Dil Ka Haal!!

by Pooja on February 12, 2009, 06:30:23 PM
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Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat

Aaine main dekhu khud ko  ajj
Dil kahe sun O Pooja meri baat

Anjaane hai raste, kab tak gum dega sath
Pakar kisi ka hath, khushio se kar le ab baat

Anchal jo urre, na pakar kar bandh ajj
Dole jo nayya, kar patwaar se dil ki baat

Man chahe koi to ho, jo puche dil ka haal
Sukh-dukh main jo, hath tham kare mujhse baat

Soye-jaage, hanse –roye, jo mere sath
Meri khamoshi main bhi samjhe, mere dil ki baat

Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat…..


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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2009, 06:35:09 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja...Bahut hi Khoobsurat Poetry lihi hai..

Khaas Kar yeh line bahut hi Khoob The...

"Anjaane hai raaste,kab tak gham dega saath
pakad kisi ka haath,khushiyon se karle baat..  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2009, 09:48:56 PM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2009, 09:59:48 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja...Bahut hi Khoobsurat Poetry lihi hai..

Khaas Kar yeh line bahut hi Khoob The...

"Anjaane hai raaste,kab tak gham dega saath
pakad kisi ka haath,khushiyon se karle baat..  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Shukaria Khwaish ji!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2009, 10:00:33 PM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne Pooja Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Celmira/// meri kavita apke is new Avtaar se thori kam sunder rah gai Usual Smile

Bahoot pyara Avtaar hai!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 09:39:08 AM »
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Thanks Celmira/// meri kavita apke is new Avtaar se thori kam sunder rah gai Usual Smile

Bahoot pyara Avtaar hai!!

So Sweet Pooja Usual Smile Thanks !
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 04:09:52 AM »
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Pooja ji aapki nayi kavita nai mili kai din se to purani padhi..kitne sache man se aur acha likha too nice

Kaash ji ajj kal bahoot busy ho gai hu... jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish karugi...

Old kavitao per ki parshnsa bhi waise utani he achi lagti hai jitani nai kavitao ki... Usual Smile

Meri tukbandio ko app waqat dekar padte, sarhaate hai.. dil se apka shukaria ada karti hu!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 10:31:12 AM »
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Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat

Aaine main dekhu khud ko  ajj
Dil kahe sun O Pooja meri baat

Anjaane hai raste, kab tak gum dega sath
Pakar kisi ka hath, khushio se kar le ab baat

Anchal jo urre, na pakar kar bandh ajj
Dole jo nayya, kar patwaar se dil ki baat

Man chahe koi to ho, jo puche dil ka haal
Sukh-dukh main jo, hath tham kare mujhse baat

Soye-jaage, hanse –roye, jo mere sath
Meri khamoshi main bhi samjhe, mere dil ki baat

Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat…..




Wow Di.. bahoot pyara likha hai aapne


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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 01:42:55 PM »
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pooja ji bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai aapne, baar baar padhne ka mann kar raha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 01:45:34 PM »
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BOhat Achche POoja Didi,.
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 02:02:34 PM »
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Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat

Aaine main dekhu khud ko  ajj
Dil kahe sun O Pooja meri baat

Anjaane hai raste, kab tak gum dega sath
Pakar kisi ka hath, khushio se kar le ab baat

Anchal jo urre, na pakar kar bandh ajj
Dole jo nayya, kar patwaar se dil ki baat

Man chahe koi to ho, jo puche dil ka haal
Sukh-dukh main jo, hath tham kare mujhse baat

Soye-jaage, hanse –roye, jo mere sath
Meri khamoshi main bhi samjhe, mere dil ki baat

Baith akele man soche ajj
Nayan kuch khoje nai baat…..




Bahut khoob. Bahut acchi tarah dil ka haal bayan kiya hai... Clapping Smiley
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