KYa Khobn Kaha Hai, Khwaish Bhai, Sachchi, Ek Bohat Bohat Achchi Nazm Pardhne Ko Mili,.


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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